Date: 02/19/11 05:08 pm Title: Part 4
oh, hi, addie..... wow, i didn't even realize this was yours until i went back up..... no, the ending wasn't strong, but it was a REALLY good attempt.... definitely better than i could do lol.... great job!!!!!
Author's Response: hehe did my gramar give you eye twitches? hahahaharnjk jkrnim hoping to get the oneshot prologue done as soon as i can
Date: 02/05/11 05:47 pm Title: Part 4
My favourite part of this chapter was the implication that Tom had a girlfriend. One he cared about. Did you mean for this to be a comedy? Hee hee hee. OMG, I'm terrible, I know...stfu. Anyway...that's it? You're going to leave it like that? What haaaap-pennnns??!!
Author's Response: No I didn't mean for it to be a comedy lol. And no im not going to leave it like that haha. There will be an epilouge...when I get to it lol. So you'll find out ^_^
Date: 12/31/10 12:47 pm Title: Part 4
The end ? What do you mean ?
You can't end this story !
Because I was loving it and I want to keep reading, please !
At least make a epilogue, it would be awesome *-------*
But anyway, I loved this story because is totally different from the others I've read here. You've done a great job.
Author's Response: Im glad that you enjoyed this story....but all stories have an end XDrnBUT....i may think about an epilogue...ive been thinking about for a couple days now
Date: 12/30/10 11:50 pm Title: Part 4
I really enjoyed this story. You made Tom a real psycho and it really worked! Can we not have 1 more chapter? :(
Author's Response: I dont know if i could do another chapter haha, but i will have it in mind ^_^
Date: 12/30/10 08:36 pm Title: Part 4
I think she secretly kind of enjoyed it. That was pretty hot in a sadistic way, nicely done.
Date: 12/30/10 07:11 pm Title: Part 4
I think she secretly kind of enjoyed it. That was pretty hot in a sadistic way, nicely done.
Author's Response: eee yea thanks ^_^rnbut know...she didnt know what happened, she kind of like a black out
Date: 12/30/10 02:53 pm Title: Part 4
Eeeeeeeee!!!!
They all got out!!
Is it the end?!?!
Excellent work!!
Date: 12/30/10 11:38 am Title: Part 4
oh my god im crying huhuhuhu:'(
Date: 12/30/10 08:38 am Title: Part 4
i actually quite liked this, although it needs some beta work :) it was a good plot line though :)
Author's Response: Yes I know it needs work yet. But whenever I email the betas her none respond
Date: 12/23/10 08:05 pm Title: Part 3
It was not bad at all...better I think than the first two chapters. The uh...last part, when Tom was pleasuring her, hot. But you left us hanging! That is not cool, you...in the middle of sex? Whyyyyy?
You finding your groove okay? :)
Author's Response: eh i dont think its as good as the first two haha cause i felt as if i was slacking on it....and the last part, yea haha i like doing that, idk why but i just do, plus that was in my friends dream.rnrnFinding my groove, i think so....and idk why, but i like to write about rape, whether it be Het or TWC, i guess its just my thing hehe. does that make me a bad person?
Date: 12/22/10 10:52 am Title: Part 3
awwwww Carrie ruined the moment.
awesome chapter
Date: 12/21/10 08:39 pm Title: Part 3
lol I lost the mood when she said your name
Date: 12/21/10 02:18 pm Title: Part 3
That is totally not bad!! I got a wetty. The teasing is exactly how I like it!!!!
Author's Response: *facepalm* O my gosh haha ^_^
Date: 12/21/10 01:51 pm Title: Part 3
HA! I think NOT I couldn't see the flaw in this chapter, it was truly great .
But I really REALLY want to why Tom is doing this and what Gustav did for this to happen
Keep up yhr fantastic writing and update real soon! :)
Author's Response: Yup that will all com out in the next chapter ^_^
Date: 12/18/10 12:14 am Title: Part 2
Off to raucus start girlfriend! Keep going!
Date: 12/17/10 10:56 pm Title: Part 2
I REALLY LIKED THIS!!! GO A!!!
Really, bondage is completely you, haha, nice job girl ^_~
Date: 12/17/10 10:53 pm Title: Part 1
Oooh, Ima read the next chapter now, but good job A!!!! *thumbs up*
Date: 12/16/10 11:05 pm Title: Part 2
what did Gustav do to make Tom hate him so much?
can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Now that is something you have to wait for ^_~. but not too long ^_^
Date: 12/16/10 10:51 pm Title: Part 1
I am loving this story. I love dark and twisted Tom. Please keep it coming!
Date: 12/16/10 10:48 pm Title: Part 2
I like this a lot! Keep updating (:
Author's Response: Yup i will write some more and possibly do another update tomorrow ^_^