Date: 12/14/13 08:56 pm Title: First and Only Chapter
Yay Fluffy smut! so good, so sweet awww
Date: 10/26/11 12:15 pm Title: First and Only Chapter
this is good story!
Date: 12/30/10 10:46 pm Title: First and Only Chapter
Tnat was really sweet
Date: 12/30/10 04:17 am Title: First and Only Chapter
wow that was amazing no matter how late
Date: 12/29/10 09:26 pm Title: First and Only Chapter
*stares at the review box for 5 minutes, not knowing what to say*
You pretty much rendered me speechless for a bit. This story is exactly what I needed right now.
I love your characterizations. The twins are so sweet to each other, their love just sparked off the screen, and I don't mean the sex part -which is pretty damn hot-, but how they interact, how they don't need words, and how they're so comfortable with each other. Staring at someone often makes the person being stared at feel uncomfortable, here I saw that it's just another part of the twins unique way to communicate with each other. I really like how you managed to portray Bill and Tom so real, we of course don't know how they behave when they're truly alone, but this story gives the reader a good idea of what it could be like.
I'm glad you decided to post this even though it's long past their 20th birthday.
Nice work. It was a pleasure to read.
Date: 12/29/10 01:38 pm Title: First and Only Chapter
awesome! birthday sex rocks!
Date: 12/29/10 05:46 am Title: First and Only Chapter
Adorable *-* As they always are. It doesn't matter if it's "late". It's not like everyone here writes their fics about the twins as they are now :) Everyone has their own twins, or many types of them, so this fits here as well as the others ^^
Author's Response:
Thank you! ^^ Yeah you're right about the late thing. I guess I was annoyed about the fact that I had written it such a long time ago and also in time for their bday and then I decided to forget about it for one year... -_- Hahahah!
Date: 12/29/10 03:02 am Title: First and Only Chapter
There is no timeline. You can write the twins at any age, that's the great part about writing. Your story was sweet.
Author's Response:
Haha, yeah I guess you're right. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12/29/10 02:43 am Title: First and Only Chapter
it was so very beautifull!!! so pure and perfect! i really like this story! thank you for writing it!
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you! I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reviewing!