Date: 01/10/11 08:15 pm Title: # 4 [Epilogue]
I loved this little story so much, and I'm looking forward to the sequal! :)
Author's Response: I'm so happy to read this! I'll try post the sequel soon! *kiss*
Date: 01/09/11 04:31 pm Title: # 3 [You were my first kiss, now you are my first everything]
O_o
Welll...
I must say, I've "refused" to read BotTom before, cause I'm SO sure Bill is for Bottom and Tom is for Top, I mean c'mon, their names say it all! Though I've started to try and get to read it a bit more and.. Well, I realized ten rows before the end 'Hey, I'm actually reading BotTom right now and I didn't notice it!' You know, I knew I was reading BotTom, but I didn't feel like *Oh, I'm reading BotTom... *yack*'
Tom was as shy as he was adorable and and and. *giggle*
Author's Response: Believe me, I know what you mean! Some time ago I simply couldn't read BotTom because it simply was something I couldn't handle really well; I think that to me it was really horrible image that Tom would have something shoved his ass! But then I was readin one story whose name I can't remember, oh hey! It was 'Basai Serie' from Gaja! xD ... Well, anyway, I read through this story and even if it's Tom/Tom pairing I was all the time like: "Hey, fuck him already!!" and when it happened I was so ... well, I felt incredibly. The thought of Tom on the bottom, it was really great (maybe it was because other Tom did the topping xD). Neverthless, since then I'm able to read BotTom and lately I even perefer it because when he's the one bottom it feels as if he was the weaker one, too, which I love! ... Well, neverthless, I'm really happy to read that you was able to go through this chapter and read BotTom! I'm really happy you made it through! *kiss & huggs*
Date: 01/09/11 12:09 pm Title: # 3 [You were my first kiss, now you are my first everything]
ok, I'm going to be honest and tell you it wasn't the greatest sex scene ever. But, it it was, by far, not the worst. I really think it was mostly just the language barrier thing, because your sentance structure is a little bit off. Once I got beyond that though, the chapter was really awesome. I'm really hoping everything turns out well for Tom in the end of this. Can't wait to see the rest of it! Congratulations on your first, English, Bot!Tom sex scene. It turned out pretty well over all.
Author's Response: Thank you for your sincerety! I really appreciate it! I know it wasn't the best sex-scene and I'm not going to be upset because someone told me so! Though the language barrier will be soon removed because this chapter will be later today re-posted with the beta-read! So if you want you can read it later again! :)) But I'm really happy you still enjoyed the chapter! and thank you for congratulations! :D It's good to know that I didn't messed up that much! Thank you! :)
Date: 01/09/11 11:47 am Title: # 3 [You were my first kiss, now you are my first everything]
Nononoooo, you're never bad-sex-writer, Deni, don't be the modest. I know all your stories in Czech, and you always wrote this great.
You know how I'm doing on the English, so I can assess how you did it in a different language, but as I could read it, it was perfect.
Bill is a great character in this story, he is so affectionate with Tom. I hope that the both meet up later for the next meeting when Tom reaches age and leave the orphanage.
I think that you have to translate into Czech, it will be successful at home. :-D J. :o)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Jani! Yes, it's true you read all of my stories in Czech, where I wrote good amount of sex-scenes but I'm still nervous about it; when I know how good you or Lady or Ainikki are at writing sex, I'm just a begginer here! Though, thank you! I really appreciate it and it means a lot to me that you think it was perfect! Thank you! ... As for the later meeting of the two; well I am planning on sequel so there is really a high chance the two of them will meet up again! :)) rnrnAnd if you say sou, I'll tranlsate it then! :D Maybe when it will be a translation it will have bigger attention from girls! :D Thanks! :-*
Date: 01/09/11 10:16 am Title: # 3 [You were my first kiss, now you are my first everything]
You don´t need to be nervous, the sex-scene was hot, good job :-)
I like how you are showing Bill... He really doesn´t have an ideal character, he is rude and in "diva-mode" but I like it. I think the whole adventure with his "Tomi-boy" could help him to open his eyes and show the really important things and priorities.
I am curious how you finish this. I think happyend isn´t very realistic, but maybe an open end with potential to a sequel?.... I can´t wait to read the last chapter (you wrote in the beginning that there will be 4 chapters of this...)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm really glad you think so! I'm always nervous when it comes to sex-scenes. So yeah, thank you! Anyway, you're curious about the end? I can tell you one thing, it won't be a happy end, not at leat in the exact meaning of the word. But I'm planning on writin a sequel, yeah :) I already started but I don't know when it'll be on 'coz I don't have much time right now! But there will be a sequel if I can help it! Thanks for your review!
Date: 01/09/11 03:33 am Title: # 3 [You were my first kiss, now you are my first everything]
I left one review but I can't really remember what I wrote lol. But, OMG u seriously have nothing to worry about! The sex was amazingly written. Fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: I am not sure which review was from you 'coz I can't see nicknames on my email! But hey... thank you for posting again! *kiss* I'm so glad you liked it! Since it was my first sex scene in English I was pretty much nervous, but thank you!!
