Date: 06/19/11 08:46 am Title: Chapter 14
Hahahaha I'm psychic??XD I get that from sometimes from some of the authors too when I leave a review..XD But naaaaaahhh I iz no psychic. I just like to guess what happens next - especially when I get super excited over a story and plot things in my head too:D And when I ask questions too much looooool..XD But since you asked, I only know for sure Tomina's going to be in trouble veeeeeeery soon. Hahahaha and Bill comes to the rescue as the knight in shining armor..XD Lol actually I don't have any bright ideas in mind atm. Foggy brain is foggy hahaha
I've been ill for days.
I think Tomina's used to being alone most of the time so she doesn't confide on Bill about the cube and such. And she's a stubborn idiot. So Bill has to really make a lot more effort on reaching out to her and let her trust him. He also needs to be more direct since Tomina's dense hahahahaha but since Bill has his pride, it might take a while to you know... Make him admit something out loud, like his feelings for this extraordinary girl..XD ANYWAYS. On the 'visit' I think Bill's gonna push the 'trust me' issue lol cuz he's already involved, wants to be involved, and wants to help Tomina. And he's getting attached to the girl. Yeeheeeeeeee..*giddy* And then trouble comes in. Dunno what kind of paranormal trouble it would be but I guess it would be kind of nasty. And look, I'm rambling! Ahahahahaha sorry about that. I speak of nonsense hahaha oops..XD *escapes*
Oh oh!! Georg's story = totally gross!! They're eating and he just talks about.. Gaaaaahhh so gross. I'd lose my appetite hearing that story while eating. Loooool let's just say I'm a bit of a germophobe. Just a bit!!:P
Author's Response: Haha, Georg's story is actually true. It happened to my cousin!!!!
Anywayz, you're not too far off with the pending "visit" scene. Haha. I love Bill in shining armor, I can so picture that, except maybe instead of white armors, he's going to be in black.... XP.
Aww, you've been sick? I hope it wasn't too serious, but I'm glad to see you're well enough to read.
And don't worry, I so understand the germophobe part, I'm like that too ^_^!
Date: 06/18/11 08:09 am Title: Chapter 14
Ei, gir! You updated!!!:D
LOL at the Gs' ideas. They don't know Tomina well so obviously those things won't work..XDD
The image of blood actually freaked me out here. That's one of the things that scares me when I watch horror films (I blame Stephen King's It...=__=). I'm glad that the paranormal is back, hopefully the plot moves on from here. I wanted to hit Tomina on the head hahahahahahaha she didn't tell Bill something was up!! It's like, she doesn't trust him yet. Or maybe she remains stubborn, wanting to handle things on her own, which she CANNOT, based on the previous events. Maybe Bill could go visit her - a surprise visit and talk, maybe? Hahahahaha... THEY NEED MORE TIME TOGETHER!! LOOOOOOOL..XDD
Anyways, keep writing!:D We'll wait for the next chap hopefully very soooooooon!!:D
Author's Response: I swear, it's either we're on the same wavelength, or you're just a psychic... because that's exactly what Bill's gonna do. *oops spoke too much*.
rnYeah, the plot is definitely going to move on from here, with a few surprises. And since you're kind of a psychic, I bet you might end up figuring out something before I even post up a chapter, hehe. Wanna take a guess?
Thanks for reviewing again <333!rn
Date: 06/15/11 10:20 am Title: Chapter 14
"...And then I tried to unclog the damn thing, but the pipe exploded and all the excretion splattered all over the basement floor!" Georg exclaimed, finishing his story about the day his bathroom pipe exploded.
HAHAHAAA OMG I couldn't stop laughing when I read Georg's story X'D
Author's Response: Yay! You're back! I haven't heard from you in a long time, and thought that you got bored of my fic. Glad to know you're still following ^_^!
I'm glad to know Georg's story send you off to a laughing fit. BTW that story is actually true, it happened to my cousin! And I just couldn't resist incorporating it into the story lol.
