Date: 07/24/11 10:16 pm Title: Definitely/Maybe
“And asked her out instead of paying for a lawsuit? Sly.”
LOL worthy :D
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: I'll get to work =)
Date: 07/24/11 10:05 pm Title: Beer/Wine
"Plus, really? Opposites attract? Not Tom’s best work. Shame on King Manwhore."
LOL :D
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks.
Date: 07/24/11 09:47 pm Title: Vegetables/ Candy
"And anyhow, you’re too tall to dance without looking like a totem pole brought to life."
That made me laugh so much haha :D
I love your writing !
Author's Response: I'm glad, thank you!
Date: 04/15/11 08:04 am Title: Definitely/Maybe
I like. Scratch that, I love. Zippy, smart-Jane's the black cloud to Bill's silver lining. A great OFC, with a -dare I say it?-nice back story. Bill's more in character than I'd expect in a story like this, you know, flailing and grinning and generally uber-everything. Sometimes that kind of characterisation just doesn't make sense-but it totally does here. Parts of this story made me laugh out loud, they really did. I'm really glad you didn't delete this story, and please, please continue writing!!
Author's Response: Your review makes me so happy. I'm glad you feel like that, and I'll try to update as soon as possible. I'm sorry it takes so long, but I'll try to work as fast as I can.
Date: 01/02/11 11:46 pm Title: Definitely/Maybe
:D Wowza!!! I like it so much I could die! Not really -shifty eyes- but you get my drift! Bill is really growing on me, he's such a great character. And Jane is just...funny, too funny. I can't wait to see more of this Lisa girl :D She sounds like a cheeseball. Let's hope, for Jane's sake, that it doesn't run in the family :D Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: XD No problem, thanks for the review!
Date: 12/31/10 04:05 pm Title: Definitely/Maybe
Happy New Year! Still love this story. Its funny and cute :3
Author's Response: Thanks, and happy 2011 to you too!
Date: 12/29/10 10:29 pm Title: Vegetables/ Candy
YESSSS!! So glad to see this is back! I thought I was losing it when I saw it in the recents, LOL. XD
Author's Response: Well, you're not losing it, fortunately XD
Date: 12/28/10 06:23 am Title: Definitely/Maybe
alice, who the fuck is alice!
haha love that song
im excited to see how the blind date goes and trust romantic bill to get into a situation like that
Author's Response: Lol, me too. And it is very like Bill, isn't it? XD
Date: 12/28/10 04:36 am Title: Definitely/Maybe
hi love!
Author's Response: Hey ^^
Date: 12/26/10 11:50 am Title: Beer/Wine
Yay its back :D
Sorry I didn't review it the first time, I don't do it very often 'cause I always end up getting really into it and start typing way to fast so my spelling becomes absolutley appaulling and I look like a pleb...of course checking over my spelling before I press submit would be too easy. I can be a right dickhead someitmes.
Anyway, I'm really interested in this story, I think you're a brill writer (I've read the majority of your other stuff too) and I'll keep checking for updates and make a point of reviewing in future :)
Much love x
Author's Response: Reading this makes me so happy ^^ It's nice that you reviewed, I always love hearing what readers have to say, and I'm majorly flattered :3
Date: 12/22/10 03:07 pm Title: Beer/Wine
YAY! I really really really really like this. Bill is as annoying as fuck, yet so cute. Jane is friggin hilarious, as all your female protagonists are :D Well done! Your one of my favourite het writers on the site :) Have fun at the beach! ^^
Author's Response: Thanks, I plan to ^^ And it pleases me that you think my OFCs are hilarious - you made my day!
Author's Response: Thanks, I plan to ^^ And it pleases me that you think my OFCs are hilarious - you made my day!
Date: 12/22/10 10:50 am Title: Beer/Wine
Glitteritis. I suffer from that. Anywho, let me tell you why I like this: Jane is real. I love how angsty she is. And she reminds me, of me. LOVE IT.
Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad you feel that way. And I think all Bill fans are fatally affected by Glitteritis XD
Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad you feel that way. And I think all Bill fans are fatally affected by Glitteritis XD
Date: 12/18/10 10:48 pm Title: Vegetables/ Candy
YAY! Cute picture. Were you 5 chapters in when you deleted it last time?
Author's Response: Was I? I'm not sure. I think I was in four. I'm posting the chapters differently this time, so I'm sorry if you guys get confused -_-'
Date: 12/18/10 02:09 am Title: Vegetables/ Candy
Omg ur back! Yay!
I actually did a double take when I saw this in the recents. I couldn't believe my eyes but I'm so happy ur back, sweetie (:
Hell if its reviews u want, hun, I'll write you one a day until you post the next chapter ;] just as long as u keep this lovely story up and running. Can hardly wait for more!
Author's Response: Lol, no, it's not the lack of reviews! I just got tired of writing something that people didn't seem to be interested in. It flatters me enourmously that you were happy to see it back, though ^^ I'm going to try to finish this, reviews or no reviews. And thank you!
Date: 12/17/10 09:41 am Title: Vegetables/ Candy
Well. TSOA is glad to see this up and running again, 'cause I swear, it's killing me, not knowing what was what...
Author's Response: Thanks XD I'm sorry for being such a bitch about the deleting.