Date: 04/09/11 09:09 pm Title: Part II - Pain management
Interesting, somehow natural and well.thought way to build this story. In a way I found it also odd to observe almost solely on Tom's experiences, but the characvter's you created - Colin and Kleo - were very well written. The angst was... well, heavy. I guess it was expected. Anyway, I loved Tom's stromng, but natural reactions and pain. I really hope things will turn oput okay.
Btw, the way you described the differencies between the twins and their characters were so much in-character and very well done, insightfully. I felt myself nodding to every word of it, becausein a way, that's how they are. And everything you said of Tom: t5hat's why I love him so much and he is so special to me. :)
Date: 04/09/11 07:45 pm Title: Part I - Break your little heart
Woah, I almost missed this fic, but I'm so glad that I didn't. This is freakin amazing! I love the painful, heavy emotions in this, I love the way you described them, the band, the twin bond, everything. It was very beautiful in all the pain it gave me. The way your writing - Tom's thoughts - were slightly disjoint, almost like telling a story and a flood of emotions mixed. There has been many fics of the twins struggling with their emotions, but I think you have nicely unique touch in this. I'm happy to continue to the next chapter now...
Date: 04/06/11 06:06 pm Title: Part II - Pain management
Must have more!
That was so amazing!
I had tears in my eyes for the past two chapters!
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Please please please update soon!
Date: 04/05/11 01:32 am Title: Part II - Pain management
OMG You are pulling at my heartstrings so hard they're ripping right out! ;_; You are a master at writing emotions and drama.
I just checked the warnings and winced. I don't know what you have planned, I don't have any inkling. Major character death? Man, that's gonna be intense.
Your writing is wonderful! I'm gonna wait here patiently for more! Take as long as you want, even months--because high quality amazing content like this is totally worth it.
Author's Response: Thank you! As I said to my mother the other day, it's very flattering and rewarding to know that I can touch people even though English is not my first language. I'm so glad! Oh, and sorry about your heartstrings, btw : ) rnrnAbout the warnings... well, you'll see! But I sure hope it's going to be intense. I already have everything figured out (had for a long time, which is unusual, actually). rnrnThank you very much, anyway! It's very rare to have reviewers that do not press the writer for a quick update, and it's understandable but it's very nice to have someone tell you to take your time. But I'll try to make the wait as short as possible, I promise. rnrnSo, thanks for this wonderful comment. I shall now go and bask in all this amazing praise : )
Date: 04/05/11 12:59 am Title: Part I - Break your little heart
This is incredibly painful to read. :( You write really well, to communicate really strong emotions like this.
Date: 04/04/11 08:29 pm Title: Part II - Pain management
I don't think I've ever read a story this long on here and managed to stay interested. However, this story flows so well I couldn't stop. It's amazingly well written, one of the best I've seen on this entire site. Keep up the amazing work, and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you ever so much! I actually intended to break the second part in two parts so that it wouldn't be too difficult to read, but I just plain forgot and now I can't be bothered to do it : ) I'm very flattered you like the story, really, and you calling this 'one of the best' is such a great compliment for me as English is not my first language. I have to say, your comment motivated me to write for the last part, so if everything goes well the next part should be up soon (in my standards). Anyway, thank you, really, this is such a sweet, heart-warming comment! I hope you'll like the next part!
Date: 01/16/11 10:37 pm Title: Part I - Break your little heart
Oh man... this is good!!! I can't wait for more! I feel so sorry for Bill :( It was so sad! But it was wonderful I could picture everything in my mind and I love that!! Really, really good!
btw, Georg is pissing me off!
Author's Response: Thank youuu! Thank you so much. I'm just writing the second part right now but it's kinda stretching out cause new characters and ideas keep popping in my brain when I don't expect them too. But it should be soon, it's really easy to write. rnI feel sorry for Bill too, lol, I feel guilty for making him live this, but what can I say? I love that you can see everything in your head, it means I achieved my goal - I always see my stories as movies, sort of. rnAnyways, thank you very much, you're a sweetheart! rnAnd as for Georg... well, I think it's his hair. Plus he has something vicious about him, the way I imagine him for the story (although it's understandable, in a way). rnWhat about Tom, then? He's being an asshole too =)
Date: 01/10/11 09:39 pm Title: Part I - Break your little heart
I really am enjoying this story so far!!!! Totally interesting confusion of the twins feelings for eachother! lol
Thanks for sharing!!! >
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I am so very happy you liked it! Hope you like the next part even more!
Date: 01/10/11 05:08 pm Title: Part I - Break your little heart
I love it, so emotional, I love how you made bill so realistic. and hmm *whistle* some jealous Tom would make it even better!
Author's Response: Thank you! I don't know if Bill is 'realistic' though, I've never met him - though I wish I had. But it's what I imagined his reaction would look like (it's quite uneven though). I'm working on the 'jealous Tom' part, you gave me a great idea. rnThanks a lot, and see you soon for the next part!