Date: 12/27/10 05:54 pm Title: Stage 1
u made me cry...but i don't hate u for it...i love u
hope taht they'll be better
missed u
Author's Response: Oh my! *offers you a tissue box and comforting chocolates* I'm sorry! Well, I love you, too, dear. ♥
Date: 12/27/10 02:48 pm Title: Stage 1
o_o
Holy good damn skittles! WOW! This was...WOW!
Author's Response: Hope that's a good wow, haha!
Date: 12/27/10 01:02 am Title: Stage 1
Holycrap! So glad you didnt write Bill as a crying, weak person. Love that Bill was pissed and laid into Tom. 10 years shot to hell because Tom was thinking with the wrong head! I wanted to die when Bill realized the fact of the girl from the hall. And seriously, really, years of love destroyed because she was "hot"-Tom doesnt deserve Bill. God I cant wait for more!
Author's Response: YES! That's exactly it; it's pretty canon throughout the fandom for Bill to be relatively girly, and everyone assumes he's dainty and delicate just because he wears makeup, wears what he wants, and isn't as muscular as his brother, but the fact of it is, he's a man. I really wanted to get that point across, so I'm glad you liked that fact. =) I'm thrilled that you're enjoying this. Thank you so much!
Date: 12/26/10 10:28 pm Title: Stage 1
woah. This was definitely angsty. In some fucked up way, I liked that Tom and Bill fought physically. Because people always write Bill like he's a girl and he's not, and you wrote him perfectly. I really liked this, and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Exactly! I was just telling Jazmyne about that, actually! It's pretty much a fandom canon to characterize Bill likea girl, but the truth of the matter is that he's not a girl, you know? So there were two reasons for me doing that: 1. I wanted to get the point across that Bill is NOT a girl; he's a man. 2. just because there are two men in a relationship, gender roles don't have to be followed; why should one person have to be "the girl in the relationship" when they're both men? Now that I've pretty much spammed you with my thought process, I'm gonna say thank you so much for the lovely review, and close my mouth. XD
Date: 12/26/10 09:56 pm Title: Stage 1
cuz she was hot??? that's the best that ass could come up with???
Author's Response: He was being honest, haha! I know it sounds like such a lame response, but really, when someone cheats, it's all about the physical, isn't it? ;)
Date: 12/26/10 09:01 pm Title: Stage 1
I love this. I think one of my favorite things about it is that one of them doesn't back down. They throw punches because that's how it is. At the end of the day, they're both men. I can't wait to read the next two parts. :D
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Yes, yes, yes! *_* Gold star for you, because you're right; at the end of the day, they are both men. The next part is coming in about fifteen minutes, so it'll be available for you whenever. =) Thank you for the awesome review!
Date: 12/26/10 08:06 pm Title: Stage 1
I really didn't know how this fic would be when I began reading it, but it really drew me in. It seems so normal, the relationship aspect, and I mean that in a good way. I mean they were just living their lives together and Bill and maybe even Tom as well thought everything was fine, and then...it wasn't. It just goes to show you that your life can fall apart so quickly, very believable. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Well, I'm certainly glad that you gave it a chance. And I could just kiss you, because you caught everything that I was trying to get across! I was grinning from ear to ear when I read this. I'm glad that you enjoyed the first chapter, and the second is about to be posted. Thank you so much!
Date: 12/26/10 08:02 pm Title: Stage 1
i love it, My stomach is twisting, thats how much i love it. i seriously cant wait!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you love it, love. =) Thank you so much! Second chapter's about to be posted! ♥
Date: 12/26/10 07:40 pm Title: Stage 1
This is such an epic fic I want more already. The way you make me feel everything Bill is going through is amazing! I feel as though I would react the same way though all the pain and hurt god I wanted to slap Tom too! I can proudly say I am in love with this fic please update soon :)
Author's Response: More shall come soon, and I don't mean Tokio Hotel's version of "soon", haha! It's already finished, so it's a matter of posting. Wow, that's...wow. I'm not sure what to say, because I'm in such a state of awe. Thank you!
Date: 12/26/10 06:53 pm Title: Stage 1
Oh my god, this was like watching a train crash in slow motion. The further it got, the more nervous I became. This was so intense. The moment Bill bumped into that girl, I got a mini heart attack. Tom is...being very nonchalant about his cheating, but I guess it's needed, since it triggered Bill's anger even more. What I don't understand is how Bill went two whole weeks knowing his partner went behind his back, and not reacting at the moment he found out. But again, it made it more intense I guess. This story is briliant, very gripping. I'm dying for the following chapters. This is excellence.
Author's Response: I'm really glad that it had such an effect! Tom is just... huh. During the two weeks that Bill went knowing about his cheating, Tom had been trying to bring it up; Tom knew it was something that they needed to talk about, but Bill was in denial. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it, and... adfjklasfdasfdas "excellence?" *_* That's pretty much the highest compliment ever; thanks so much!