Date: 12/30/10 05:34 am Title: eighth
that was.... that was... very intense and... and.. jesus i have no idea what to say! it's... i was so happy when i saw this one updated, finally.. ive been waiting, but thats just me not having alife. and youre excused since you were at a holiday! hoped you had a merry christmas! and thank you for this... this was *_* WOOOOW! its a very, very good wow! I'm... I actually read it twice! Youre an amazing author, firedancer!
Date: 12/30/10 03:44 am Title: eighth
I'm so happy to hear that there is two more chapters. I was sure this was going to be the end for some reason. Anyway, I loved this! XD I can't wait for the next update!
Date: 12/30/10 02:58 am Title: eighth
Hot stuff! I'm glad you explained the positions very detailed because I was very intrigued how they'd do this :) (I saw Requiem for a Dream - and that was not how it was done :) ) This was much better thank you. You're letting their mad love shine through and I especially loved how quiet Tommy is compared to Bill who can't keep her passion locked in.
*Maria
Date: 12/30/10 02:51 am Title: eighth
Awh, I love these girls so much.
Date: 12/30/10 02:44 am Title: eighth
Awwww so beautiful :) more soon :)
Date: 12/30/10 01:59 am Title: eighth
AHH!! once again i just finished your last story, and i mentioned this one... and when i refreshed the page, THIS story pops up!! woop!! oooOOOOOoooo, i love the super duper shmexy sexytimes you reveal!! but ohh nooooo, only two more chappies left!? mer :( ima miss these two
Date: 12/24/10 11:42 am Title: seventh
Of course! Keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going keep going! XD
Date: 12/23/10 10:25 pm Title: sixth
I totally understand her. Those 3 words are so hard to say sometimes.
Date: 12/23/10 10:01 pm Title: fifth
She shouldn't be scared to lose Tom like that. It's not all about sex.
Date: 12/23/10 09:36 pm Title: seventh
Please do go on... heehee. So much in this chapter I loved--Tommy singing Blue Christmas and the image of them hugging in the snow, Bill's "you can has", and just their general characterization here--I loved it and can't wait to see what Bill has up her sleeve with the Christmas present.
Date: 12/23/10 04:15 pm Title: seventh
The next chapter sounds promising. :D Goo things come to those who wait, yes? Oooh... I made a dirty joke. :P Sorry, Tommy's got to me. Cute reunion for our happy couple, I like it. :D
Jane
Date: 12/23/10 02:25 pm Title: seventh
I'm so relieved! They're back together! Whew. Threatening to break them apart was mean, you know.
I'm amused that Bill resolves to make a plan and straightens her back and thinks of herself as Jorg Kaulitz's daughter... and then she still doesn't know what to do. Aww, but it's all right. Tommy loves her as she is. ♥
Tommy is so amazing! Her surprise is so lovely, and even sweeter because she goes through with it even when they've had a fight. She's dreamy. And the first thing Bill says to her is "What are you doing here?" *facepalm* And resists going out where Tommy is being romantic because it's cold. *double facepalm* Hee! It's endearing, though, and at least she tells Tommy she loves her after the song. ♥
The whole exchange when Bill first says she loves Tommy -- Tommy asking her to repeat herself and Bill saying they suck -- is just so good! The perfect amount of sweet and funny. *g* I love that Bill says they suck and means it (well, at least she means the part about them needing a new singer). Hee!
Omg and Tommy teasing Bill. "You what? I can't quite make that out. What is it you're saying?" They make me so happy!
Georg is really funny, too. I'm glad Bill thinks it's not going to be their last paying gig. They could be something great together... *g*
Their talk about Chantelle makes me so glad, and intense Tommy and happy kisses even more so! I love that she sounds pathetic and indignant when Bill says no. :D But then it ended. And I definitely want more. I think Bill is going to give Tommy something that's worth the wait, even longer than a few minutes... I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter!
Date: 12/23/10 01:43 pm Title: seventh
Unffffff such a tease! Aw Tommy, all romantic and singing and cute ^_^ So turns out Bills was overreacting a little I guess. With me right along with her, loads of flailing before I found out the truth :D That was such a sweet thing to do, aw Tommy, how lucky Bill is to have her. And vice versa!
I'm DYING for the next update *___* But as ever, I'll wait for as long as it takes :D Happy Holidays!
Date: 12/23/10 10:00 am Title: seventh
oooooooooooooooooooooo
i cant wait to read whats next!
Date: 12/23/10 08:54 am Title: seventh
*happy sigh* *bows deep* Thank you *-* awwh, Tommy was just so insanely cute and adorable singing to Bill! I practically melted and I'm so so so jealous of Bill having Tommy ;_; I wish I could have someone like Tommy...some day...
Date: 12/23/10 08:52 am Title: seventh
Love it. Loooooooooooooooooove it.
Date: 12/23/10 05:45 am Title: seventh
Aw, that was so sweet of Tom! And I'm thrilled Bill managed to say she loved her.
This was such a charming chapter, but I'm definitely looking forward to the next one!
Date: 12/23/10 05:41 am Title: seventh
Keep going keep going!!!! :D so cutey cute :D ;D
Date: 12/23/10 05:37 am Title: seventh
Awww this was so sweet and romantic. :D :D Yeah, that thingy with Chantelle is a bit.. fucked up. but that's fine, Bill said it. :D she said it! yay! :D
If I want you to go on? are you kidding me? :D Of course! Do go on. :D and hopefully on and on and on and yeah. n_n this was excellent!
Date: 12/23/10 03:05 am Title: third
There was something in this Chantelle chapter I've been meaning to comment on: you said she wears a cheer uniform even on days where there isn't a game. Now, I don't know what it was like in your HS, but since my sister was a cheerleader and one of my besties is a cheerleader and I'm well-versed in how cheerleading uniforms are, I have to call BS on that.
It's not a negative BS, like me saying you're dumb (god, can you imagine me being so rude? Feh!) but I have a differing opinion/experience with that. I don't know any girl who would willingly wear their cheer uni without an obligation. The outer shells are a pain in the ass (think a corset that squishes your boobs) and the under armor part makes it incredibly hot. Plus, our girls under armors were sort of like baby clothes that zipped up the back and had crotch snaps, plus the skirt and their bloomers, so going to the bathroom is a huge chore.
Therefore, Chantelle wearing a cheer uni = unbelievable, unless she's a masochist.
And that's my opinion. Just letting you know. Looking forward to more, btw!
Author's Response: It's a sly dig at the way the cheerleaders are always wearing their uniforms on Glee, because yeah. You don't do that.
Glad you're looking forward to more!