Date: 04/18/11 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 13
I loved this story!! It was really sweet! I've been without internet for the last few days so I saved this story so I had something to read, and I think I forgot to save this last chapter, so I kind of freaked out yesterday x'D But I really liked the way you ended it :) Great story!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked the ending and thanks for reading :3
Date: 04/16/11 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 5
When you put the explaining parts in therms like you did, we all sound so freaking superficial... That is a table: you put stuff on it. That is a TV: we watch it for entertainment. It is ridiculous. That we have somewhere to live and that we devide that into seperate rooms, based on the function of which the room should provide for us. It is so logical but at the same time so pointless and overrated!
The basics are so fun to watch by the way. The mirror, so classic, haha I loved it :)
Author's Response: Yay, you caught on to that XD Tom sees these advancements as a way of simplifying their lives, while Bill sees how it can be functional but still thinking everyone is actually complicating>/i> everything with so much stuff. Thank you for sticking with the story!
Date: 04/16/11 06:03 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh-oh this can go soooo bad!
Author's Response: Haha, that's why I cut the chapter where I did XD I hope you like the rest of the story. :3
Date: 04/16/11 05:49 am Title: Chapter 3
Wow that sure is some strange dimension! It's fun though :)
Author's Response: It is a strange place, yes :) Thank you for the review!
Date: 04/15/11 10:18 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a very good piece. I'm surprised. I never thought I would find anything quite like this on tokiohotelfiction. Your words are very precise, deliberate even, although they don't feel forced. It is very beautiful ctually. The sentences flow like the dreamworld Tom is experiencing.You made me very happy. I'm surprised, thank you :)
Author's Response: When I came up with the storyline I couldn't recall ever reading anything similar whether it was on here or anywhere else. It made me nervous about how it would be received. I'm glad you're pleased XD
Date: 04/11/11 01:38 am Title: Chapter 13
Finally I got a chance to read this last chapter. And it ended perfectly, which is exactly how I expected it to end XD Great story line, and very well written. I hope to read more from you in the future :D
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked the ending XD I wonder how you would've reacted if I did go with the sad ending >.> Thank you for reading.
Date: 04/10/11 01:21 am Title: Chapter 12
I meant 'I'm reaching the end' in my last reveiw, lol.
Great chapter! Very emotional. Although I'm sad to be reaching the end, I also can't wait to see what happens XD
Author's Response: You have only one chapter left! I cross my fingers that you like how it all ends and thank you for reviewing every chapter so far XD I love seeing ~the journey of some people as they read it from beginning to end. :)
Date: 04/09/11 11:14 am Title: Chapter 13
OMg yes, I'm so happy with your decision! An ending with them being separate is never the right choice! And I don't think they would have been truly happy for long if they stayed in Bill's world. I'm so happy with the ending you chose. It's beautiful and perfect and I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing this fic with us. I'm very glad this fic got featured so I had the chance to know about it and read it! =)
Author's Response: I was very close to writing the sad ending! But when I sat down and tried to outline how I would do it I just couldn't XD I'm so happy you had the chance to read it too :3
Date: 04/09/11 11:08 am Title: Chapter 12
That was really beautiful, so intimate and full of love! But now the portal is closed... I hope Bill won't be too mad and that it'll be okay somehow...
Author's Response: This was the first smutty-ish thing I ever had to write so I was insecure about it XD I'm glad you liked it. :3 Bill wasn't mad, he was just scared and worried lol.
Date: 04/09/11 10:59 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh no! I don't even know what to say. Tom was kinda stupid to not talk to Bill about it, but I hope that Bill can forgive him cause it's too sad when they're not together ='(
Author's Response: Yes, Tom was dumb lol. But he also didn't know the root of Bill's inner turmoil so he had no idea he was only making it worse. Gotta cut him just a little slack XD
Date: 04/09/11 10:48 am Title: Chapter 10
It went better than I thought it would with the Gs! I guess Bill is getting used to being in Tom's world, which is a really good thing ! Love reading about the two of them, it's adorable how their relationship is developing !
Author's Response: Bill was absorbing more info through his observations from books, people, and the one movie he saw than even he and Tom realized. At times I wondered if the progression of their relationship was too sudden, but I'm glad you didn't think so!
Date: 04/09/11 10:42 am Title: Chapter 9
Can't wait to see Bill's reaction after he read about sex =P They are just adorable together...
Author's Response: Sex is really technical in encyclopedias so mostly all Bill really read about was the functions of hormones and their effects on the body, human reproduction, etc... not the actual mechanics of it XD So mostly he was a little confused... as always XD
Date: 04/09/11 10:36 am Title: Chapter 8
I don't think it was rush. Their relationship is just so cute and I really love how it's developing ! I wonder why Bill doesn't want to leave...
Author's Response: I'm happy that these two keep you coming back for more XD I'd say 'wait and see and you'll know' but you already finished the story so I guess you already know why lol.
Date: 04/09/11 10:28 am Title: Chapter 7
Omg they kissed! It was so so cute. Can't wait to see how it'll go from now on!
Author's Response: This was the first truly pivotal point in the story and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 04/09/11 10:19 am Title: Chapter 6
Awww! This story is so heart warming. I love it. Bill really is like a child and I find it absolutely adorable!
Author's Response: Trying to combine childlike innocence and the natural maturity of someone older was a challenge and I'm glad to know I was successful <3
Date: 04/09/11 10:07 am Title: Chapter 5
Bill is so adorable, learning about everything! And Tom is so patient with him. I love these two! This story is really cute and entertaining!
Author's Response: It actually wasn't my intention for Bill to be adorable, but people seem to think so anyway XD I guess it just sort of happened that way.
Date: 04/09/11 09:54 am Title: Chapter 4
Bill is in TOm's world! That's gonna be very interesting, reading about him experimenting everything for the first time! Awesome chapter once again!
Author's Response: Bill learning was something that was incredibly difficult to write @_@ I'm glad you like it XD
Date: 04/09/11 09:48 am Title: Chapter 3
They met! This is all so fun and intriguing! Really original plot, I love it.
Author's Response: When I was plotting this I realized the plot was a bit... different and I was worried as to how it would be received. I was so happy to see you and others like it <3
Date: 04/09/11 09:41 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh! I love the ``come and find me``! This is all so mysterious. Really well written fic, I enjoy it a lot so far!
Author's Response: I think a lot of the reason people keep reading it is BECAUSE I had to be so mysterious with it XD I feel like I was successful because it has piqued your interest.
Date: 04/09/11 09:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow! Really interesting first chapter! Congratz for being featured! I love when I haven't read the new featured fic yet =) This is really good and I'm intrigue to see where you're gonna take it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very grateful that it got featured :) I'm glad you liked the beginning.