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Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/11 10:51 am Title: Chapter 9
Date: 01/27/11 10:51 am Title: Chapter 9
OMG yay! Happy ending! A sequel would be awesome!
Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/11 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 6
Date: 01/22/11 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 6
whoa does michelle still have a crush on tom?
Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/11 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
Date: 01/13/11 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG what's gonna happen next? Is michelle gonna go bak to bill?
Reviewer: Rockstar101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/11 12:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 01/12/11 12:35 am Title: Chapter 1
I think, with a Beta, a banner, and a rework of the summary, not only would this attract more readers, but it's good, and it would get better. :) This is coming from a strictly slash girl. So i say you did fine :)
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