Date: 01/09/11 02:19 am Title: # 3 [You were my first kiss, now you are my first everything]
Good lord---*fams self*...these two are damn hot together. Love Bills character in this story. I really enjoy stories with Bill being the stronger character for a change!! Cannot wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Well, lately, I love Bill as the stronger one, too. I have no idea why but I just love it and that's exactly why I came up with this story!! Thank you!! Next chapter should be here soon, Jax is working on betaread but I won't post it without beta again. :)
Date: 01/09/11 12:44 am Title: # 3 [You were my first kiss, now you are my first everything]
*waits patientlly for more*
Author's Response: There won't be more until Jax will do the betaread, I'm sorry! But it will be soon!
Date: 01/08/11 07:01 pm Title: # 2 [The Christmas’ concert and Transformer’s t-shirt]
This was great, Deni! You got an amazing idea. I read the two parts together, and I'm excited how it goes. I really like your idea that Tom will lose good opinion of his idol before he met him. It was important to Tom, otherwise he could never behave so normally the Bill, as he acted. Amazing, I'm curious to see how it goes. J. :o)
Author's Response: Awww, thank you, Jani! I'm so glad you got to read this! And your review made me happy - as always! :)) The part where Tom lost his idealism of Bill was written based on me; I mean I'll never be able to act cool with my idol if I still had a high opinion about him! So, yeah... :) Really, thank you for your review! :-*
Date: 01/08/11 05:56 pm Title: # 2 [The Christmas’ concert and Transformer’s t-shirt]
well, good :-) I like it :) Update soon please?
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)) Well, there already was more but my sister's nephew accidently deleted it while he was playing some interenet game on my computer. I'm waiting for it to be publish soon again! :)
Date: 01/08/11 05:53 pm Title: # 2 [The Christmas’ concert and Transformer’s t-shirt]
I didn't like the fact that Bill was such a jerk at first :( But I guess kissses make up for it! XD Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Bill being the arrogant star, you couldn't wait anything else of him :) But he surely did make it up to Tom! :D Well, there already was more but my sister's nephew accidently deleted it while he was playing some interenet game on my computer. I'm waiting for it to be publish soon again! :)
Date: 01/08/11 02:56 pm Title: # 2 [The Christmas’ concert and Transformer’s t-shirt]
really good :D
Author's Response: Thanks!! :D
Date: 01/08/11 02:39 pm Title: # 2 [The Christmas’ concert and Transformer’s t-shirt]
Really good chapter! More.
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Date: 01/08/11 02:15 pm Title: # 1 [Prologue]
Will there be a new chapi soon? *_*
Author's Response: There already was but my sister's nephew had my laptop and played with "buttons buttons" as he squeeled happily, and during it deleted the chapter - which I have no idea how he could manage to do it - but I already re-posted it! :(
Date: 01/08/11 02:08 pm Title: # 2 [The Christmas’ concert and Transformer’s t-shirt]
This fic is playing out like Tom's wildest dream come true :D
Imagine being an orphan and your dream person gives you a kiss *dreamy sigh*
Author's Response: Tom never dared to dream about being kissed by Bill! :D But I guess you're right, this is his dream that come true :) Thank you for your review!
Date: 01/08/11 01:17 am Title: # 2 [The Christmas’ concert and Transformer’s t-shirt]
oh my god SO good! I was all heart broken and nearly crying for Tom's illusions being shattered...and then I was so happy for him yet just as confused and discombobulated as he was about the kiss and I just can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry about the sad part and the confusion! Though you will learn more about that simple kiss in next chapter - a bit more then just a kiss!
Date: 01/08/11 12:44 am Title: # 2 [The Christmas’ concert and Transformer’s t-shirt]
Good lord...Tom want's more and so do we!!!!!!! The last part, though short, was very erotic and um...i'd love more!
Author's Response: Well, more gonna be here today/tomorrow and I hope you'll be satisfied! Thank you for your review, it's good to know that even that short part was erotic to you! Then I don't have to be nervous about next chapter!^^
Date: 01/07/11 01:41 pm Title: # 2 [The Christmas’ concert and Transformer’s t-shirt]
Turns out Bill's not as perfect as he looks
Author's Response: Well, nobody's perfect :) Though you will "learn" more about Bill in next chapter^^
Date: 01/07/11 01:09 pm Title: # 2 [The Christmas’ concert and Transformer’s t-shirt]
O wow! u've managed to make me sad, pissed, happy & aroused ahaha. & all in one chapter! I love it!
Author's Response: Then I guess I am just great! *a bit bigheaded* :D Nope, I'm really glad I could manage to do so because every story is good only when it has some drama, happiness, sadness and a bit of sexual atmoshpere! Well, the last one just in case of twincest and slash stories :D But anyway - thanks for your review! I'm so glad you love it!
Date: 01/07/11 01:00 pm Title: # 1 [Prologue]
Awwwww teenage Tomi is so cute ;)
Author's Response: He is, right?? :)) I am in the stage when I love teenage Tom the most! Have no idea why, but I simply love the innocence and thy way he acts :) I think he was so cute as a teenager, and maybe that's why I like writing him in this role :))