Date: 08/02/11 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 25
How could he do that?! His twelve-year-old sister!
If Bill was evil from the start, then maybe. But otherwise, I'm sorry, but I can scarcely find the emotions and actions in this story realistic. For some things in this world it's far better to die than to perform them.
Date: 08/01/11 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 26
I'm surprised Bill can still have rational thoughts. I would have been shattered by the pressure of everything. Just thinking of it makes my head hurt.
Date: 08/01/11 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 26
Great Story! I really cant wait to read more!
Date: 08/01/11 01:56 am Title: Chapter 25
OMFG-i can't get enough of this! Can't wait to find out if Bill gets out of the "mob" one of two ways...thanks for updating, waiting for more!
Date: 08/01/11 01:53 am Title: Chapter 25
por qué lo hizo?!!!!!!!!
Date: 07/31/11 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 25
Aw. Poor Bill. He has to get his sister back!!
Date: 07/31/11 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 24
I really hope it's not Bill's mum and dad, or Andreas' mum and dad for that matter :(
Date: 07/31/11 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 24
O____O what, what?! What is the two surprises?!?!?! Thanks for updating!
Date: 07/31/11 10:06 am Title: Chapter 24
OoOOOOOOOOOOOOOoo!!!!!! I want more pwease :3
Date: 07/31/11 09:33 am Title: Chapter 24
I wonder who( or what, but i'm sticking w/ who for now) it could be O.O
I wish they take Andi into the family also he's like locked away in the dungeon with a terrible fever :(
Or the surprise could be Bill's or Andi's parents O.O That would be a surprise lol (but it's not funny >.>)
Date: 07/31/11 02:00 am Title: Chapter 23
More more more---please :)
Date: 07/29/11 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 22: Part Two
Oh gosh I want to keep reading! This story is different then the ones I've read. Great job. Please continue with more?
Date: 07/24/11 11:56 am Title: Chapter 22: Part Two
Just read through it all and I thought for sure they were gonna make Bill sell Andi. Glad that didn't happen.
Can't wait for more.
Date: 07/19/11 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 22: Part Two
poor bill....
Date: 07/17/11 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 22: Part Two
Poor Bill. :-(
Date: 07/17/11 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 22: Part Two
Wow...I really liked how the beginning of the first chapter was the same as the end of this one...bt I think it might have bee a bit better if you had continued the evening past where the last chapter started...Just an idea for next time you know? I really enjoyed this. Keep up the wonderful work!
Date: 07/17/11 10:03 am Title: Chapter 22: Part Two
love this >.