Date: 10/24/14 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey nice context but I think it needs a bit more feeling. We don't know why Tom did it and Adrian she likes it and hates it. Kinda weird. :) keep writing. cheers
Date: 03/10/13 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Normally I never read anything other than Tom/Bill stories but this on caught my eye and I really loved it!!!Great story :)
Date: 03/10/13 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Normally I never read anything other than Tom/Bill stories but this on caught my eye and I really loved it!!!Great story :)
Date: 12/19/12 05:28 am Title: Chapter 1
This story is amazing! I've read it 5 times already. Never would imagine Tom raping his little sister before :)
Date: 10/31/11 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow wee! I like it xDD
Date: 07/18/11 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
normally i don't like incest: but his was soo HOT!!! Especially when she was calling him 'big brother'_well done!
Date: 04/21/11 04:49 am Title: Chapter 1
I hate incest but this is very well written. Nice!
Author's Response: Thanks! It really says something when someone who doesn't like the specific genre says that they like the story! rnThanks for your review!
Date: 02/11/11 03:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Tom! WTF!! You sick bastard! Poor Adrian! This was well written.
Date: 12/24/10 03:45 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG...*is wet* ILY SO MUCH RIGHT NOW ^_^