I liked this story, the story line is one told more times than I can count to(Bill wants to jump, Tom saves him. Or jump together, are hundreds of them) but you made something new, intresting of it, twisted it around and did something good out of something I didn't think could be told in a good way. Thanks for posting it, read your other story yesterday, looking forward to more storys from you in the future.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yeah, I figured that it was a story that had been done a lot. I got it in the Prompts section, and I thought to myself "this is over done, what can I do to make it unique?" Your review means a lot! <3