Date: 01/02/16 10:39 pm Title: November- Sex or Love?
will you be continuing this story? I think its starting out great! i would love for more.
Date: 08/22/14 12:55 pm Title: November- Sex or Love?
I hope more is coming in this story, because I love this story
Date: 02/26/12 02:45 pm Title: Billa
I love the initial idea for this story I think its adorable... but I think the chapters are a bit too short and I'm kinda getting confused each chapter I read. Maybe a little bit more in each chapter would help. I dont mean to sound horrible and critical just trying to help.
Date: 12/11/11 03:13 pm Title: November- Sex or Love?
Your writing is perfectly fine, but i find that the chapters are way too short for month long periods , so yeah. just wanted to point that out. Loving the story!
Date: 11/28/11 01:30 pm Title: November- Sex or Love?
please do more this is sooooo cute
Date: 09/15/11 12:05 am Title: November- Sex or Love?
I like Tom in this. I'm glad he isn't a man whore. I think it gives Bill a better shot too. Thanks for the updates!
Author's Response: ^_^ I'll have more soon, hopefully.
Date: 08/29/11 09:45 am Title: November- Sex or Love?
I can't wait for more. I love this. More soon?
Author's Response: Working on it. :-)
Date: 07/23/11 06:19 pm Title: Billa
A simple trick, is to write out more details. Just describe different things :) I use to have that problem, but practice makes things better/ easier :D
Author's Response: Believe me, details are not my forte. I'll try, but I can't promise anything.
Date: 07/23/11 06:36 am Title: November- Sex or Love?
This is really cute :) I like how sweet it is :D I would say though, longer chapters would be nice. But it's a good story nonetheless.
Author's Response: I try writing longer chapters, but I can't. :-(
Date: 07/22/11 09:35 pm Title: November- Sex or Love?
Oh wow. I love it so far.
Author's Response: Working on more.
Date: 07/22/11 03:41 pm Title: November- Sex or Love?
Ugh! Tom should just go ahead & break up with the bitch. It's obvious they are going nowhere. Poor Bill, I hope Tom will see him differently soon....Is The Newcomer written by myself & Ms Maril by chance? If so that's awesome & I hope u enjoy =)
Author's Response: You'll see what happens with them. And that is indeed the story. ;-) I'll review as soon as I get to the last chapter. :-)
Date: 07/22/11 03:38 pm Title: November- Sex or Love?
i love it. mehr bitte
Author's Response: More soon
Date: 07/22/11 05:17 am Title: November- Sex or Love?
Aww billy o: i wonder what happens for a month o.o;
Author's Response: Well, November is a couple parts long, so you'll find out.
Date: 07/20/11 05:57 am Title: October
oo this is getting rather exciting :D
Author's Response: :D
Date: 07/20/11 03:19 am Title: October
Yay! An update!
Author's Response: Another one coming soon.
Date: 07/20/11 02:25 am Title: October
gahhhhhhhhhh....more, more, more!
Author's Response: Will write November ASAP.
Date: 07/20/11 02:19 am Title: October
Hmm...this is a pretty intersting fic. I enjoyed what you have so far, though it is seeming a little bit rushed. I can't wait to see more!! Keep up the lovely work!
Author's Response: It's not rushed, believe me.
Date: 07/19/11 10:42 am Title: September Part 2- The Project
Yay! An update =) I'm really glad that Bill made a friend. And one that is willing to help him at that. Although Bill is pretty smooth on his own lol. I think Bill knows Tom enough to not really need anyone's help tho xD Can't wait til u post again.
Author's Response: We'll see as time goes on. ;-) Another Glee character may join my cast, btw.
Date: 07/19/11 10:15 am Title: September Part 2- The Project
this is such a pretty [?] if i may call it, story! :D I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks. And you may call it however you see it. :-)