Date: 01/01/11 12:06 am Title: eighth
NNNNGGGHHH *is melty puddle of goo*
Date: 12/31/10 09:01 pm Title: ninth
I loved this just like I've loved every chapter so far. I can't wait for the last one! XD
Date: 12/31/10 08:08 pm Title: ninth
This may be the cutest chapter of anything, ever. I just love these two together, and this story has been such a delight! I'm so glad you decided to revisit them.
Date: 12/31/10 07:20 pm Title: ninth
AAAHHH!!! I LOVE IT!!! THIS is my favorite chapter of this whole story!
Date: 12/31/10 03:53 pm Title: eighth
Wooohoo! Can't wait for morea
Date: 12/31/10 03:12 pm Title: fourth
Can't say no to those good vibrations. :P
Date: 12/31/10 11:59 am Title: eighth
Oh WOW that was so sexy! So perfect and so beautiful, aw all the Billy and Tommy love is magical ^_^ I love this fic more than my reviews can tell you! It's so fantastic, everything I adore in a fic AND it's femmeslash, so massive bonus o/ I'm really looking forward to the last two updates :D Happy New Year!
Date: 12/31/10 09:31 am Title: eighth
This is so lovely!
Bill considering a sexy star hip tattoo! Bill "butting their heads close together as though she were a headstrong kitten!" She's so adorable omg.
I love how they talk about the boy-shaped dildo and decide that it's okay to use it. *g* They're so lovely together! I don't blame Bill for whining when Tom gets up. Their touching is so lovely and addictive. ♥
Bill touching her sides and opening and closing her thighs while she waits. *____________* She's so hot. And thinking about Tommy. ♥
"She was always wet for Tommy" is so hot. I love reading hot femmeslash like this. It's absolutely amazing. ♥ When Bill "lay there panting as Tommy looked down at her with hungry dark eyes, like Bill was the buffet and Tommy hadn't eaten all week" -- nggh. So hot!
I love the dialogue -- so funny and endearing. Tommy saying that Bill got into the Christmas spirit and she replying, "I'd like something else in me, now." Hee!
Orgasm-denial. *___* I love how Tommy can pretty much do whatever she wants to Bill. And she uses that power so well. *g*
Omg Tommy's face lighting up "whenever receiving an order from Bill that she really, really wanted to follow through on, or whenever she turned to find Bill's attention on her." It's so lovely. She's so good and so in love with Bill, I'm all touched. Sniff!
I love this: "Baby, I've been wet enough since you came out of the bathroom with your top slipped off one shoulder, cocking your hip out like that." I love that she refers back to that moments. And that she wants Bill so much, of course. Guh.
Aww, Tommy worrying about whether it'll hurt Bill! And then feeling pressured when Bill says it'll be all right because she will make it amazing. Hee! I really like that moment and Bill reassuring Tommy by touch.
Bill enjoying penetration. *____________* I love that. And you write the whole experience so well. Bill "pushing her hips up. The jolt of pleasure that went through her was astounding and she made a little noise, repeating the motion. Above her Tommy's mouth had fallen open and she looked pained again, but her own matching noise was anything but." I love that they affect each other like that, Bill moving making Tommy feel something.
Bill being "once again surprised at how fast Tommy was bringing her to orgasm. She had no defenses against the surging pleasure Tommy brought to bear." NGGH. So hot! Especially the orgasms. *fans self*
I love Tommy asking "Like you love Tommy?" so cheekily and pushing her face against Bill's neck. ♥ I love how lovey-dovey they are. :D And their touches are just so sensual and lovely!
This is marvellous, and I look forward to the two chapters!
Date: 12/31/10 12:34 am Title: eighth
IF PROMISE RINGS OR CHASTITY RINGS OR WHATEVER ARE ALL LIKE THIS, SIGN ME THE HELL UP.
...ahem. Ohmygod, this chapter was even better than I thought it would be. *_* Tommy's worry about Bill's potential discomfort was adorable, but her concerns proved unfounded! lskjfg it was so intense when they started out, then insanely sexy during. I think the way you write sex noises (Tommy's "sweet little sex noises"! Bill's "starved and hoarse" sound in the beginning!) increases the hotness quotient by like a zillion. God, this is lovely. ♥!!
Date: 12/30/10 10:21 pm Title: eighth
Holy fuck, that was intense o____o. I didn't think I'd actually like femmeslash but damn. Either your just amazing at writing it, which undoubtably you are, or I maaay need to rethink half my sexual orientation LOL.
Date: 12/30/10 05:46 pm Title: eighth
love it and girl!Tom is so sweet it hurt! lol
great job can wait to read more
thanks
Date: 12/30/10 04:05 pm Title: eighth
Well, it's safe to say that this chapter lived up to the NC17 rating XD.
Date: 12/30/10 03:08 pm Title: eighth
*-* I'm so gone...
Date: 12/30/10 12:06 pm Title: eighth
Wow. That was really intense. Your writing always is but this scene was so intimate and perfectly described... it was really great. It's so adorable how much they love each other, I love those characters! I can't wait to read more about them!
Date: 12/30/10 11:38 am Title: eighth
I LOVE THIS SO FN MUCH...I really have no words but THANK YOU!!!!!!!
Date: 12/30/10 05:45 am Title: eighth
I always feel so awkward reviewing sexy chapters...must be my WASPy upbringing. But, needless to say, this was definitely what I've been waiting for!