Date: 06/25/11 05:02 am Title: III The pain of separation
Oh wow! You updated! This was epic!
Author's Response: yes, I finally did. Thanks for the review, I hope to update soon again!
Date: 06/06/11 05:02 am Title: II Marcus's prize.
Love this story!!! I love history and to find a fic set in ancient times - and so well-written at that!! - makes me so happy.
Can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you love it so much and I'm really happy you think it's so wel written, I hope to update soon ^-^
Date: 05/30/11 05:54 am Title: I Brother of Tom
omg, I love your story. Can't wait to see the next chapter :)
Author's Response: wow, thank you. I'll try to update soon!
Date: 05/06/11 07:54 am Title: II Marcus's prize.
Continue, please? ;* kisses
Author's Response: I feel like I owe you a big apology, since you liked this story so much. And I am sorry for not updating for so long, but life hasn't been treating me very kindly after i posted the second chapter. I plan on finishing this, so no, this is not abadoned and I hope you'll have a little patience with me and will still enjoy the story. Thank you so much!
Date: 05/06/11 07:52 am Title: II Marcus's prize.
It's cliff hanger,. Oh God. I wish you didn't abandon this story, did you? Oh please don't . It's close to the rapey!
Date: 05/06/11 07:32 am Title: I Brother of Tom
I forgot something, the senator was pretty rude! I hope anyone who gonna rape Bill is a goodlooking man, :D
Date: 05/06/11 07:29 am Title: I Brother of Tom
Oh WOW. It's typical my favorite story; period piece, AU, and RAPE!! Yayayay I am so excited, I was so lucky to find it!
Date: 02/05/11 01:23 am Title: II Marcus's prize.
MORE! HURRY! IT WAS AT A GOOD PART! PLEASE, HURRY!!!!!
Date: 01/16/11 10:08 am Title: II Marcus's prize.
The senator is in for a shock when he sees what his actions will unleash as Tom definately won't take Bill being taken lightly. I just hope Georg can tell him what happened in time.
Author's Response: Tom VS Marcus will be very interesting for me to write. Good guess on Tom's reaction, but I wouldn't focus your concern on the Senator, but rather on what he's going to do to Bill. Poor guy. *laughs evilly* Thanks for the review, liebchen!
Date: 01/16/11 03:53 am Title: II Marcus's prize.
*gasp* Poor Bill! and Georg, I hope that he's okay. This is not good, Tom is going to be after heads when he knows that they've taken Bill. Very much liking this and looking forward to more.
Author's Response: an angry Tom is certainly my goal, that, and some angst for Bill.. *shifty eyes* but don't tell Tom I said that. Shh. more coming soon! thanks for the kindness!
Date: 01/16/11 12:29 am Title: II Marcus's prize.
this is a veru interesting and well written story i hope u continue with it, i will definitely read it :)
Author's Response: certainly continuing this, hopefully getting to updating soon-er. Thanks, that's really appreciated and thank you for the review! *hugs*
Date: 01/15/11 10:24 pm Title: II Marcus's prize.
Wow this is REALLY good! Please keep it up! Can't wait for more :D
Author's Response: Wow, that's so kind, next chapter hopefully coming soon-er. Thank you so much for the review!
Date: 12/27/10 05:50 pm Title: I Brother of Tom
I was going to note that Köln recieves its name because it was one of the "Colonia" of the Roman Empire, but I see your end note has already beaten me to it. There is so much historical and ancient facts in this so far, that I think my mind just exploded with the awesomeness of it all. :D
My only suggestion is that your spacing seems to be off in the visual format of the text. (I mean that some paragraphs seem to blend with others and they don't have spaces in between them.) Other than that, excellent job, and I can't wait to see where this heads!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I did a lot of research for the story and it's great to hear it payed off. And as I said, I'm descended from a Germanic tribe AND I'm a history-nerd, so it's kind of OCD-ish, as far as it comes to realism. rnThe spacing thing is very curious, because there is noting off with it on my computer, but thanks for the warning, I'll take a look at it. rnThanks for the review, you made my day, especially since I love your ancient fic so much!rn*kisses*
Date: 12/25/10 01:33 pm Title: I Brother of Tom
Really interesting start I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: as I can't wait to write more. Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/24/10 11:09 pm Title: I Brother of Tom
God this has such potential to be twincest...but overly protective and very affectionate Tom is acceptable as well
Author's Response: It was meant to be twincest, at first. But I really wanted to go with the historical aspect, more then the smut, as lovely as it is. Thanks for the review!
