Date: 12/31/10 12:47 am Title: 1/3
Poor Tom is having a very hard time with this. he's so very possessive and is worrying so very much it's rather indearing when isn't annoying as fuck.
Date: 12/30/10 11:52 pm Title: 3/3
Awwww! Thank you so much for this brilliant fic! I adore possessive!Tom in this one. The part where Bill was waiting to hear from Tom and was so worried is SO well written! I really felt sad for Bill while reading it. It was so cute and full of emotions when they finally admitted how they felt, loved it! And the sex was super hot as always. Oh and it broke my heart when Tom was talking about how he hates that Bill isn’t a virgin cause he waited and missed his chance... but at least they’re together now and that’s the most important thing.
Love this part, I think it explains perfectly how the twins are: "Pretending to be anything but what we are is what got us in trouble," Bill stated. He patted the empty bed beside him. "For you and me, it's only weird if we're not sharing everything. Even this."
Happy New Year to you too !
Date: 12/30/10 09:24 pm Title: 2/3
oh goooooooooood.
ure amazing. i love this so. so awesome.
Date: 12/30/10 07:35 pm Title: 2/3
Mmm, there's not a lot of things I like more than a jealous Tom, especially when paired with a clueless Bill. As always, your writing is amazing. Can't wait to read the last part!
Date: 12/30/10 07:32 pm Title: 2/3
Mmm, there's not a lot of things I like more than a jealous Tom, especially when paired with a clueless Bill. As always, your writing is amazing. Can't wait to read the last part!
Date: 12/30/10 01:13 pm Title: 1/3
the dinner scene: the build-up, the pacing of it, the atmosphere at it was one of the most powerful scene's I've read in a fic. i'm really blown away by it, tbh. It's hard to hit that point of intensity while still making it feel completely realistic & not melodramatic in the least.
Date: 12/30/10 10:41 am Title: 2/3
*unf*..i need a cold shower..this was just good...simply amazing..
hope you feel better X
Date: 12/30/10 09:43 am Title: 2/3
I love bill/tom first time and once again you've written a wonderful story. Can't wait to see how it ends!
Date: 12/30/10 07:08 am Title: 2/3
aww no, tom run away! he better come back! this was haawt :D
Date: 12/30/10 02:19 am Title: 1/3
You'd better believe I'm reading this through again as it appears on THF! *__* I'll never get over how much I love it, and how privileged I feel to have fyredancer fic.
Date: 12/30/10 01:25 am Title: 2/3
love love love. Sorry i didnt comment on the last chappie. i had a few minutes before work, and i didnt have time:( BUT! i LOVE this so far! Missin the christmas one... heaps!
Date: 12/30/10 01:03 am Title: 2/3
You godess! :)
I WANNA KNOW WHATS NEXT! : D
Date: 12/30/10 12:18 am Title: 2/3
I never tire from your writing ^ ^ Everything you write is always golden.
Honestly, I can't believe Tom let him suck his dick like that and then just dip out >.> SMH. I'm sure Bill will straighten him out though, after all of that.
Date: 12/30/10 12:06 am Title: 2/3
This was a great chapter. I love how Bill manipulated Tom into admitting what his problem really was. Very hot, though disappointing for Bill when Tom just up and left. I can't wait for the last part!
Date: 12/29/10 11:41 pm Title: 2/3
So, as I predicted, I was not able to wait so I read the whole thing on the santa fic thing... but I'm gonna comment on the chapters here anyway, just cause it was so good it deserves it (and I really want to read the next chapter of this Christmas fic =P)
I love this chapter so much! The confrontation scene was perfectly written and the tension was awesome! Jealous and possessive Tom is definitely one of my favorite and you wrote it so well in this fic!
I'll be back to let you know what I thought of the fic in general when you post the final chapter cause I don't want to spoil it for anyone ...
Date: 12/29/10 10:54 pm Title: 2/3
damn....
Author's Response: Gotta have the angst. ;)
Date: 12/29/10 05:56 pm Title: 1/3
oh-oh-ohhhhh!! :DDD ilooooooveee it!! moremoremreomroemroe :D please let it be more than 3ch!:DDD
hh the chapter gives me the impresion of a very good foreplay :D yummy:D
Date: 12/29/10 04:24 pm Title: 1/3
oh.my.god.
oh gott. O______O
i dont know what to say. please please update NOOOOWWWWW xDDDD DDDDD: baaaah so good.
Date: 12/29/10 02:08 pm Title: 1/3
Brilliant! just what I needed after today..I'm loving this so much.
Thank you and I'm looking forward to more xx