Date: 01/27/11 07:26 pm Title: Five Words
Grr the last bit of my review got cut because I added a stupid heart T.T but I think I was just saying that I absolutely loved it xD
Date: 01/27/11 07:22 pm Title: Five Words
..... Brb, crying forever!!!!!!
Oh man.
You already know what I think of most of this so I'm not gonna say it again cause it's tricky to type on this phone. But for this ending I am just gonna say that you don't have to write an alternative version for me anyway because this was just fantastic and heartbreakingly sad! ;_; I loved it ;_; omg. I was pondering what those five words would be and while I hoped it was 'I love you too' I didn't think it was
Author's Response: That's totally what I told you when you asked for an alternate version. 'Wait until it's finished, and then decide.' XD I was pretty sure you would change your mind. ^^
Date: 01/27/11 05:56 pm Title: Five Words
wow. I loved it! its exactly the type of fic i like. the ending was so powerful! :3
Date: 01/27/11 05:19 pm Title: Five Words
Awww that made me cry :'( amazing work, as always
Date: 01/27/11 05:11 pm Title: Five Words
in the beginning, i wanted to kill Bill. in the end, i wanted to kill Tom -_- the ending made me cry too ='(
'Not in the slightest' my ass :P hehe
Date: 01/08/11 07:17 pm Title: Keeping Close
This was interesting. Uncomfortable to read, but interesting. Reminded me of movies like Clockwork Orange and Gangs of New York. I absolutely loved the certain psychological element in tyhis, a certain mind fuck if that word is appropriate here. Sick and twisted and it is exactly how it should be and what makes it so fascinating.
You've definitely written a fic which challenges the reader in many ways.
Date: 01/05/11 04:18 pm Title: Keeping Close
PART 2!!!
Not to be too demanding or anything. Actually no, I don't mind :P
Date: 01/04/11 12:49 pm Title: Keeping Close
omg. this is awesome
you should def make a part 2
Date: 01/04/11 12:47 pm Title: Keeping Close
omg. this is awesome
you should def make a part 2
Date: 01/04/11 09:57 am Title: Keeping Close
Need Part 2!!!
That was...wicked!
Date: 01/04/11 09:22 am Title: Keeping Close
oh gosh, this is good. Bill like that is so.....*shudders*
part 2 please!!! *makes grabby hands and adds story to faves*
Date: 01/04/11 07:31 am Title: Keeping Close
PART 2 of course darling
Date: 01/04/11 07:16 am Title: Keeping Close
He knew that it was him all along O.O Bill is such a bitch >.<
I would like to see Part 2 if you write it. Bill should get what he deserves, not really death although he may deserve it but something at least XD
Date: 01/04/11 05:50 am Title: Keeping Close
Oh wow! I don't really read that much horror/violence but I have to say that you do it so very well. This was impressive in it's depth for a one-shot, the emotions are just so raw and the fear is tangible. I'm curious to know more yet worried if I'd be able to read it. Great honey *snuggles*
Date: 01/04/11 02:08 am Title: Keeping Close
Hmm, yeah I guess this calls for a part 2. It doesn't feel completely wrapped up...
Date: 01/04/11 01:07 am Title: Keeping Close
I loved this! Original concept and well executed, part 2 yes!
Date: 01/04/11 12:10 am Title: Keeping Close
girl... disturbing is my second name xD
i loved it
Date: 01/03/11 11:05 pm Title: Keeping Close
I liked this one!!
The ending kinda caught me by surprise,
in a good way.
I would love a part 2 ^.^
Date: 01/03/11 10:36 pm Title: Keeping Close
Ooh, very uncomfortable to read, but I like the dynamic between Bill and Tom. It explains a lot. I think definitely a Part 2! I'd be interested to see where this goes. :D
Jane
Date: 01/03/11 10:31 pm Title: Keeping Close
This made me cross my legs REALLY tight. O__O
Anywho, adored this story and I would love a second part! This was perfectly creepy and I loved the way you described Bill. More please!