Date: 12/30/10 11:47 pm Title: Chapter IV
I think Tom rushed this going out thing, but good chapter. thanks for the update, i can't wait for more!
Date: 12/30/10 07:33 am Title: Chapter IV
Great update!
Happy Holidays!
Date: 12/26/10 12:22 pm Title: Chapter III
im glad bills out of that horrible place. fucking freaks shocked him.
Date: 12/26/10 03:25 am Title: Chapter III
thanks for the update! I really like the idea for the story and can't wait for more!! =)
Date: 12/25/10 10:44 pm Title: Chapter III
that is sad as fuck T_T
Date: 12/25/10 07:48 pm Title: Chapter III
Lovely chapter! I'm looking forward to see what will happen when he gets home :)
Date: 12/18/10 08:09 am Title: Chapter II
poor bill!
waiting for the next
Date: 12/17/10 12:16 am Title: Chapter II
ooh, i think this is a great start to what looks like could be an incredible story. I wish someone would believe Bill. Its a bit of a coincidence to have identical bruises on your temples..keep up the great work, i can't wait for more!
Date: 12/16/10 02:04 pm Title: Chapter II
If I could blow those nurses' heads off, I would've been done it.
Date: 12/16/10 06:08 am Title: Chapter II
pssssst tatatataaaaaaaaaa!
I so love iit! And i need new chap nooow!
I'll track this story of course!
and as I've said before
BITCHES NURSES FUCK YOU I'LL KILL YOU AAAALL!except Susan she seems good :p
Date: 12/16/10 03:32 am Title: Chapter II
Poor Bill :(
Good writing!
Date: 12/16/10 02:33 am Title: Chapter II
O__o wow that was kind of hard to read. But not in a bad way I started to cry and had to stop reading but I really love this chapter. I can't wait to see how Bill is going to act out side of there. Also Tom is to sweet by letting that girl stay there I would have kicked her out LOL
Date: 12/16/10 02:15 am Title: Chapter II
stupid bitch not believing him. sorry what a rude word but i VOTE BILL AND TOM are right all the time. everyone else is wrong lol
Date: 12/15/10 08:15 pm Title: Chapter I
I like it...hope to read more soon.
Date: 12/15/10 06:50 pm Title: Chapter I
Well I really like it so far. Can't wait till you update again = ]
Date: 12/15/10 04:56 pm Title: Chapter I
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interesting waiting for the next ^^
Date: 12/15/10 04:48 pm Title: Chapter I
Looking forward to reading more!