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Reviewer: TomtwincestBill Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/11 07:48 am Title: Chapter XVIII

eoee T__T I've been away this story for a while didn't I?
I missed that and I am glad that Tom finally made up his mind!!

Reviewer: nyxleigh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/30/11 10:58 pm Title: Chapter XVIII

OH MY GOD! I was not expecting that for some reason but it was a pleasant surprise. The rough sex...*nod of approval*. Just...wow I'm glad they finally did it.

Reviewer: sexytwin Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/11 03:12 am Title: Chapter XVIII

Awww this one was just awesome! I'm so glad that they are together... I wonder what happened with Gordon

Reviewer: Asylumgates Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/20/11 07:19 pm Title: Chapter XVIII

lol Tom wasnt expecting that

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/11 06:03 pm Title: Chapter XVIII

im glad they got together, finally.
looking forward to more
and please update House of Eros too...please?

Reviewer: Nonconman Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/11 06:36 am Title: Chapter XVIII

wowow, so these bastards were giving up! fuck Ariel, fuck normality Bill! just fuck Tom instead! btw, incredible reversible round :D

Reviewer: Asylumgates Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/18/11 08:05 pm Title: Chapter XVII

your story is fucking sick !! i love it :D please continue writing

Reviewer: Asylumgates Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 12:00 am Title: Chapter XII

dude i wanted to bury my fist on josh's face -.-

Reviewer: Asylumgates Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/16/11 11:42 pm Title: Chapter X

D': this made felt so bad . poor Tom. hes just trying to help Bill .

Reviewer: Asylumgates Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/16/11 11:14 pm Title: Chapter IX

L O L this chapter was a wow

Reviewer: Asylumgates Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/16/11 10:44 pm Title: Chapter VII

lol the water bed broke !

Reviewer: Asylumgates Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/16/11 10:31 pm Title: Chapter VI

that is so sad :(

Reviewer: Asylumgates Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/16/11 10:14 pm Title: Chapter V

lol i like how he said none of your business :)

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/14/11 04:18 pm Title: Chapter XVII

Thanks for the update. I'm dying for the whole story to come out. Its confusing and I want to know what happened. Great job though.

Reviewer: Velia Mineantea Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/11 05:40 pm Title: Chapter XVII

Hi.

i am so happy you are back. This story though sad from time to time has gotten me caught.

It's awful to read about abuse on a child cause it is real. Both twins are coping with the pieces of the cruel past they share.

I hope their future otgether brings happiness and some peace and acceptance.

See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Hinomaru Aki Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/11 06:39 pm Title: Chapter IV

Tom is so stupid to take Bill in a bar on the day he get out of asylum. Plus let him drink and then left him with girl! I´m so angry because of it!

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/11 03:15 pm Title: Chapter XVII

looking forward to more
please update soon

I understand what you mean about having a little trouble getting back into writing
im like that

Reviewer: Nonconman Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/11 05:00 am Title: Chapter XVII

let him know if you want him Tomiiiii....

Reviewer: sofiasacred Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/11 03:21 am Title: Chapter XVII

Can i marry this story?

Reviewer: sexytwin Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/11 12:37 am Title: Chapter XVII

Yaaaay! I was waiting for an update, I really like the story in fact I love this kind of stories :) .. thanks for the update, I'll be waiting for more!

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