This is well written but sad. :( I was so hoping that they would finally kiss in the end. I hate it when people stick to illogical beliefs and Bill's "no kissing" rule is heartbreaking.
I liked this story, but the ending is sad-- that they resign to live their lives that way just cuz of what society says, its like having a constant reminder of "wrong" your whole life. I would think that when theyre alone together they would just want to forget about it. :( Anyways, well done. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, it is kind of sad to have the constant reminder of society, but this was meant to be more of a realistic approach as opposed to a super happy, almost improbable, romanticized approach that I'd usually love to take. Thought I'd take the bittersweet fluff stance instead.. but I do agree with you, and I would've loved to have them taking advantage of their alone time to the fullest. My muse just didn't seem to think that'd work this time around. Humph. But thank you :')

Awww, this was adorable!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!! :))

Awwww! That was truly adorable! Poor twins, not allowing themselves to kiss =( But at least they're together... really cute little fic!

Author's Response: Kind of a bittersweet fluff, really... but thank you! :)