Date: 07/05/11 11:43 am Title: A hero?
It hurts me so much to read this fic. It's like *scream*
The truth hurts :/
Author's Response: Oh, I won't say I'm sorry, couse in a way is it good that it hurts to read, but yeah, it is a quite sad story I guess :( Thanks for your review :)
Date: 07/05/11 11:36 am Title: A hero?
Tom finally told someone :O
Author's Response: Yeah, he did :) Thanks for your comment!
Date: 07/05/11 02:15 am Title: A hero?
OMG...
Poor little thing D: .. this chapter was really good, you are doing this story extremely entertaining for me, I like it a lot!. Please don't take so long for another chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review, I'm glad you liked it! I do my best, but it takes a little longer sometimes :)
Date: 07/05/11 12:42 am Title: A hero?
wow i'm glad he finally told someone
Author's Response: Me too, let's hope it leads to something good :)
Date: 06/18/11 09:25 pm Title: The begining of the end
Oh...wow. Perfect. Sad, crushing, empty, hopeless. But written perfectly. Really, what else could Tom do? He is just a child. So, so sad.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comment! Yes, what else could he do? I think we tend to trust in the good side, in that things will be easy to solve and that where are a happy ending to every story, but sometimes where just isn't, maybe it this one of those storys? Or maybe not.
Date: 06/15/11 08:03 pm Title: The begining of the end
It is so hard to take the pain Gordon causers to Tom. not physically so much, but mentally. To make him be afraid and cry. That's way harder. oor baby... I can see the chance to get out in the horizon, but it's so far away, almost feeling like nobody will grab it even if they could. *sad sigh*
Author's Response: Good you can se it, it is there, but the question is if it ever will be within reach. I think we often trusts in "easy fixes", but even if someone would know, would it change anything? We want people to act "right" but they hardly ever do. How many time haven't we heard that people around someone who been abused has known,but no one acted on it? Thanks for your review!
Date: 06/14/11 02:31 pm Title: The begining of the end
This chapter is heart breaking truly. Its so sad what is happening to Tom. Sometimes its really hard to read because I don't understand how someone could be subjected to so much abuse and still in a way excuse the behavior from others. Is there a light at the end of this tunnel? Please tell me.
Author's Response: I think that is something quite common for children, or anyone, who are abused, to take the blame for it themself and try to excuse the one hurting them if it is some one close to them. Well, don't want to say to much, but it won't be only this bad the whole story, where are some glimps of hope. Thanks for your review!
Date: 06/14/11 04:04 am Title: The begining of the end
well, this is one of the most depressing things I could have read before going into work. I hope that Georg calls the police or does something in time! I swear I feel like kicking Gordon's ass and strangling him *growls*
Author's Response: Sorry, and yes, a bit depressing, I'm afraid. But now Georg konws what happend to Tom, maybe he can help him? rnThanks for your review.
Date: 06/14/11 12:33 am Title: The begining of the end
This is baaaad so baaaad! I don't know why I thought that Gordon maybe would be gentle with him but no he was sooo cruel and disgusting!
Don't worry for your mistake it was fine for me but I'm glad that you have a new beta now :D
Update soon please I'm dying to know what is going to happen with Tom D:
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll do my best, have almost two chapters written so I hope it won't take too long until I can update again. Thanks for your review.
Date: 06/13/11 04:58 pm Title: The begining of the end
(reply) Ah, okay. Hehe, well I do suggest you use AndeinerSeitenureineWeile for the beta. This is a really good story regardless.
Author's Response: Thanks, and I will, or well, she will :)
Date: 06/13/11 04:43 pm Title: The begining of the end
God I hope this really is the beginning of the end. And then a new beginning. =)
Author's Response: Who knows? Now Georg knows at least, maybe he can help? Thanks for your review!
Date: 06/13/11 04:33 pm Title: The begining of the end
that's intense, I hope tom is okay and I hope he gets help soon. He has a really distorted view of reality right now
Author's Response: Yes, I hope so to, don't think Tom understands at all how wrong he is in this. or well, how wrong it all is. Thanks for your review!
Date: 06/13/11 03:57 pm Title: The begining of the end
Oh gosh.. -.- He only took four pills? Often the proper dose for something is two pills, so double dose doesn't guarantee death. Or a quick one.
