Date: 12/22/10 09:44 am Title: sixth
Ohh, well, for someone it is hard to say those three little words. but Bills love Tommy, so hopefully she'll find a way to..express it before it's too late. as always, this is amazing! and she told his father that she loved him, that is also very sweet. =) I love Tommy's personalitiy in this, bills is so lucky to have her. fuck, they are both so unique, and lucky to have each other! lets hope it'll work out and that they'll have a very merry christmas, together. :)
Date: 12/22/10 09:05 am Title: sixth
oh my gd!
noooooooo!
bill, i knowww its hard jjst say the damned words! aaha
llovee itt!
Date: 12/22/10 08:28 am Title: sixth
Oh more!!! I've never been into Femmeslash or anything lesbian before but this is really good :D
Mehr bitte!!! And, yes - as a fellow writer I must agree: anything not smut doesn't get much rating at all. T.T
Date: 12/22/10 08:17 am Title: sixth
Awh, poor Tommy and Bill. :( Noooo sadness for Christmas. :[
Date: 12/22/10 08:11 am Title: sixth
Before I even bother reading...
'Twas the night before plane flight, and all through the house...mauschen Bill was stirring...and then came the racket.
LMAO. :|
Date: 12/22/10 07:50 am Title: sixth
D: Tay! This is your fluffy Christmas fic? I was in tears by the time I reached the end! And now it ENDED and I don't know what will happen next!
In other words, it's wonderfully written and really powerful. You tell this story so well! Here are all the moments that made me sad:
"She pulled her foot away from the package beneath the bed." OMG THE PRESENT GIVE IT TO HER! Is there anything sadder than gifts that are not given to their recipients? :(
Omg the Chantelle talk. :( Tommy is obviously going to wait for Bill and she's horrified that Bill even has to ask about it, but Bill won't let her reassure her. :(
"She folded her arms around herself in a cheerless hug." :(((
Aww and Tommy saying that Bill has never told her that she loves her! POOR TOMMY. And all the while Bill thinks she'll never want to part from Tommy! This is awful. I can picture Bill's shock so well when she realises that her thoughts and feelings and what Tommy thinks her thoughts and feelings are don't match at all. D: And poor, poor Tommy! If only she knew. :( She thinks Bill is just trying not to let her down! :(((
And then Bill doesn't tell her. I feel so bad for both of them! I understand that it's difficult for Bill and that it feels impossible for her to say it, that it scares her so much. But thinking about Tommy standing there and thinking that Bill doesn't feel the same way or doesn't want to say it or something. ._. Ow ow ow.
Aww, Jorg's call! They could take Tommy with them! Bill telling him she loves him made me all teary-eyed. Sniff! It's lovely, though, that Jorg would have come home if Bill had asked him to.
*sigh* I feel better now that I wrote all that down. So, now, Bills. CALL HER. Or go see her. Do something -- anything! Tommy is too important to just let go of her like that! Bill won't, right? She'll go see her as soon as possible, right? I don't want a blue Christmas! No no no! They need to talk about this sooner. I hope Bill figures out how to fix it, or at least try. I'm sure Tommy will meet her halfway. ♥
Date: 12/22/10 07:28 am Title: sixth
Oh how do you do it? I have tears!! Ugh, poor Tommy, desperately waiting to hear those three special words and poor Bills, feeling so inadequate and insecure in herself to say them. My heart aches. Safe travels honey, *squishes*
Date: 12/22/10 06:58 am Title: fifth
Bribed with what? Why is Tom so determined about Bill not giving her a Christmas gift? I loved Georg's comment about being there during *cackles* I love this honey, *gifts you a smorgasbord of delicacies and a serving wench*
Date: 12/22/10 06:54 am Title: fifth
"the same tell-tale besotted tone" ♥ They are so lovely together! I really like that they fight a little and especially Bill often uses a sharp tone when she talks to Tommy, and still they're so besotted.
Sulking Bill is adorable! I love that she asks if Georg is coming on to her and Tom shows up right on time. :D
Aww, Bill being mad! And Tommy being annoyed when Bill tries to trick her. I really like this plot. Even though I would have been perfectly satisfied with "they decorate a tree and then Bill gets laid. Lots." >_>
"Yeah, and I'll bet you wish you could say that, during." Lol!
I love that Bill is still thinking about the double-ended strap-on! And it would be a perfect gift! What's more personal than that? *g*
Bill's doubts about Tom's faithfulness make me feel so distressed! I'm ridiculous but it's just so... ._. I think they're going to be all right, though. ♥ I look forward to seeing what Bill decides to do about it -- if she talks to Tom or gives Chantelle that thousand-yard stare. It sounds like she can look really scary if she wants to! I approve.
Gustav's straight face! Hee! I wonder what Tommy was talking to him about. Could it have something to do with a Christmas present? :)
Date: 12/22/10 05:49 am Title: sixth
Oh Bill...just when everything seems to be working out for her, too.
You did a great job with the emotions in this chapter. It all feels very real.
Date: 12/22/10 04:45 am Title: sixth
can't wait for the next chapter.. :D :D
Date: 12/22/10 02:04 am Title: sixth
I just finished watching an epic movie and one of the best quotes in was when the main characters was epically rejected by her crush. I think it fits in with the state that our two heroines are facing.
"I'm gonna binge-drink now until I pass out."
Poor babies. The inability to verbalize emotions suck.
Date: 12/22/10 01:56 am Title: sixth
Love love love this story and these characters!
Hope Bill manages to get over the hurdle of saying I love you to Tommy. The first time is the hardest.
So looking forward to reading more! :D Have a safe trip!
Date: 12/22/10 01:45 am Title: sixth
Poor Bill...if only she hadn't opened her mouth about the Chantelle thing, then there wouldn't have been a fight and then she would have found out that she could bring Tommy and everything would have been okay. I hope she can fix everything XD I'm looking forward to the nexy update!
Date: 12/22/10 01:20 am Title: sixth
omg! i literally JUST got done reading the second part to your "a lust object," and i was thinking, "it would be super sweet if she updated "all i want for christmas..." right now too! HOW CREEPY!! AWE!, i was startin to tear up alil for bills. Its slippin HARD to say, 'i love you' to another person outside for family. LOVES IT!! have a happy holiday if i dont see an update from you before christmas!
Date: 12/21/10 11:55 pm Title: third
Chantelle Paige! Haha, i nearly forgot about her. Still hate her thought. No no no, Bill don't listen to her.
Date: 12/21/10 11:51 pm Title: fifth
So I'm a horrible person who hasn't reviewed this yet, but make no mistake, I LOVE this. I'm not normally a girl!Tom lover, but you write it so well. I legit squee everytime this gets updated.
Date: 12/21/10 11:35 pm Title: second
good for me that i have my own laptop. so, i can google stuff like "double-ended strap-on" without risk.
Date: 12/21/10 11:17 pm Title: first
Like Jorg isn't being selfish himself.
Author's Response: He's absolutely being selfish, too. But adults get to throw that around and expect not to get called on it.