Thanks for reviewing! <3
Date: 06/01/11 02:48 am Title: Chapter 13
Sorry about the 'no/less-break' thing. School's really a bitch, no? I'm kinda glad to be out of it, although now I'm nothing but a couch potato lol.. I do nothing but read, eat, sleep for a month now - and I'm getting pretty restless recently.. Useless human being!! Ahahahaha.. But you do get breaks, yeah?:) At least you're still writing. Take yer time:D We all have real life priorities, yeah?:D Except for me who's still playing bum atm hahahahaha..XD Cuz of so much stress in school, I kinda lost my muse in writing. Still trying to get 'em back..XD
ANYWAYS. hahahaha I'm such a blabbermouth..XD Looking forward to your next update. Dontcha worry, someone's waiting to read 'rm!! Hahahaha.. Maybe some progress on the cube thing plus getting in sorts of trouble with the G's - cuz they can really be a handful!!XD Hahaha whatever it is, I'm waiting!!:D
Author's Response: My break pretty much sucks. I guess I should mention that I'm a college student, and that I'm taking summer sessions now, so that's why my updates are less frequent than when I first started posting fictions (which was when I wasn't in school or working). rn
rnYou are so lucky, I would do practically anything to be in your place now!!! I'm so happy that you're waiting for my next update, and yes, the next chapter will contain paranormal activities again!
Date: 05/19/11 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 13
YOU UPDATEEEEEED!!!*glomps*
What a birthday gift!!XD YAY YAY YAY YAY YAAAAAYY!! *throws confetti*
You just injured Bill's flawless man-beauty!!! LOL..XDD But nevermind that. It's a battle scar!! And it's something from Tomina hahahahahaha too bad it's almost always painful with Tom..XDD
I'd like to believe Gustav has a good plan. Can't say it's fool-proof, knowing how Tom could easily get into trouble, and not to mention being soooo dense!!XD Bill was cute though, when he was looking at Tom and noticing the details on her face..XD AND THE WAY HE GETS JEALOUS!! Eeeeeeeeehhh can't wait for moooooore!!!
You on a break now? Or is it still a long way from break? Hope you're doing well though:) Can't wait for the next update!! More progress on Tom/Bill pleeeeease!!:333
Author's Response: It's your birthday?! Happy Birthday!!!!! *hugs*
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rnYes I injured Bill's flawless man-beauty, but I can't help it!!! You're right, it is a battle scar and a gift from Tom, lol!
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rnUgh, I like to believe I'm on break, but knowing my hectic schedule in and out of school, my break will most likely be filled with random stuff to do, such as finals T_T!!! I'll try to update at least once a week, though I guarantee it, but I'll try! I'll think of your awesome reviews as my motivation! Thanks for reviewing <33!
Date: 04/10/11 05:41 am Title: Chapter 12
Aw hey never mind what I said lol I read the chapter again (and re-read from chap1 for the lack of fics to read for the day) and there's something in this chapter that I actually missed. It was the Gs' last convo here and their agreement to hook Tom/Bill up!! Now that's something to look forward to.. Totally looking forward to what the hell they're going to do!!XD Knowing the Gs, it could be something pretty hilarious to a certain point and it could be a bit of a messed up plan because they don't know Tom/Bill's situation... What's exciting about this part is kaybe it could trigger Tom/Bill's feelings more for each other, although I'm feeling Tomina's as dense as ever-but it's exciting to think how these know feelings will come to Tomina..XD Ooooooohhh I'm so excited!!XD Maybe the Gs' hook up plan will get slightly ruined by another supernatural phenomenon but you know, it brings the two closer together... Which means more fluff and romantic stuffs!!XD *flutterclaps*
I am sooooo blabbering right now, I'm sorry. I just can't wait for more..XD Bill getting frustrated with his feelings for Tomina and Tomina herself. While Tomina gets confused and still a bit clueless... HILARIOUS..XD
Alrigjht I'll shut up now. Eeeeeeeekk..*hides*
Author's Response: Hahaha, The G's so would do something hilarious and a bit messed up. And yup, Tomina's gonna be as dense as ever, which means, Bill's gonna be overly frustrated! *sigh* I feel like I'm being a little mean to Bill, but hey, I think we need a little more frustrated Bill! rn
rnGlad to know you're anticipating for the next chap, and I'll try to get it up as soon as possible, thanks for reviewing!!!
Date: 04/05/11 06:44 am Title: Chapter 12
Oooooooohhh you don't know how happy I am to see this update!! SUPER HAPPY!!*flutterclaps* I've been waiting for this since.. Forever!! Hahahahaha..XD
I'm kind of disappointed with the lack of Tom/Bill here - but that's just the super-excited, silly me.. Georg and Gustav were funny too!! Hahahaha of course they'd think of something less paranormal-ish..XD It is bizarre how Tomina is somewhat immune to Bill, ne??XD I love the confused Bill too.. He just has to try some other methods to get his damsel. Yikeeeeeeee..XD
Yay for Spring Break!! More updates from yoooooouuu!!XD *flails* School's such a bitch, yeah? I'll wait for the next updates!!:D
Author's Response: I'm so sorry for the lack of Bill/Tom!!! >_<;;; My priority was to update the story since it's been a while. Sorry!!!! I promise to have more Bill/Tom soon (next chapter). Yeah, school and work are both bitches. At least I get a break from one of them (soon), which means, updates!!!! Can't wait for spring break! rn
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rnThanks for reviewing, you're the best!
