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Reviewer: Asylumgates Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/11/11 06:50 pm Title: Chapter I

I'm going to continue to read the story :)

Reviewer: sexytwin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/11 09:36 pm Title: Chapter XVI

AWESOME STORY! I read it in two days n i felt in love of how you two r writing this, i can't wait for the update

Reviewer: Lix Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/11 07:45 pm Title: Chapter XVI

Bill...just kill the damn psycho!!!
omg.. this situations break my heart!.. even now they keep suffering!.. because they canīt be together as they want.. wuaaaaaaaaaaaa .. I hope that when Bill gets home..he can talk to Tom.. because they both will be drunk.. and they will have more courage :D

Great Chapter!.. Iīm looking forward to the next!

Reviewer: Lix Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 11:56 pm Title: Chapter XIII

omg.. I just *.*.. this is such an excellent fic!..
You know I was watching your videos on youtube (wich are amazing by the way) and read about a fic you were doing with your friend.. I thought: if she makes that kind of videos.. I think that her fics will be great!.. and I was completely right!..
I love all the plot.. is very interesting.. and thing I like the most is that Bill isnīt just an innocent and frightened boy.. he has a temper!.. and he is a little devil.. I like also that Tom didnīt treat him like a girl.. and he also has a temper!.. well.. you guys are doing an amazing job as writers.. Iīll keep reading :)
P.S: Sorry for any mistake.. this isnīt my mother tongue :)

Reviewer: TomtwincestBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 08:29 pm Title: Chapter XVI

Oh my gosh what else has this motherfucker done to the twins?T__T

Reviewer: TomtwincestBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 08:26 pm Title: Chapter XVI

Oh my gosh what else has this motherfucker done to the twins?T__T

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 03:10 am Title: Chapter XVI

thanks for the updates. our poor boys.

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 01:34 pm Title: Chapter XVI

I love it so much this story is realy awesome :3 I'll be waiting for more :3

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/03/11 05:57 am Title: Chapter II

awwww poor Billi :'(((

Reviewer: perez Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/11 11:05 pm Title: Chapter I

Thanks for the update!!! Poor Tom :(

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/11 09:03 pm Title: Chapter XVI

its ok
Loved this chapter

please update soon

Reviewer: TomtwincestBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/11 06:51 pm Title: Chapter XV

I guess Tom gets what the deserves for being such an idiot! You have the ice cream,lick it don't let it melt idiot!
I want moooore!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/11 06:15 am Title: Chapter XV

How sad. I hope they get things figured out soon. they deserve some happiness.

Reviewer: Mechas2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/11 03:38 am Title: Chapter XV

:(

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/11 01:29 am Title: Chapter XV

poor guys

please update soon

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/11 07:12 pm Title: Chapter XIV

Finally, a good decision on Bill's part. Hopefully Susan can help. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: sofiasacred Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/11 03:52 pm Title: Chapter XIV

Oh.. beautiful chapter actually, despite all the pain. I love your writing, and I really hope you'll update soon, and never forget this story.

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/11 03:44 pm Title: Chapter XIV

0.0
please update ASAP

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/11 03:05 pm Title: Chapter XIV

wow. poor bill:(

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/11 10:58 am Title: Chapter XIV

omg-such emotion and angst...great chapter! Thanks for the update.

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