Date: 01/02/11 05:56 am Title: tenth
That was a really fulfilling chapter. Which might sound kind of lame, but what I mean is that it was everything I wanted and hoped for. Such a perfect ending for them, though I like the 'the end, for now'. ;) Such a lovely story, Tay. Thank you for sharing it!
Date: 01/02/11 05:09 am Title: tenth
awww it was lovely!!! :D :D I hope you post a sequel to this because i absolutely LOVE your Bill and Tommy stories :D
Date: 01/02/11 04:53 am Title: tenth
Such a sweet ending! I just loved this story the whole way through, and I definitely wouldn't mind seeing more of these two in the future. But even if this is the end for them, it was the perfect way to finish it. The way you've written them, I truly believe they'll stay together, even though they're so young. You've made ~true love~ at 17 or 18 seem realistic, which is quite a feat in itself. Thanks so much for sharing this story!
Date: 01/02/11 04:49 am Title: tenth
This was an amazing story and I loved every moment of it. Definitely my favorite Christmas story this year. It obviously had to come to an end, seeing as it was indeed a Christmas story, but I am hoping this isn't the last we are going to see of these girls. :D
Date: 01/02/11 04:34 am Title: tenth
Awwwww I totally wanna see Tom slaying dragons for Bills. I love seeing them enjoying such a happy day together, part of a loving family. I love Jorg's remark about in-laws, so true.
This is adorable, I must sound like a broken record but GOD I love this fic.
After being so unsure if I even wanted to try femmeslash, you my dear have thoroughly convinced me of it's merits in all the right ways. Thank you for sharing this Tay, love it. *snuggles*
Date: 01/02/11 04:12 am Title: tenth
aww...
i couldn't sleep, so i got online to check my mail. i saw that this was updated, and i was kinda sad because i knew it was the last chapter. :( but i must say, that was the perfect ending, to yet another perfect fic. and again, i must say, please bring these characters back in the future! i'm totes in love with them.
Date: 01/02/11 01:11 am Title: ninth
You nearly made me cry, Tay. That gift was beautiful and perfect. I can't wait for the last bit. ♥
Date: 01/02/11 01:00 am Title: eighth
Oh my god. *___________*
Sorry, I am not even coherent.
Date: 01/02/11 12:41 am Title: seventh
Okay, that's an 'awww' of a different kind. Strike the thing about only thinking about sex. That was lovely. ♥
Author's Response: They think about sex a lo-o-ot, but they think about other things, too. ;) Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 01/02/11 12:39 am Title: ninth
Oh, I'm so depressed this is over! Thank you so much for writing this
Author's Response: One more chapter, my dear! Hang in there. ♥ Thank you so much for being a lovely reviewer. :)
Date: 01/02/11 12:32 am Title: sixth
Awwww aw see? Ungood. This is me over here, smacking Bill upside the head.
Date: 01/02/11 12:23 am Title: fifth
Huh. Okay, first, I'm concerned that all they really talk about it sex or wanting to have sex. If I were Bill, I'd be wondering if that's all Tommy wanted. Especially considering the three week separation looming and Chantelle just waiting on the sidelines.
And now I'm wondering what Tommy is planning that she'd need Gustav for.
Date: 01/02/11 12:19 am Title: ninth
This is turning out to be a lovely Christmas, isn't it?
Date: 01/02/11 12:09 am Title: fourth
THAT was fucking hot. I could see every bit of it. I may have to read that again. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! *_* I'm really happy it affected you so powerfully. ♥
Date: 01/01/11 11:53 pm Title: third
Chantelle's a bitch. *drops her off a cliff*
Author's Response: That seems to be the general consensus. ;)
Date: 01/01/11 03:33 pm Title: ninth
;_; This is so sweet and awesome and full of love I'm crying here for the pure joy of being able to read something like this...*loves it to death*
Date: 01/01/11 02:24 pm Title: ninth
A terrific fluffy chapter! I'm filled with love and happiness after reading it. :)
I love the contrast between the sad "There would be no celebrations here" and the wonderfully loving and warm image of Tommy wrapping her arms around Bill. ♥
Hee, Bill thinking about Tommy as a boy! What a hoot. :D (Some time later: ...also really hot. *____* Thinking about this Bill with boy!Tom... omg that would be so hot.)
"I'm calling for my daughter, she's too young to be in rehab." Hee! I really like this Jorg. And I love Bill answering the phone so saucily. ♥ And saying that she has pointy ears. :D "I'm very glad you've found someone who makes you so happy," AWWW. I get that in some ways he's not a very good father, but he's a lovely character!
I love Tommy's big black car. (It's a weakness that I have.)
"Besides, she'd enjoyed each successive use of the toy since that first amazing orgasm together. She'd even been on top a few times." Omg. Bill on top. *______* So many wonderful things in this chapter!
I love that Bill is so confident about singing and so sure that they'll be great once they start making music together! And it feels so right for some reason... *g*
Oh, Tommy recognising Bill's public smile! That's so lovely. Tommy knows her. ♥ And Tommy hugging her close in the car before telling her about the gift is so lovely, too! I love how much they touch.
Chastity rings! LOL. But maybe she did think about an engagement ring, fleetingly... :)
I love their kissing! And how eager they're to keep going. *g* And I love that they're interrupted like that and that Tommy's mother sent Gwen to tell them to stop making out in the car. Hee! A perfect moment; I love the humour.
Aww, Tommy asking about Bill's independence and Bill saying that she's with her because she WANTS to. Lovely! The necklace and the infinity symbol are just perfect. This is such a lovely story!
Date: 01/01/11 08:58 am Title: ninth
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! that was...awww, they're soooo adorable together and that necklace was very sweet of tom! awww, i cant wait for more but at the same time i dont want it to be over :D
Date: 01/01/11 02:03 am Title: ninth
OH that's just beautiful, I think I awwwwed majorly a few times through this chapter. They're so sweet together. I'm really pleased that Jorg has been invited to Christmas with the Brandons too. Can't wait for more sweetie *snuggles*
Date: 01/01/11 12:58 am Title: ninth
This is officially the first thing I read in 2011 =P And what a great way to begin the year! This was so sweet and adorable! I love the girls in this and I'll be sad to let them go. It's so heart warming to read about them, so in love and comfortable, I love this fic so much! Happy New Year !!!