Date: 03/04/11 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 11
this is awesome! i'm sitting at the edge of my chair for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks <3
Date: 03/02/11 07:43 am Title: Chapter 11
I just have to comment again as I can't get enough of Bill's bits of cheesiness here looooool...
"You'll hurt me more if you were to exclude me." - Demmeeeeet I forgot to comment about this line hahahaha... Maybe next time it could be something like, "It'll break me if something bad happens to you" loooooool cheezy much!! Okay, I'll stop *covers mouth*
You're right, I keep forgetting Tom's a tom-boy here... And yes, she has good intentions. She's just clumsy and a bit of an idiot still:P She's gonna have to learn a lot... That's why she needs Bill all the more. And Bill's really starting to fall for her hahahaha (yes, I'm sticking to that idea in my head) though I think she's could be a bit dense too.. So if ever Bill has another outburst or does a reckless move that will prove more of his attraction to Tomina, she won't get it right away... Lol and Bill will only get more distressed and then maybe he should just kiss her..XD OR!! OR!! Bill saves Tom from another huge trouble, which almost gave him a heart attack and he just kisses her all of a sudden in his relief!!! *flutterclaps* Now THAT would be sweet and funny..XD But enough my messing with the plot I'm getting carried away *peace sign*
I have questions!! Do the braille thingies on the pandoric cube mean something? Like some sort of code or puzzle they need to solve so they can free the souls of the dead? And is there something, or someone that's like... The super enemy - like enemy above all enemies? Am I gonna get a "it's top secret!!" for an answer? Looooool... I'll reeeeaaaally shut up now *zips mouth*
Author's Response: lol, you're so adorable <3! I wasn't even aware of the cheesiness in that line. Haha, thanks for pointing it out. I love how you're inputting a ton of your Bill/Tom romance scenario, and I'll tell you this, you're actually along the right path to how Bill will confess to Tomina, haha. rn
rnTo answer your question, the braille on the cube is actually like a symbol for a code. Because there are different sides to the cube and a ton of Braille dots, Tom and Bill can actually make a lot of combination, and some of the combination will tap into certain dimensions depending on it. I hope this makes some sense to you. And yes, there's a super enemy (an enemy above all enemies), and if you look back in some chapters I think you can draw a line to who this enemy might be, though their identity is still pretty much hidden.
Date: 03/02/11 12:29 am Title: Chapter 11
i love protective Bill, it's so cute. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm really curious about how everything is going to be solved with the cube. i can already see Tom getting herself into more trouble, and i kinda can't wait :D
Author's Response: Isn't he!!! Gosh I honestly wish there's more protective and masculine Bill fics out there. And yup! You saw the future, Tom will so get herself into more trouble, hehe.
Date: 03/01/11 07:30 am Title: Chapter 10
Ooooookkaaaaayyy... I guess this is just me, but I didn't like the first part - with the school's attention solely on Bill. I mean, Bill could have told them Tom was there too or something... The girl deserves credit too... But I shall drop this now since it's of little importance anyway... It's just me being... Mehh. Lol. AT LEAST Tom was still on Bill's mind upon going to class...XD
And Tom's an idiot gor going on her own. Without even a game plan or whatever... Not even a ready handy weapon just in case... She could have brought her phone or something too - or maybe she was just too distracted with the adrenaline rush. STILL!! She could have been more cautious...-_- GOOD THING she has Bill as bodyguard/protector, and Bill had noticed her missing early on.. *le sigh* She was brave, but a fool...
Author's Response: Well Bill did made a promise not to spread the word about Tom's new supernatural ability, and remember, Tom is a "nobody" in school at the moment while Bill is the #1 most popular, so yea everyone would only notice Bill.
rnIn a way, I guess you say that Tom's still growing from a little girl to an adult, hence her lack of plan, but she has good intentions.
Date: 03/01/11 07:15 am Title: Chapter 9
I gave my life to protect you - Biiiiiiill!! Hahahahaha... I wish there's some kind of follow up on that statement like, "and I will give my life again to protect you, so please trust me..." or some shit like that but meeehhhh too cheezy lol...XD
I just have to accept Tom's not the touchy-feely type here lol I was hoping she would like, cling onto Bill while she watched the family in the hospital. *slaps face*
I actually got teary eyed here on the last part where Tome came home and she just cried while she hugged her parents... That was a very nice scene:)
Author's Response: Well it's still early in the story, Tom's character is still maturing, and remember, she's a Tom-boy. I hope you didn't get too teary, I'd feel really bad if I made you cry really hard.
