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Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/13 10:26 am Title: Chapter 12

I'm really happy for Olive but at the same time i'm sad that she had to leave Tom. Especially after jus confessing their feelings. But i'd love to find out what's next for them all. I really enjoyed this :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm going to TRY for a second story but I don't have the best track record when it comes to sequels. We'll see. I'm SO glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/13 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 11

Aww I'm sad to see her leave Tom so soon after becoming close to him. Looking forward to finding out what will happen later on.

Author's Response: Indeed :)

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/13 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 10

This is really good! Hope there will be an update soon.

Author's Response: I'm working on it :)

Reviewer: xxingvill Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/13 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 10

New reader!
Im wondering how much she gets!
So the twins are not in a band?

Author's Response: No, they own a music store named Tokio Hotel

Reviewer: MidnightsRose Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/12 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 9

people write more please

Author's Response: I had stopped because for one thing I wasn't really inspired and I didn't think anyone really liked it but I will for sure try for you :)

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/11 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 9

Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/11 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 8

Loved it!

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/11 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 7

Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/11 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 6

Loved it! Poor Olive!

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/11 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 5

Loved it! Poor Olive!

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/11 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 4

Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/11 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/11 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 2

Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/11 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/11 01:12 pm Title: Prologue

Loved it!

Author's Response: thanks :)

Reviewer: tokioluv89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/11 11:35 am Title: Chapter 9

Oh yay! Tom and Olive love! Woo

Author's Response: hehe yup :)

Reviewer: sexGott Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/11 11:51 am Title: Chapter 8

when are you gonna update this amazing story? (:

Author's Response: As soon as I have time, I've been so crazy busy!

Reviewer: Marie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/11 02:26 am Title: Chapter 8

Omg what's up with tom and olive? And LOL the hair dresser wanted Bill. Anyway I like olives change and who's this jennah harris I don't remember if you mentioned her.

Author's Response: She's her mother's lawyer.

Reviewer: efilsiydolem Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/27/11 08:19 am Title: Chapter 8

That was somewhat sudden!! But I like it :) more soon??

Author's Response: Blame it on the kiss....lol

Reviewer: Marie87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/11 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 7

Woah! Tom and that kiss and I agree Olive was really mellowed out in thus chapter all relaxed and like 'whatever its just tom' XD LOL

Author's Response: Yeah, thats what you get when you're half asleep lol

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