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Reviewer: SoffiProppi Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/14 02:42 am Title: A Familiar Stranger

Love this! Please continue!

Reviewer: ingold Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/11 03:45 pm Title: A Familiar Stranger

I'd like to read the third section. Please continue.

Reviewer: TokioMoonlight Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/11 02:37 pm Title: A Familiar Stranger

yaya part threeeeeee!!! :D

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/10 07:11 pm Title: A Familiar Stranger

yay!! cool story, i love it so far. keep up the good work!!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/10 12:22 pm Title: A Familiar Stranger

Awww! I love the idea of this fic so much. How Tom is insanely attracted by a scent, it’s so cute! And now that they met again, I can’t wait to see what’s gonna happen and how they’re gonna react =D

Reviewer: helpmebill Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/10 10:56 am Title: A Familiar Stranger

*squeeeeee!!!!*

I can't even write. I want Tom to vault over the counter and TAKE HIM right there.

Ok, ok, I'll calm down. :)

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/10 07:51 am Title: A Familiar Stranger

Very nice!!!
When I read your stuff I always feel like I am being submerged into a warm, smooth and glowing bath representing the world you describe in your stories; it's so relaxing, so peaceful and full of beauty. Everything slows down around me and the story envelopes me, charms me, pulls me closer.... how do you do that:-)

Bill as a sexy baker ....I like:-)

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/10 07:40 am Title: A Familiar Stranger

Oh Tom found him!! I'm very curious as to the why's and how's that Bill is seemingly taking care of his nieces and nephew. But now we know why Bill smells so sweet. Cant' wait for more.

Reviewer: phaerei Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/10 05:10 am Title: A Familiar Stranger

A google add with the Cookie Monster was at the bottom of the page when I finished this chapter. I think it's a sign that Tom may get lucky with treats AND a dark haired cookie scented baker.

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/10 05:34 pm Title: Nothing More Than a Stranger

I like the idea, it's very interesting! I'm intrigued and can't wait to read the second part !

Reviewer: helpmebill Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/10 10:59 am Title: Nothing More Than a Stranger

oooo and yes, Amish country...I'm missing that... :)

Happy New Year!

Reviewer: helpmebill Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/10 09:50 am Title: Nothing More Than a Stranger

ooooo nice. I love this already! I can just smell Bill! Yum!

Reviewer: TokioMoonlight Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/10 09:30 am Title: Nothing More Than a Stranger

oh, I want the second part!!

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/10 09:10 am Title: Nothing More Than a Stranger

What a delightful, sweet and tempting beginning of a something more to come (hopefully?).

I enjoyed how you incorporated scent as a "main and strongly predominating element" in this chapter. Sense of smell, being the most primitive of all our senses, can be such a strong pull and work on such a visceral level. You worked beautifully with it.


Happy holidays to you too:-)
...and would you send my regards to the two boys in the Amish land...tell them they are greatly missed !

Reviewer: nekoneko Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/10 08:51 am Title: Nothing More Than a Stranger

I love the idea and can't wait to read more. You got me hooked girl. And I gut an insane urge for some cookies too :D

I know that the story would have ended to quick if Tom followed Bill but I still wanted to strangle him becouse of his decision.

I can't wait to know if Bill knew who he was kissing or it just was destiny.

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/10 06:14 am Title: Nothing More Than a Stranger

AGH Tom why didn't you follow him out the door!? Eeee this had me holding my breath in anticipation, I can't wait to read more. *hugs*

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