Date: 03/01/11 06:47 am Title: Chapter 7
*dreamy sigh* Oooooohhh how brave and chivalrous of Bill... Damn I'm loving it..XD Tom was kind of ehmm.. Idiotic when trying to make Bill NOT believe in what just happened. She's a bad actress lol and Bill's got a battle scar as proof too..
I feel sorry for Tomina though.. She didn't want any of it but she's the chosen one. Like she has any other choice. The ghosts will only haunt and torment her if she didn't...
AGAIN!! I'm loving how Bill can't just leave Tom alone in this crazy shit they're encountering. Some would be scared to death and just want out.. But Bill's sticking with Tom. Cuz he actually cares, whether he knows it or not (yet)...XD
Author's Response: Haha, "battle scar", I like the sound of that. Yeah, I adore brave and chivalrous Bill rather than diva Bill, hehe.
Date: 03/01/11 06:34 am Title: Chapter 5
Loooool I love the Tom and Bill moments..XD Every bit, although all they did is yell at each other. Heeheeeeee..XD Aaaaaaand I love the part where Bill's undressing Tom hahahahaha.. He at least took another perspective on how he saw Tom... Like he just realized she really is a girl - with that girl (and quite attractive) body (he did compliment Tom's body, ne?XD). Stupid Bill. Loooool... But Bill can't deny he does have this sort of 'attraction' or, 'pull' on Tom even before the undressing part. Cuz he just couldn't leave Tom on her own...XD
Date: 03/01/11 06:21 am Title: Chapter 3
Poor Tomi... She's totally terrified*huggles*
I actially got spooked in this chapter with the appearances of the dead:O
P.S. Your writing in 3rd person is more pleasant to read:) (I'm just not really a fan if 1st POV writing)
Date: 03/01/11 06:00 am Title: chapter 1
I just realized I haven't left much reviews on your fic so as I read this again (for the nth time) imma leave comments on some chapters:D I think this is an interesting story, something like an investigative series plus Supernatural vibe or Ghost whisperer vibe:D I'm kind of a fan on supernatural stuffs when I was younger:)
Author's Response: thanks for the comments
Date: 03/01/11 04:49 am Title: Chapter 11
Aaaawww... Bill was just so sweeeeeeet to Tomina..XD I'm kind of glad that there's a fic like this that's just ehmm... portrays a Waaaaay manly Bill.. And nothing like the fancy, diva Bill and such. Well you know. Bill was always the 'girl' so this is really new.. Love klutz Tomina, the damsel in distress and hero Bill loooool...
More Bill/Tom moments please!!:D Can I ask for like, fluff??XD Heeeeee... And I want more distressed Bill worrying about Tom till he just explodes and tells her how much she means to him. Eeeeeeeeeeekk demmet.XD
So who are the next victim?? Anticipation!! Cannot wait!!*flutterclaps*
Author's Response: YOU ARE AMAZING!!!! Thanks for the mass reviews, you have no idea how happy this makes me!!! rnYeah, I wanted my story to be kinda unique by making Bill an all-round hero instead of a diva, and Tom a female and somewhat of a dismal in distress. And I have a feeling you've read my mind for a distressed Bill exploding on Tom about her attraction lol, but again, I'm building up on plot and character for it, hehe.
rnOf course you may ask for fluff and more Bill/Tom moment!!! I'm trying to fit that in for the next chap, so anticipate for that!!! <3
Date: 02/14/11 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
i love this chapter! go tomina!
Date: 01/29/11 08:16 am Title: Chapter 10
Ok, I'm gonna tell you.
I love this story, you know why? Because I read all ten chapters in yesterday and I couldn't sleep at night cause I was scared as shit XD This is the first time I read something that scared me. You did a good job :D Keep Going ;)
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad I managed to interest you and scared you (in a good way). I was trying to make this fiction a thriller, but thankfully I somewhat managed. I'll update as soon as I can, because honestly I didn't really plot out the story, I just write whatever that comes to mind. Thanks again!
Date: 01/24/11 03:32 am Title: Chapter 10
ah! i can't wait to see what happens next! oh, please update soon, this story is so thrilling. I love how Bill seems to care about Tom, and noticed her missing. I hope Tom didnt get into too much trouble, and i wish someone would give her some credit too. i mean, geez, she's the one who started all this and people only notice Bill? that's lame. I really really like this story, please keep going!