Date: 12/28/10 09:31 pm Title: fire & water
Marvelously done, and I definitely took the end as positive; after letting each other shatter, they can always ALWAYS rebuild each other's pieces. No matter what or where, they belong together for always!
Date: 12/28/10 08:54 pm Title: fire & water
This almost made me cry. ;_; You wrote it really beautifully.
Date: 12/28/10 07:47 pm Title: fire & water
It's sad and hopeful. Its really Very lovely. I really like it. It fell in between the fine balance of drama and heart ache but with an undertone of hope and love. So very well done.
Date: 12/28/10 05:49 pm Title: fire & water
oh this was so, so beautiful. I cried. A good cry. wonderfully magical and beautiful. thank you.
Date: 12/28/10 05:49 pm Title: fire & water
*slowly lets out breath* Phew..
That was very raw and beautiful...
Date: 12/28/10 05:48 pm Title: fire & water
Awwww, you made me cry. This was so good! Tom's pain was so palpable, but now he finally has his Bill with him and that's all that matters. Lovely story!
Date: 12/28/10 05:07 pm Title: fire & water
This is pure awesomeness *-*
Date: 12/28/10 04:32 pm Title: fire & water
:') That was really well done. I loved this! You gave us the perfect amount of information to visualize this story, not to little, not too much. Your characterization is so vivid.
Date: 12/28/10 04:18 pm Title: fire & water
I cried. :)
But it was a good cry. I love the way you wrote the the boys here - a very good depiction of their relationship, and I especially love the kitten part. A WONDERFUL story, very nice. Thank you! :D
Jane