Date: 02/25/11 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ooohhhh nice :D more soon???
Author's Response: yes :)
Date: 02/25/11 10:36 am Title: Chapter 7
aww..tom kissed her...i really love this..i think it's really sweet
Author's Response: Thanks :) More soon!
Date: 02/19/11 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 6
:( I have nothing to say but these past few chapters are quiet sad :(
Author's Response: I agree :(
Date: 02/19/11 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ok I'm really really sad for Olive :( hmm why are they in there waking her up?
Author's Response: No idea :p
Date: 02/19/11 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 4
Poor olive :( i feel badfor her. And if I were olive I'd be nervous as hell too.
Author's Response: yeaaah lol
Date: 02/19/11 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
Lmao! XD she forge the one thing she went over there for XD lol! Aww Tom probably felt rejected when she said that.
Author's Response: prolly :/
Date: 02/19/11 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
Olive is a day dreamer I'm guilty too :) and oh my she knocked on the door eeeep! I wonder why are they laughing so much, what's so funny? Hmm :-/ I know I'm nosey :P
Author's Response: I have no idea lol
Date: 02/19/11 05:52 am Title: Chapter 1
That's right she needs to live a little she's young! :)
Author's Response: indeed she does :)
Date: 02/19/11 05:41 am Title: Prologue
Ooh I like :) um does tokio hotel exist in this story?
Author's Response: no they don't. they are just regular guys
Date: 02/10/11 02:31 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh dear! It sounds like Olive has panic attacks. Not fun!
Hope you're feeling better. :) Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 02/09/11 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
You know, you are a good writer,but you should try to extend you chapters by describing things more or putting little things in there.YOu know? expiriment :) but you are a good writter! just give a little more! :) good chapter though! :D
Author's Response: Thanks :) and I would, only I'm still getting to know Olive and her story. once I get a good grip on it, chapters will be longer.
Date: 02/09/11 09:51 am Title: Chapter 5
Lovely chapter (:
im sorry your weekend didnt go to well ):
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 02/09/11 08:37 am Title: Chapter 5
woww.... I want to know more about Olive every chapter I read!! I love that you're taking this so nice and slow :) I hope your mood gets better soon!!! And that you write and update and I can get excited and read another lovely chapter again!!! :D :D
Author's Response: Oh, you're so sweet :) I'll work on it later today :)
Date: 01/29/11 02:57 am Title: Chapter 4
Poor Olive. Missing her mom so much.
Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: :)
Date: 01/28/11 08:10 am Title: Chapter 4
:'(
more soon. I swear I'm like Olive. No kidding....
Author's Response: :) More is coming soon!
Author's Response: :) More is coming soon!
Date: 01/27/11 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love how Olive is living in a dream world where everything is more colorfull. I do that all the time xD
Author's Response: :)
Date: 01/24/11 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
Meeting the new neighbors is always so awkward.
Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: more is coming soon :)
Date: 01/20/11 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 3
nice..i love this chapter. Reminds me when I was still back in New York with my best friend--hahaha..
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 01/20/11 06:44 am Title: Chapter 3
Another lovely chapter out of Olive's life :) more soon? I'm caught up in your words!! Love it!!! :D
Author's Response: Aw! Thanks :) More soon as I can :)
Date: 01/19/11 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh wow, Olive is a bit strange haha, she makes it seem like Tom is going to try to get his way with or something, but This was pretty good, but I wish chapters were longer!! :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm workin on it :)