Date: 11/09/14 02:42 am Title: A Familiar Stranger
Love this! Please continue!
Date: 12/30/11 03:45 pm Title: A Familiar Stranger
I'd like to read the third section. Please continue.
Date: 01/02/11 02:37 pm Title: A Familiar Stranger
yaya part threeeeeee!!! :D
Date: 12/30/10 07:11 pm Title: A Familiar Stranger
yay!! cool story, i love it so far. keep up the good work!!
Date: 12/30/10 12:22 pm Title: A Familiar Stranger
Awww! I love the idea of this fic so much. How Tom is insanely attracted by a scent, it’s so cute! And now that they met again, I can’t wait to see what’s gonna happen and how they’re gonna react =D
Date: 12/30/10 10:56 am Title: A Familiar Stranger
*squeeeeee!!!!*
I can't even write. I want Tom to vault over the counter and TAKE HIM right there.
Ok, ok, I'll calm down. :)
Date: 12/30/10 07:51 am Title: A Familiar Stranger
Very nice!!!
When I read your stuff I always feel like I am being submerged into a warm, smooth and glowing bath representing the world you describe in your stories; it's so relaxing, so peaceful and full of beauty. Everything slows down around me and the story envelopes me, charms me, pulls me closer.... how do you do that:-)
Bill as a sexy baker ....I like:-)
Date: 12/30/10 07:40 am Title: A Familiar Stranger
Oh Tom found him!! I'm very curious as to the why's and how's that Bill is seemingly taking care of his nieces and nephew. But now we know why Bill smells so sweet. Cant' wait for more.
Date: 12/30/10 05:10 am Title: A Familiar Stranger
A google add with the Cookie Monster was at the bottom of the page when I finished this chapter. I think it's a sign that Tom may get lucky with treats AND a dark haired cookie scented baker.
Date: 12/29/10 05:34 pm Title: Nothing More Than a Stranger
I like the idea, it's very interesting! I'm intrigued and can't wait to read the second part !
Date: 12/29/10 10:59 am Title: Nothing More Than a Stranger
oooo and yes, Amish country...I'm missing that... :)
Happy New Year!
Date: 12/29/10 09:50 am Title: Nothing More Than a Stranger
ooooo nice. I love this already! I can just smell Bill! Yum!
Date: 12/29/10 09:30 am Title: Nothing More Than a Stranger
oh, I want the second part!!
Date: 12/29/10 09:10 am Title: Nothing More Than a Stranger
What a delightful, sweet and tempting beginning of a something more to come (hopefully?).
I enjoyed how you incorporated scent as a "main and strongly predominating element" in this chapter. Sense of smell, being the most primitive of all our senses, can be such a strong pull and work on such a visceral level. You worked beautifully with it.
Happy holidays to you too:-)
...and would you send my regards to the two boys in the Amish land...tell them they are greatly missed !
Date: 12/29/10 08:51 am Title: Nothing More Than a Stranger
I love the idea and can't wait to read more. You got me hooked girl. And I gut an insane urge for some cookies too :D
I know that the story would have ended to quick if Tom followed Bill but I still wanted to strangle him becouse of his decision.
I can't wait to know if Bill knew who he was kissing or it just was destiny.
Date: 12/29/10 06:14 am Title: Nothing More Than a Stranger
AGH Tom why didn't you follow him out the door!? Eeee this had me holding my breath in anticipation, I can't wait to read more. *hugs*
