Date: 01/14/11 07:43 pm Title: Checkout Boy
This was beyond cute!!! I like how the tables turned for her that she saw the workings of a hard life. Oh my heart fluttered as I felt the reality of it all. It was so believable, to think that georg went froma hard workin boy to workin his way to a dream as well as finding love. I sound my awww.
Author's Response: Yeah, the idea of the tables turning was what inspired the whole story. Glad you liked it ;D
Date: 01/14/11 02:25 pm Title: Checkout Boy
this is really interesting. i love the second-person viewpoint.and the storyline is unique. amazing job!!
Author's Response: aw, thanks. i try! :D
Date: 01/14/11 01:00 pm Title: Checkout Boy
dawwwwwww, that was actually so freakin cute! *dances* that sounded like it had a happy ending yay. i'm glad she ended up coming down from her high horse :3
Author's Response: ha, me too! she was a spoiled little brat! glad you liked the ending. i didn't want it to be too cheesy. sounds like i got it about right XD