Date: 02/10/11 12:51 am Title: Chapter 10
Wow! This chapter was good! Finally Tom is interacting with someone else besides Bill! :D
Wonder what's going to happen between those two!
Author's Response: Tom's a waiter lol. He interacts with tons of people, it's just usually unimportant people. Just wait and you'll see~
Date: 02/09/11 08:18 am Title: Chapter 10
Get worse?? I'm not sure that's how the boys look at it *giggles* Great chapter honey, poor Bill, he seems to be confused by things. Why doesn't Tom stay and sleep in the garden? I mean sure it doesn't get dark but if he lay in the shade of the tree? Is there shade? O.o I can't remember, damn. He could still stay with Bill though...right? More please sweetie *basket of chocolate*
Author's Response: I guess you have a point there XD Yes there is shade lol. But Tom would rather sleep on something cushioned and he'd feel too awkward sleeping while Bill is doing whatever he does.
Date: 02/09/11 04:55 am Title: Chapter 10
too cute. i love this story, thanks for the update. =)
Author's Response: Aww :3 No, thank YOU
Date: 02/07/11 07:00 am Title: Chapter 9
What I'm wondering, if he's not real, how is he able to feel or how is Tom able to feel him…?
Do I make any sense? xD
Author's Response: I get you. Whether he's real or not, he's still solid XD
Date: 02/07/11 06:50 am Title: Chapter 8
Loved the chapter! Though I'm wondering why Bill doesn't want to go back to Tom's world D:
Maybe it's because of all the things he feels over there? :o
Author's Response: I can't say without spoiling XD You'll just have to keep reading.
Date: 02/07/11 06:32 am Title: Chapter 7
OMG a kiss! *_*
Now that's when everything turns out to be amazing, feelings getting involved and a non-real-person
Author's Response: I hope I don't disappoint? XD;
Date: 02/07/11 06:16 am Title: Chapter 6
Bill is so cute
Author's Response: Hahaha thanks <3
Date: 02/07/11 05:54 am Title: Chapter 5
Explaining all those things make everything seem to be so complicated @_@
I'm excited to read what's next!
Author's Response: Doesn't it? XD I could never do it personally. I hope you enjoy the rest~
Date: 02/07/11 05:40 am Title: Chapter 4
Bill is really cute and innocent.
Though now I'm still wondering what's going on with him since he doesn't know a thing about the "real world" or about anything :O
Author's Response: Yes, Bill is innocent but it's not his fault lol. You'll just have to wait and see!
Date: 02/07/11 05:26 am Title: Chapter 3
Wow! :O Now what I'd like to know is what's going on with Bill :O
If he's real or not!
Amazing!
Author's Response: You won't find this out until the end of the fic XD Sorry...
Date: 02/07/11 05:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow :O
Detailed fanfics are my favorite ones! Looks promising!
Author's Response: Thank you <3 I worked very hard to make the first chapter as perfect as possible ;_;
Date: 02/06/11 03:24 am Title: Chapter 9
Eeep! Tom gave him the sex section!! I love the kisses and how they seem to be so comfortable with each other but I'm worried about Bill. He's retreating into himself and he seems to be unhappy with things. Like he doesn't like the way he's changing. If he stays in the painting do his needs for food and water stop? I'm really curious as to how and why Bill knew he was waiting for Tom and what it all means. Can't wait for more honey. *squishes*
Author's Response: I wish I could answer all of your questions but then I'd be spoiling the entire fic for you XD All I can say is that you're going to have to wait and see. I hope the wait will be worth it. :3
Date: 02/06/11 03:07 am Title: Chapter 8
Awww Bill's starting to really feel emotions, that's so sweet. I love that he admitted that the outside world scared him and he was overwhelmed and that Tom was readily accepting of this. I can understand Tom's concern though that Bill might not want to enter the outside again. It's wonderful watching them just do simple things like play games and tickle, I like that Bill's innocence is still firmly intact. That will be an interesting time for Tom when Bill learns more about the real worlds 'darker' side. *runs to the next chapter*
Author's Response: Mhmm, Bill has a problem when it comes to admitting to others when he needs help and when he's in over his head. I'm very happy to know that you have an emotional response to the story!
Date: 02/05/11 09:30 am Title: Chapter 9
KHKHKHKHKHK :D:D:D Sweet :)
Author's Response: Thanks XD
Date: 02/04/11 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 9
awww, poor bill..... tom's world is scaring him more than he'd like to admit, innit?? :D great job!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yes, it is XD thank you!
Date: 02/04/11 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 9
thanks for the update, i'm very interested to see how this all plays out.
Author's Response: You're welcome. I'm glad to be keeping your interest :D
Date: 01/30/11 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 8
huh.... wonder what exactly tom's hiding, coz i'm pretty sure he's hiding something... i really like this story and hope to see more of it soon!!!!!
Author's Response: I think it depends on your definition of hiding. XD I'll post an update soon.
Date: 01/30/11 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
interesting changes. I wonder why Bill wants to stay there all the time now. I want him to go out and become a real boy. =) Thanks for the update, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks :D You'll have to stick around and see what happens~
Date: 01/30/11 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
DEAR JESUS. MORE! MOOOOORE!
I don't have any constructive criticism to offer nor something useful either, but this is so damn cute and I'm all bouncy and happy. :3 I hope you'll write more soon.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you :3 I'll update soon.
Date: 01/26/11 03:14 am Title: Chapter 7
its like Pinocchio, he is turning into a real boy. =) i loved it!!!
Author's Response: Ah, I see you're catching onto that. You'll have to stick around and see~ :D