Date: 01/15/11 07:09 pm Title: 08. I wish.
of course I don't mind sharing my thoughts. I thought tis was an absolutely adorable little x-mas fic. There weren't very many glaring mistakes that I noticed. You did refer to Simone as a He is this chapter instead of a she though, you had that same problem a few different places I just ca't pinpoint. Great work. I am totally going to go read some more of your work.
Author's Response:
Aw you're so sweet, thank you. Oh that's right, I just corrected that. I did? I guess I'd have to check out the story later for those mistakes haha. Thank you so much, and I'm glad you enjoyed this story :D
Date: 12/30/10 12:50 pm Title: 08. I wish.
=D
I really liked this story
Author's Response:
thank you! :D
Date: 12/29/10 07:24 pm Title: 08. I wish.
omg I laughed so hard when Bill asked Tom if he wanted the mandolin for new years! This was a really good story I loved it! Very good job! ^^
Author's Response:
Haha I thought it was funny too ;D Thank you so much!
Date: 12/29/10 12:02 am Title: 08. I wish.
So, the notification got lost in my inbox mail, buuuuut i manage to read it! lol i loved it! you capture the fluffiness of Xmas and the love and passion between the twins, so special.
probably my favourite Xmas fic, thank you so, so, so much!
Happy New Year!!!
Author's Response:
Aw thank you so much, I'm glad you think I managed to write all that! Thanks to you for reading it. Happy New Year!
Date: 12/28/10 11:11 pm Title: 08. I wish.
Oh no-no more magical musical instruments please---lol. This story was really cute, I loved it!
Author's Response:
Haha, aw thank you ;D
Date: 12/25/10 11:15 pm Title: 08. I wish.
that was great merry christmas!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Date: 12/25/10 08:32 pm Title: 08. I wish.
haha, the ending is funny. this wa ssuch an amazing story, and it was really sad too. i felt so bad for tom. i would die if i didnt have my brothers with me. but anyway, this was freakin awesome!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you think so :)
Date: 12/25/10 06:45 pm Title: 08. I wish.
poor tomi!!! love the end
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D
Date: 12/25/10 06:13 pm Title: 08. I wish.
Awhh that was lovely :') I quite liked William, especially the bit where he called security. I don't know why...it just made me laugh!
Ooh, and Merry Christmas! xD
Author's Response:
Haha the security thing was funny, I know! it was supposed to make you laugh ;)
Date: 12/25/10 11:10 am Title: 08. I wish.
a lot more typos in this chapter than any other. but overall, a very cute story. thanks for finishing it by christmas! have a merry christmas!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I corrected some stuffs already. Happy new years!
Date: 12/24/10 07:16 pm Title: 01. Christmas Shopping
I liked the story, but I would like to know what happens with William and Tom? After the wish a naked William must be sitting beside a naked Tom. And the not-twin-tom don΄t know about anything.
That must be really funny. Will and Tom have to get together! Are you writing a sequel? That would definitely be a interesting story! Hope you do!
Author's Response:
What happens with William and Tom? Nothing because William doesn't exits because he's Bill, so William just vanished, just like the other Tom. I don't know about a sequel, though it'd be funny :D
Date: 12/24/10 04:16 pm Title: 08. I wish.
hahahaha lovely story !! I like it
thank you thank you ^____^
Author's Response:
Thanks to you for reading it :D
Date: 12/24/10 12:42 pm Title: 08. I wish.
It was such a sweet ending! I still think I'd feel bad for Mr. Engel, though D: No matter, this story was just adorable and so cute and I loved it! (:
Author's Response:
He'll be ok, he's Bill now so no problem :) Thank you!
Date: 12/24/10 11:28 am Title: 07. I am inside this fucking wish.
Greatttttt^________^ what a great chapter !!!
William is so lovely even if he doesn't know Tom he tried hard to made him happy
well he seemed that he want to be in the other word .. with Tom ^^
Author's Response:
William is nice ;) and yep he did want to be part of Tom's world.
Date: 12/23/10 01:09 pm Title: 07. I am inside this fucking wish.
Omg. This story is a jewel. Wahh its sad theres only one chapter left. :(
Author's Response:
Aw thank you!
Date: 12/23/10 01:00 pm Title: 07. I am inside this fucking wish.
Wow I wonder if Bill spent 3 million on that guitar in his world. Tom is just putting William in expense XD
Author's Response:
Haha of course Bill didnt bought that guitar in 3 millions in his universe.
Date: 12/23/10 11:51 am Title: 07. I am inside this fucking wish.
Amazing!!! I can't w8 for the last chapter!
Date: 12/23/10 11:35 am Title: 07. I am inside this fucking wish.
This is great! I can't wait until the last chapter!
Date: 12/23/10 10:42 am Title: 07. I am inside this fucking wish.
such a cute chapter =D
Date: 12/23/10 10:25 am Title: 07. I am inside this fucking wish.
They just have to let them have the guitar in time...its Christmas eve, they need a happy ending!
Author's Response:
They did have a happy ending :D