Date: 05/01/23 12:15 am Title: The Switch
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 03/29/12 05:30 am Title: The Switch
One of the absolutely hottest and most intense stories on this site. It was a marvel and goes straight to my favorites.
Date: 01/13/11 04:08 pm Title: The Switch
Aww, thank you so much! Maybe the twins of the fic will make a comeback one day :)
Date: 01/12/11 07:34 pm Title: The Switch
Oh wow! That was a mind fuck at its purest. One of the absolute bests of switch/cross dressing fics I've ever read! Damn, that was HOT.
Hot and fascinating and totally screwed my brain raw. From the steamingly hot scene when they meet to the utterly sweet fluff in the end. You created an awesome twin fic, which was not about sex, but about them. I liked how this was not actrually cross dressing, but cross imaging. The ending tied up all the details of them being.... one... Just the way I like it.
Amazingly hypnotizing amd goes straight to my fav's!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much Amdee. I am a huge fan of "Depraved" by the way, wonderful work. I truly wish there were more with those characters :)
Date: 01/09/11 10:16 am Title: The Switch
Hehe, nice naughty fantasy you have going on in this fic. :) I LOVE fics where the twins trade clothes normally, but yours was different somehow... I think it's cuz they weren't fucking eachother, they were fucking themselves instead... if you get what I mean. Very interesting... you made me feel their connection as brothers, their understanding, trading places, and not so much the twincest "I'm in love w you" romance u normally get with twincest. Very interesting angle.
Personally I think the story could have done without the drugs... I think u could have found a better way to bring about their sexing without telling me Bill was doing lines of Oxy and weed, IMO it was just unnecessary.
There were also times when the dialogue felt stiff, especially around the time they told eachother why they dressed like the other, and more towards the beginning I think there were times you could have cleaned up the quality of your writing. Not bad though.
You picked it up well and this is a very intriguing little story. The twins trading clothing is such a turn on for me! Great imagery with the mirror and I'm impressed that I wasn't ever confused as to which Bill, 'Bill', or Tom, 'Tom' was talking. Well done. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review Ema. rnrnI agree with you as far as the drug use is concerned. To be completely honest, the original intention of this story had everything to do with drug use, and very little to do the narcissism that ended up being the end result of the fiction. My focus here was entirely on Bill's desperate need for release, whether it be his drug use of his clothing play. I do believe that the central focus was lost as soon as I was sucked into the twincest. The ending was entirely unplanned and I do believe I got a bit swept away. I also agree that the dialogue felt forced at the end of the story, though I don't really know why.rnrnThank you very much :)
Date: 01/09/11 03:59 am Title: The Switch
wow. narcissism at its very finest. ;-) great job!
Author's Response: Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed.
Date: 01/08/11 05:56 pm Title: The Switch
Well. Imma curse just a bit here: Fucking. Amazing.
Date: 01/08/11 02:27 pm Title: The Switch
That brought new meaning to the phrase "cross-dressing". That was mouthwatering. I would not be upset at all if you decided to continue this!
Author's Response: I am considering it, not sure of the driving force behind the concept yet though.
Date: 01/08/11 02:09 pm Title: The Switch
Very vivid and very hot! The fantasy and power play here was incredibly well done.
Date: 01/08/11 08:44 am Title: The Switch
holy mother...I don't even know what to say to this...hot, sad, hopeful...gawd...everything I enjoy in a fic...plus one thing I dont norm ally do...I dont normally go for the drug use thing...as likely as it is I just dont care for reading it...but wow...it worked...good job
Date: 01/08/11 04:25 am Title: The Switch
Really interesting, really unique and really well written. I enjoyed this!
Date: 01/08/11 04:20 am Title: The Switch
Wow...I loved the atmosphere of this. In theory, the idea of them putting on each other's clothes is just funny, but it ended up being ridiculously hot. Well done.
Date: 01/08/11 03:35 am Title: The Switch
I'm still stuck on Brit... I had to youtube stuff man.. at 3 a.m. *__* xD
I had decided to check on one of my stories, and refreshed the recent's, and saw this, and needless to say, my story went forgotten haha.
There were some things that were a bit confusing, nothing major, but other then that, i enjoyed it.
Good job. :D
Oh, and i have to say, my favorite line, "[Hell no! Share motherfucker!]" Made me lol. xD