Date: 12/28/10 11:41 pm Title: Lip Locked
Very beautiful story, will definitely become one of my favourites! The ending was heartbreaking, really, I'm always trying to forget they will get old and die just like everyone else, and here is this reminder. Nonetheless I love this story!
Date: 12/28/10 11:21 pm Title: Lip Locked
What a cute one shot!
Date: 12/28/10 06:10 pm Title: Lip Locked
I was SO excited to see a new story from you! I have no words to truly express how good this fic is. Seriously, this is one of the best one shot I ever read. It was beautiful and perfect. The way you wrote the twins in this is just amazing. It's my favorite kind of twins, so in love and perfect for each other since the beginning! That last part was so emotional and sad, the ending line made me cry... Thank you so much for this wonderful fic, it's a beautiful piece of writing.
Date: 12/28/10 05:09 pm Title: Lip Locked
Doow, thank you so much for writing such a beautiful and cute story! Especially when it's been such a good time! It was so pleasant to read.
I was wondering if maybe you'd let me translate it in french? Pretty please? I'm currently translating a fiction which is all but fluffy like this one so it'd feel good to translate such a cute one (:
http://chachouilletraductions.skyblog.com (there's a list of every story I translated)
Date: 12/28/10 04:29 pm Title: Lip Locked
First of all, I was so so happy to see you'd posted something new ^_^ And second of all, whoa. That was one of the most beautiful fics I've ever read. I'm actually crying *_*
It was just so stunning, beyond in fact! I don't think any review I write will quite justify how fantastic this story really was. It was sweet and romantic and there was just so much twin-love. Which is something we all like to see :) The way you write will forever bowl me over, it's always amazing to read one of your fics and I think I'll always find myself returning to your page. Thank you for this, it was amazing and perfect and brilliant. Happy New Year!
Date: 12/28/10 05:16 am Title: Lip Locked
I teared up at the end. Such a sweet story. The thought of Bill and Tom old and still together always gets to me just a bit.
Date: 12/28/10 12:04 am Title: Lip Locked
A somber end to an otherwise fluffy and adorable fic. That last line made me pause and reflect, which is something I don't do often.
Date: 12/27/10 10:14 pm Title: Lip Locked
That was great different but I like it.
Date: 12/27/10 05:51 pm Title: Lip Locked
This was so beautiful and amazing. I'm always blown away by your writing and this was no exception. Thank you so much for sharing b29;
Date: 12/27/10 05:41 pm Title: Lip Locked
Wow, I love the ending! it's sad, simple, full of love... omg
Date: 12/27/10 04:24 pm Title: Lip Locked
oh my god :(
and ohhhh my god :(
this was so perfect and beautiful and juuuust so good hayleyzee, thank you soooo much for sharing it. that last paragraph kind of killed me ._.
Date: 12/27/10 04:14 pm Title: Lip Locked
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.
Date: 12/27/10 04:11 pm Title: Lip Locked
It was soooooo adorable! *squeals*
Just the way you described their kisses and their feelings *___* It literally blew my mind!
And I might add that it's so amazing to see a new story from you :3
Date: 12/27/10 03:05 pm Title: Lip Locked
So adorable this is! I love how you incorporated the goodbye kiss into the ending -- so sweet. It's incredibly easy to forget the power and feelings that a simple kiss can have on someone, but this definitely brought it all back. Well done!
Date: 12/27/10 02:51 pm Title: Lip Locked
That was so perfect, I don't even know what to say.. Just beautiful!
Date: 12/27/10 02:20 pm Title: Lip Locked
That was a wonderful story and I absolutely loved every word of it. The different kind of kisses that Bill and Tom shared were so beautiful. Danke.
Date: 12/27/10 12:28 pm Title: Lip Locked
This was so sweet and amazing. I love how ach kiss led to the next segment.
Date: 12/27/10 12:26 pm Title: Lip Locked
aaaaaw... the last part was so heart-breaking :( but i fucking love this fic! XD