Date: 06/12/20 03:04 am Title: Please.. please don't stop.
this is a good story!
please update this!
Date: 01/27/15 05:52 pm Title: Please.. please don't stop.
i wold love to see the story continued, good smut is hard to come by. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I've been sorta on a slump in the Fanfiction. Been working on my own original stuff.
Date: 02/07/12 06:27 am Title: Please.. please don't stop.
Haha
Author's Response: What's funny?
Date: 05/24/11 06:48 pm Title: Please.. please don't stop.
love the game. love this story more!! >///<
Author's Response: You're review made me so happy! I hardly ever get reviews these days.
Date: 02/14/11 09:36 pm Title: It's a mans world.
Oh woot danke and geil can't wait!
Date: 02/13/11 10:40 pm Title: It's a mans world.
Aww bummers oh well :)
Author's Response: *gives hand made lollipops with condoms inside* Here, have a happy V-day and think of this - while this fic is finished I have others in the works; and one of them involves IzzyKaulitz or one of her plots at least.
Date: 02/13/11 01:54 am Title: It's a mans world.
So was this only a two shot D:
Author's Response: There is supposed to be a third part, no more sex in it, but with Classes putting insane amounts of homework on us and my moving in May to live permanently with my twin across the country from where I go to school currently - yea. Count this as finished. =^.^= Sorry
Date: 12/23/10 06:30 am Title: Please.. please don't stop.
holy ****! That is like the hottest thing i've ever read!
Author's Response: >.> <.< O.o Seriously? Thank you for saying that, but I am sure there is stuff way hotter than what I write on here.
Date: 12/23/10 02:36 am Title: Please.. please don't stop.
Very hot! Love that Bill has an attitude.
Author's Response: I love that he has an attitude too. Most of the time, my Bill is just quiet.
Date: 12/22/10 07:35 pm Title: Please.. please don't stop.
This is so hot, and it's so nice to read some good PWP that is written well and makes sense xD
And that game, by the way, is just as hot! Thanks again for sending it to me :)
Author's Response: ^_^ I try my best to make my brain less Hatter-ish and more Alice when I write, I guess it worked this time! And you're welcome. Told you that game was inspiring *o*
Date: 12/22/10 06:40 pm Title: Please.. please don't stop.
woooow this story is crazy and shameless. looooooove it!
Author's Response: Well the author would need to know the meaning of shame in order to use it in a fic. J/k thanks for the reading & leaving a review.
Date: 12/21/10 08:09 pm Title: It's a mans world.
Sexy XD
Author's Response: I know right? lol
Date: 12/20/10 05:24 pm Title: It's a mans world.
Goddamn, girl! That was somehow so very hot. The bold and obscene language you used here was brave as well as the way you just simply went to a scenario with so many questionable thoughts.
Nasty and dirty and I love it! Give me moar! :)
Author's Response: I swear I will finish before I leave for the holidays. And thanks for noticing the language ^_^!! I actually wanna work in the Porn Industry, twin won't let me though.
Date: 12/20/10 01:43 pm Title: It's a mans world.
Heck yeah :D Save the toes :D
Author's Response: Toes are safe, and I am staring at a pair of hooker heels with love in my eyes.
Date: 12/20/10 06:06 am Title: It's a mans world.
Oh wow, what an inspirational game that is! XD Hahaha, I checked in on your profile a bit to see your bio, and yes, you do break some of your own writing rules!! hahaha! But it's ok. I love the random PWP just as much as I love the elaborate story filled with plot twists and intricate details... :P This is just so funny and sexy! The Anis and Hagen bits are awesome! XD Please write more!
Author's Response: The game is so frakking funny, and I am nearly done with chapter 2. Had to pause for a bit for twin time and pancakes and sausage on sticks.
Date: 12/20/10 05:22 am Title: It's a mans world.
Well snaps o.o He isn't going to go after your toes is he
Author's Response: Naww I have a pair of catch that would f-his shit up if he came for my toes.
Date: 12/20/10 02:31 am Title: It's a mans world.
dun dun dun XD Don't let it be to naughty or you'll get coal in your stocking from santa xD
Author's Response: My Santa is a goat who eats the toes of naughty children. >.> No coal here.
Date: 12/19/10 05:30 pm Title: It's a mans world.
XD Awesome. Hopefully you wont take to many more naps in the midst of writing it xD
Author's Response: A few naps here and there xD I've 244 words to go to make the 500 word limit. Chapter 3 might not ever come, this year xD cause I have a very lovely and naughty trip planned.
Date: 12/18/10 07:07 pm Title: It's a mans world.
Well snap o.o Whens the next chapter coming out? Soon I hope XD
Author's Response: I fell asleep while writing the next chapter. XD I'm already 200+ words into it, just gotta figure out how to end this beastly porn disguising its self as a fan fic.
Date: 12/18/10 02:50 pm Title: It's a mans world.
Quite intrigued. I hope to read the rest.
Author's Response: OoO Y-you read my fic..... OMG!! I have read ALL of yours and you have read mine! *dies*