Date: 04/30/23 11:58 pm Title: In the words of Amy "UNF UNF UNF"
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 10/12/13 12:54 am Title: In the words of Amy "UNF UNF UNF"
Hehe awesome
Date: 02/27/12 12:01 am Title: In the words of Amy "UNF UNF UNF"
Awesome job ^-^
Date: 02/26/12 11:55 pm Title: In the words of Amy "UNF UNF UNF"
Awesome job ^-^
Date: 08/30/11 07:20 pm Title: In the words of Amy "UNF UNF UNF"
“Besides, I can get off when you bottom next time,” Bill said with a delighted smile, giggling like a maniac. Tom’s expression fell at the idea, but his face heated at the same time. If he liked what Bill had just done to him, who was to say he wouldn’t like that as well.
It would be nice if you could write about this next time :D
Author's Response: I'll see what I can do lol. Thank you for reviewing :D
Date: 02/12/11 12:33 am Title: In the words of Amy "UNF UNF UNF"
haha!!! i wasnt sure wehre that was going but i liked it!! silly girl for thinking it would freak me out... ive yet to find a sex story that freaked me out.. well, correction.. theres one on here where tom wants to lick bills eyes.. THAT was weird.. but this wasnt!
Author's Response: awww *happy clap* im sor glad (relieved) that you liked this. hmm eye licking? *cringe* dont wanna know haha. Thank you so much for the review, I appreciate it *tacklehug*
Date: 12/22/10 01:32 pm Title: In the words of Amy "UNF UNF UNF"
*is useless puddle of goo*
Do you expect me to write something coherent after reading THAT?
So hot and sexy. I loved the build-up, your characterizations, and the whole "Can I kiss you?" thing. It's a seemingly innocent way to ask for something so naughty.
I really liked this.
Nice work!
Author's Response: *giggles* thankies for your review. *mops you up* Glad you liked my not so innocent Bill and that you overall enjoyed reading this *dances*
Date: 12/21/10 11:11 pm Title: In the words of Amy "UNF UNF UNF"
Bill is cute in this fic, trying to be demure and stopping Tom from being crude. Having the twins in that position is also super hot! YAY for botTOM!! lol.
I liked this fic, but I also gotta say another proofreading would help. Nothing major, just diversify your language a bit more, and make sure your sentences make sense. It's good the way it is, but another polishing would make this fic stand out more, which i think it deserves.
This fic has some really super-dooper sexy images. Great job. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I do realize it could use a good polishing, seeing as this was a Christmas present for my beta it was a bit of a rush job because she was going on vacation and I had to get it submitted to her. And it might be a little off seeing as this is the first time I've ever written botTOM lol.
Date: 12/21/10 02:23 pm Title: In the words of Amy "UNF UNF UNF"
damn...that was...SEXY
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so X3
Date: 12/21/10 12:09 pm Title: In the words of Amy "UNF UNF UNF"
Oh my! This was so hot :) Thanks for the yummy gift. Bill rimming must be considered very rare!
*Maria
Author's Response: thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. and i just couldn't resist writing Bill doing that seeing just how rare it is *giggles*
Date: 12/21/10 11:54 am Title: In the words of Amy "UNF UNF UNF"
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! *runs around in circles* Fuck, this is like the best Christmas present I've gotten this year. (Unless there's ass nomming on my Humanoid City DVD, which I doubt.) So this is top of the list. :D :D :D
And FUCK IS IT AWESOME. I love sexy Tom. And sexy Bill licking sexy Tom? Yum. ♥
I love youuuuuu, twinny!! :D
Author's Response: *huggles* well i'm glad i could give you a present you liked twinny! hehe I'm really glad how you liked it. I was a little nervous that you wouldn't like "poofy" Bill (the hair), but if you don't like anything in this i certainly cant tell *victory dance* Merry Christmas my lovely twin! i love yoooooou toooooo!
Date: 12/21/10 11:47 am Title: In the words of Amy "UNF UNF UNF"
I loved this!!! Tom comes so fast it's adorable :D
Author's Response: hehe, Tom comming FAST? Impossible *snickers*.... okay yeah I just had to do that do him.
Date: 12/21/10 11:17 am Title: In the words of Amy "UNF UNF UNF"
Great present, I think ;)
Author's Response: haha thank you, she thinks so too :3