Date: 07/29/14 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh happy birthday!
I'm excited to see what you come up with. I know how that all goes. I had one of my stories endings planned for two years now and when it came time to write it I realized I hate it and now have to figure out what to do. I'll keep my eye open for part 2, till then, good luck!
Date: 07/25/14 03:35 am Title: Chapter 15
Man, I still love this story so much. I've spent the last two nights rereading and its just as great as it was the first time I read it. Hope you picking writing on here back up and do the part 2 :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, one of the best birthday presents I've recieved today.
rnI do have part 2 almost completely written, just having issues with the ending. Currently the entire story is going through a very in-depth editing as I wanted to add scenes and expand upon some things that I didn't before since when I was writing Part 1 for NaNo I didn't have time to fully outline the story.
rnRest assure, this story has not just been sitting forgotten on my computer. I am constantly picking at it, adding to it or editing it.
Date: 11/16/12 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 15
Omb part2 pleasseeee I wanna know in detail what really happened to bill!!!!
Author's Response:
I am actually writing it now, have about half of the story completed. Unfortunately I can't say when to even think about looking for it as I still need to have it edited severly.
rnFor a teaser, Bill was severly abused......~_*
rnThank You for the review, I'm glag that people are still finding their way to this story.
Date: 12/30/11 06:13 am Title: Chapter 15
Hey what about bill when he said he didn't have the option about losing his verginity ?!! Complete it plz hehehe
Author's Response:
LoL, out of everything I have left unfinished -- Bill's non-virginity is the main issue?! I love that!!!
rnThank You for reading and responding!
Date: 12/27/11 03:26 am Title: Chapter 15
Hell yes you should do a part two!! it was a good chapter, cool to see bill putting someone else first. but the story doesn't seem finished. I hope you do more. Thanks for this one though!
Author's Response:
I do agree about the story not seeming finished, infact I wasn't planning on stopping it here but unfortunately Bill seemed to think otherwise.
rnMany ideas and plans are brewing for the sequel, most of which are carry-overs from this story. Not sure how soon I'll be getting started on the sequel but rest assure it will be coming.
rnThank you for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 12/27/11 02:44 am Title: Chapter 15
You should do a next one. There is still so much to this story. I loved every chapter. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Author's Response:
I do agree there being much more going on between Tom and Bill, not to mention I really have more I want to say.
rnThanks for reading and responding!
Date: 12/27/11 01:58 am Title: Chapter 15
Oh my God! I cannot believe this is the end of the story I'm so friggin' sad noa :( I love this one so much, but I cannot wait until the second comes out!
Umm maybe the second one could be about Tom moving in and them getting use to things and maybe working together to attempt to get Bill to stop cutting :x Annnd I feel like that girl from the thanksgiving chapter could play a part, like that wasn't the last of her.
Uhhh yeah do whatever you want as long as you don't stop writing this amazing story :D
Author's Response:
You do give some very interesting ideas, I honestly wasn't planning on bringing the girl from Thanksgiving back in but now....it could happen....Honestly, I don't think Bill will ever stop cutting -- at least at this point in time and certainly it wont be an important aspect of it.
rnRest assured I will be doing a sequel, but I don't know when it will be coming out.
rnThank you for reading and responding.
Date: 12/22/11 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 14
Eeeek! I totes wasn't disappointed! I truly love this story and cannot wait for you to write more! And ya know, I'm not even bummed that you didn't write out the whole sex scene. To me, what was going on emotionally was more important :3 Buuut now I really wanna know what happened with Tom and his dad D:
Can't wait for chapter 15
Date: 12/22/11 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
EEkkk! You just made my night! I've been dying to read it, noa, please excuse me while I go read it
Date: 12/22/11 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 14
I think you did a great job with the scene, I just wish you hadn't cut it off in the middle. Oh well, it makes me all the more eager for the next chapter.
I've noticed you don't get a lot of reviews for this story. I hope you know that that is not a reflection of your writing. I think this story is just a little known, undiscovered gem.
Date: 12/22/11 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 13
A very good chapter. I love how Bill is opening up. He and Tom complement each other very well.
Date: 12/20/11 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
EEEK! I can't wait to read it then, even if it is unbeated ;)
Author's Response:
Well it is posted now, so hope you like it.
Date: 12/20/11 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh my God, this chapter was sooooooo good! I really hope you post more soon! I
Author's Response:
Thank You!
rnI can promise I'll have another chapter out within the week. I am almost done with 14, just got to wrap it up and hopefully get it beta-ed.
rnI'm sure you'll love it ^_~
Date: 09/15/11 05:02 am Title: Chapter 12
Just read this chapter again and i can't wait for more still. =)
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank yoiu for rereading, I am always flattered to hear when people are reading my stories. I am wanting to write more soon, alass school has sucked in my soul at the moment. Hopefully I will be able to finish up the next chapter.
rnDo not worry, I have this entire story planned out up to the epilogue.....it's just the matter of time and energy at the moment.
Date: 07/23/11 04:00 am Title: Chapter 12
I though Tom handled it very well. Even if he knew about it, its another thing to see it. And very hard for ppl not to get really upset with loved ones over cutting. I think he handled it well, and probably handled it the only way that wouldn't make Bill freak out. Great update, thanks so much!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you were happy with it.
rnI just didn't see Tom freaking out over it as he kind of already knew but probably be surprised to actually be seeing it.
Date: 07/23/11 03:54 am Title: Chapter 11
wow. Gustav sure turned out to be annoying. thanks for the update, i'm glad i still have another chapter to read too! =)
Author's Response:
I had to mix it up a little with the guys.
Date: 07/19/11 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
That does help a lot :D
Thanks :D And I can't wait for it.