And, unfortunately, -- can't believe I'm saying this -- but someone taking an overdose to die is easy to reverse. Just get them in the hospital soon enough and pump their stomach.
Ugh DX Gordon's thinking is so warped beyond belief. Extreme double standards. He wants to "protect" Tom from everyone else when HE is the biggest threat.
There were a lot of spelling and grammar errors, but none where people couldn't understand what you were saying. I think the biggest one is that “rockscool” should really be corrected to "rock school".
Author's Response: Sorry about all the mistakes (but the one you mention isn't one of them, you got to blame Gordon for it, it's the real namne of his school)rnAnd no, he didn't only take four pills ("Pills", drugs like the one he and Gordon took in another chapter), but allso a box of migraine medicine and some painkillers. And yes, I know (am a nurse from the begining) but Tom doesn't, and he took them with the hope it will lead to his death (on the other hand, the drugs could kill him, has no idea what it was he took) :)
Date: 06/13/11 03:51 pm Title: The begining of the end
I was really excited when I saw that this story had been updated, however, I think you might want to have a word with your beta because this chapter was overflowing with mistakes. It was actually quite difficult to read. I do not wish to be rude, but I suggest you reread over it yourself, or I would be happy to beta if for you if you'd like. As it stands, I love this story and I can't wait for more, but reading it with too many mistakes can be quite hasslesome.
Author's Response: I'm glad you say so, and if you mean it, I would love if you liked to beta it for me, my original beta reader has way too much to do right now. I'm swedish and has dyslexia, would I see a mistake my self, it would be a small miracle ;-) But if you want to help me out, please tell me or send me a mail at stellalunanova@hotmail.comrn
Date: 06/12/11 01:32 pm Title: The gift
Great twist! I didn't think Gordon would figure out Bill's involvement. Surely this doesn't bode well for either twin...
I seriously can't wait for the next update, Kaa. I check every day!
At the end of the previous chapter you had me convinced that suicide was Tom's best option...but I'm hoping there will be light at the end of the tunnel. Maybe in the form of Georg???
Author's Response: I wasn't sure he would my self untill I wrote that, this fic seems to have a life of it's own sometimes :)And well... you will see, soon I hope, this was the first part of two from the same day.My beta reader don't have so much time, and it's really hard to find any one else who wants to help me out,this fic seems to have just about everything on everyones no-no list :s
Date: 06/11/11 02:25 pm Title: The gift
Yeeee you update! :D
Gordon was so cruel with the little boy, he ws rape for god's sake! and he was about to rape him again! D: ... this is bad so bad...
Update soon please :-)
Author's Response: Yes I know, feels sorry for Tom my self :( Sorry for the long time between the updates, my beta reader had a lot to do and it's quite hard to find someone else who can help me out,so it might take a while between the updates, I'm afraid. Thanks for your review, I'm so glad any one likes this story!
Date: 06/08/11 07:10 am Title: The gift
It is weird how our minds work. I was truly upset, but not necesary because of sexual abuse (have I gotten numb for it in here?), but for the watch Tom wanted so much. Just like I get more upset when Gordon hits Tom compated to him sexually abusing Tom. Weird, very weird indeed.
Author's Response: Your reviews allways make me so glad, you seems to read it the way I want it to be read. In a way I want the reader to become aware of the weird things in our minds,that we can go numb to the abuse, but react over the gift in this part, or having a mixed feeling of arousal and disgust then it comes to the sex parts. I think it's only human to react that way, but it's intresting to see and hear about how others react to something I written my self. Thanks for your review :)
Date: 06/08/11 07:04 am Title: A merry Christmas?
Oh, so sad... So desperate and sad. It's exhausting in a way to read all this abuse. In a way it is interrestinbg, conflicting, but very heartbreaking. Oh, I don't know... *sigh*
Up to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yes, sad, absolutely. And I know it's a lot of it in this fic, but hopfuly it will serves it's purpose.rn
Date: 06/08/11 03:11 am Title: The gift
god, please tell me he gets caught now.
Author's Response: Maybe, we will see, are quite a few chapters left. Thanks for your review!
Date: 06/08/11 03:01 am Title: The gift
I honestly thought it couldn't get worse >.< ;_;
Author's Response: Well.... this was the first part of two of the same chapter (forgot to write that) and I'm afraid it might get even worse... :(