Date: 06/29/12 05:50 pm Title: I Just Can't Do This Without, We'll find Our Own Way Through
Just beautiful
TuT
painfully sad but beautiful
i just love it
ohh gosh this is the second GeoGus i read i think hahhaa really awesome i think lol but is strange hehehe
but really love it
thank you for share it
Date: 06/13/12 08:34 am Title: I Just Can't Do This Without, We'll find Our Own Way Through
this was a really good story!
Date: 01/01/11 10:53 pm Title: I Just Can't Do This Without, We'll find Our Own Way Through
You did it brilliantly. :))
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Date: 01/01/11 09:11 pm Title: I Just Can't Do This Without, We'll find Our Own Way Through
This was an amazing story. It made me smile the whole time I read it. You deserve a lot more reviews, so I contribute to my poor English, and I hope you understand me. J. :o) (with Google Translator as my assistant)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I think a lot of people missed this story, it got buried a bit under other posts. Google Translator seems to be serving you well so far. I'm excited to start "Time-Space Story." I have been tracking it, but I haven't had the time to read it. I appreciate your review, especially for all the lengths you went through to review.
Date: 12/30/10 06:21 am Title: I Just Can't Do This Without, We'll find Our Own Way Through
Awwwwwwwwww, sweet and angsty and fluffy and awww.
I'm so happy Bill went back to Tom. :)
I think this was well written, except maybe for some of the confession parts, the dialogue seemed a bit too much like a monologue, scripted, fairytale stereotype, if you get my drift... and it was all a bit too predictable, drab.
No worries though, the rest was fab. :)
I LOVED how Tom knew to pack everything Bill loved. I think that part held the most meaning, really showed that Tom is always there, knows and cares about Bill most, etc. Also-- smashed TV screen- his beloved TV I'm sure, took the brunt of Tom's anger. Wonderful! Kind of shows how nothing else really matters to him except Bill.
Also, the G's= more Awwww. lol.
Oh, and Tom spying on Bill's date. Brilliant. :)
Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I do know that sometimes when I write dialog I try to put in all the lines I think are good and that leads to monologue type blocks of dialog. In this case though I think it was extremely warranted. Bill needed to get everything he was feeling out, he needed Tom to understand exactly why he was coming to this decision about them and that he didn't come to it lightly. He had days worth of thoughts piling up in his mind and it all just needed to be said to help them move on from it and into a relationship. I'm happy that you liked it for the most part though. Thanks again for reviewing, every bit of feedback helps.
Date: 12/27/10 09:21 am Title: I Just Can't Do This Without, We'll find Our Own Way Through
You should write faster (sorry I know you're busy) because I love reading your stories.... :D
Author's Response: haha, thank you so much. This made me laugh all over again. I'm sorry it took so long to answer, I was just going through all of my stories to find unanswered reviews. In case you didn't know I'm currently posting a few story called Fault Lines. I hope you check it out.
Date: 12/26/10 10:07 am Title: I Just Can't Do This Without, We'll find Our Own Way Through
Love so much. I love how the G's are in here and how the twins realize how they feel.
Author's Response: Thanks. This was my first try at writing the G's together as a couple. It was only a matter of time before Bill came to his senses. He and Tom are meant to be.
Date: 12/26/10 04:43 am Title: I Just Can't Do This Without, We'll find Our Own Way Through
lovely from beginning to end. I loved gustav's role in this too. thank you. =)
Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoyed it. It was surely a labor of love for me. I always see Gustav giving wise advice whenever it's needed and trying to help you come to the proper conclusion. He is wise.
Date: 12/25/10 05:46 pm Title: I Just Can't Do This Without, We'll find Our Own Way Through
Very good. You described the tension and confusion very well. Am glad that Bill realised there was no point in looking for a fantasy lover when his soul mate was right next to him.
*Maria
Author's Response: I think I'd have a hard time not looking toward Tom if I were Bill. haha. Thanks so much for the review.
Date: 12/25/10 03:30 pm Title: I Just Can't Do This Without, We'll find Our Own Way Through
Btw, you left the italics on. And I love how you ask me random things; and I never know what they are for. At any rate- I know you worked yourself to the bone on this...and it paid off! Love ya, girlie!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. You of all people know how hard I worked on this. I don't remember what I asked you to pick between for this particular story but you can almost always assume that when I ask you thinks like that it's for the story. Hope you and G are having a great Christmas.