Date: 01/01/11 02:23 pm Title: 3/3
Nobody writes smut like you do sweetie. I love how 'in love' you write Tom's and Bill's characters. This was a fantabulous story. Danke.
Date: 01/01/11 01:19 pm Title: 2/3
Tom's just having a problem adjusting to the idea of he and Bill as a couple is all. He'll come around won't he? Awesome chapter sweetie and now I'm off to anxiously read the next one. Danke.
Date: 01/01/11 12:46 pm Title: 1/3
This is a wonderful story as usual. Poor Bill and poor Tom! Too bad Tom isn't gay! Can hardly wait for the next chapter so I'm on my way now. Great start sweetie. Danke.
Date: 01/01/11 08:55 am Title: 3/3
This was perfect. I loved it so much, it's adorable that Tom's upset at not being Tom's first. I love Bill stealing back Tom's first kiss, so sweet. I just adore this honey *snuggles*
Date: 01/01/11 04:50 am Title: 2/3
Oh damn, and things were going so well for all of five minutes...I have to say I'm surprised it took Tom that long to figure out that David knew, that he really is one of the last to know. Poor boys. *group hug*
Date: 01/01/11 02:48 am Title: 3/3
love this, soo much smut at the end here....*wipes sweat off brow*
Date: 12/31/10 08:55 pm Title: 3/3
sooooooooooooooooo fikkinnn gooooooood.
MEEEEIN GOTTTTTT!!!
love this more than anything. baaaaaah. so awesome. ure the best. dont know what else to say. please please please write more fics like these. *__* so good. a bit angsty and a lot of fluffy SMUT!!!!
Date: 12/31/10 06:44 pm Title: 3/3
Ah, so so nice. I love how you structured the scenes at the end, choosing to have Tom walk out after the blow job instead of immediately moving things to sex. The dynamic between the twins throughout was incredible and I ate it all up with a big smile on my face. I particularly liked how Bill reconsidered his previous sexual encounters and realized that they felt wrong because they weren't with Tom, and how he realized he'd never really had the full experience of sex until then.
Date: 12/31/10 04:16 pm Title: 3/3
This was awesome. Though the sex was of course hot hot hot, my favourite parts were the little emotional twinny moments, especially when Tom stops and says:
"I waited," Tom said, bending over Bill's back and laying his cheek against Bill's spine. "I fucking missed my chance, Bill."
That was just so beautiful. Loved the dynamic between them, in the previous parts and here, too. Now all that's missing is an "after" paragraph, with everyone wondering what the hell happened that they're both suddenly so happy and friendly *hint-hint*
Date: 12/31/10 01:30 pm Title: 3/3
i absolutely loved that! so glad everything worked out between them. i started reading this last night but it was at 4 in the morning and i couldn't keep my eyes open. So i came back when i could fully enjoy it without the risk of falling asleep. this was a really wonderful read.
Date: 12/31/10 11:20 am Title: 3/3
Yea! They worked it out...and how! Wow it was such a slow build up to sex I enjoyed it. It was a lovely transition and the drama angst aspect was great.
Date: 12/31/10 10:28 am Title: 2/3
Oh my Tom been a serious jerk for so very long and he doesn't even realize it. I love that Bill was the one to figure it all out. I love that he pushed the boundaries. If Tom was behaving this way before they were doing anything how will he behave when they are together? Hopefully It's just worry that's making him into a jerk.
Date: 12/31/10 07:23 am Title: 2/3
Oh, Bill...you didn't think maybe you should talk about it?
Silly boys.
This was a great chapter. I really enjoyed Tom's building jealousy, and Bill's cluelessness.
Date: 12/31/10 06:35 am Title: 1/3
I adore this. The emotions you're depicting feel so real and raw. And really, I can never get enough of the twins walking in on each other! *shameless*
Date: 12/31/10 03:32 am Title: 1/3
ooooh holy sheep i am enjoying this story so much! gah! it's amazing!
Date: 12/31/10 01:27 am Title: 3/3
well writen, i really could feel the angst
spanking...? if you do a story with it it would be my dream come true xD
love :D
Date: 12/31/10 01:27 am Title: 3/3
well writen, i really could feel the angst
spanking...? if you do a story with it it would be my dream come true xD
love :D
Date: 12/31/10 01:02 am Title: 3/3
"You should have known," Tom told him, sitting down beside him on the bed. His towel split around one muscular thigh and Bill tried to look away. His head came up, startled, as Tom took one of his hands and laced their fingers together. "You never had to do this alone."
"And I love you," Tom said, his eyes unflinching. A muscle jumped in his jaw. "We don't say it often. We don't need to. But you need to hear it now. I love you – all of you, every part."
I loved that part. This was wonderful. As always you did such a good job, thank you so much!!!