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Reviewer: ass_backwards Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/16/10 05:37 pm Title: A Bill Objectified

That face is so funny. lol.

Author's Response: Haha, thanks. I'm glad you think so :D

Reviewer: peache4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/10 04:32 pm Title: A Bill Objectified

lol i loved it i thought maybe the second chapter wouldn't live up to the first but iit was better

Author's Response: I'm glad the second chapter was to your standards!! Hopefully I can keep it up!

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/10 03:30 pm Title: A Bill Objectified

Holy shit! Do they not know or something?

Author's Response: *Smiles evily* hehe.... you'll have to wait and see ;D

Reviewer: Shibby Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/10 03:03 pm Title: A Bill Objectified

Hahahahahaha! Bill is so hilarious!

Georg jizzed in his pants, nice.

Gusti would love him some Bill, wouldn't he?

LOVED this! Can't wait for more!

XD

Author's Response: I have a feeling that Bill's having a lot of fun. Georg and Gustav are so wrapped up in that tape it's crazy. Next chapter'll be up in 5 minutes, once I finish responding to reviews :D

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/16/10 01:41 pm Title: A Bill Objectified

goodness this is good! do you know how hard it is to keep from laughing at very dirty twin-smut while your dad is literally twenty feet away? ^__^
this is really awesome....and the Bushido texts really disgusted me. just the thought of him touching our Bill....*shudders*
but great job anyways, you rock.

Author's Response: Your story reminds me of this one time I was writing a particularly raunchy twinsex scene in my notebook... in the middle of the lounge in one of my class buildings, as teachers and students passed by, while I was making Bill suck Tom off on paper. I bet if you read Raiju, you'd change your opinions of Bushido. That's how I became a fan ;D

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/10 12:09 pm Title: A Bill Objectified

OMG-i'm so lovin' this, it's funny and dramatic!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story! :D

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/10 08:58 am Title: A Bill Objectified

LOL at the picture of Bill! Omg that was brilliant! And the texts from Bushido were hilarious! Wow, this story is just awesome, can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: There's mroe pictures to come with the next chapter, and these ones are a bit more...um... *reajusts pants* :D

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/10 06:53 am Title: A Bill Objectified

This is awesome, and so fucking brilliant. Haha I laughed when I clicked the photo of Bill. xD Now I can't look at that photo anymore, without thinking about this. But it's... okay I guess. :P Haha, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I love that picture, and I've got more to go with the next chapter! These are even more amazing :D

Reviewer: omgthatshot05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/10 02:49 am Title: A Bill Objectified

Omg!! If Bushido ever fucked Bill I would want front row seats for that!! Okay what I don't get is how can they don't know about the video but everybody else already does? The G's are crazy!

Author's Response: I'll see ya in the wet zone! Haha, good question... that'll be answered in a bit :D

Reviewer: schlampe Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/10 02:15 am Title: A Bill Objectified

LMAO, I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING.

Author's Response: Haha, glad you're enjoying it! :D

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/10 02:12 am Title: A Bill Objectified

I can't decide which is better. The drunken porn tape or everyone's reactions to the drunken porn tape. Love how the G's freak out when Bill shows up. And David and Bushido!

Great, great story! Can't wait to read more! :D

Author's Response: Haha, I love both the tape and the reactions, but I think the reactions are just too priceless! I can't wait til David sees Bill in the flesh for the first time since watching the tape ;D

Reviewer: SephoraChise Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/10 12:34 am Title: A Bill Objectified

If Bill thought it was impossible to go out without getting mauled, boy is gonna suck for him now! He'll stick his head out the door and suddenly people will pounce screaming, "IT'S RAPING TIME!"

Author's Response: Oh, Bill would be chained up in a fucking line. Tom wouldn't even be able to protect him, because he'd be in line too. :D

Reviewer: peache4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 10:43 pm Title: A Tape Released

i love it its hot but still funny. i hope there's more

Author's Response: Yea, there's still a few chapters left. It's probably going to be a bit longer than I expected :D

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 08:21 pm Title: A Tape Released

Haha! This was awesome. Loved the Gs in this. :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it!!! I love the G's too, and since I don't usually feature them too much in my fics, I figured they'd be main characters in this one :D

Reviewer: Yuuki_Kyo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 06:44 pm Title: A Tape Released

Hahah!! I can't wait to read more!!@ :D

Author's Response: Don't worry, the next part will be up tomorrow! :D (legit, I'm staying up til midnight to post it haha)

Reviewer: MyWhiteDecember Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 04:00 pm Title: A Tape Released

Oh this is wonderful! Funny and sexy and a very good read! I love drunken!Bill and Tom. They're hilarious! And the convo between Georg and Gustav is just ridiculously funny! I feel sorry for Gustav though. Poor boy's in denial! XD And David wearing sunglasses! XDDD Oh, I really wanna know what else the naughty twins taped (and what Tom thinks is better than yummy twinsex)... Please update soon! :)



Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Oh, you'd be surprised what could be yummier than twinsex :D

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 03:41 pm Title: A Tape Released

Haha I like Geo's attitude. It's like you actually captured him (minus the situation)XD. I lol'd when David wanked. He should know better.

Author's Response: Haha, Georg's still a typical horny guy in this, and David... he just needs to get laid. Either that, or the twins are just too hot when it comes to making porns :D

Reviewer: Ohz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 02:44 pm Title: A Tape Released

Cool... Haha.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :D

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 02:39 pm Title: A Tape Released

Lol! oh mah gawd *covers eyes*
Spur of the moment, eh?

Oh great, now *I* want to watch the video just to see how long I can resist XD

Author's Response: I don't know what gave me the idea to write this, but this porn/kink muse is giving me wondderful ideas. I think you'll enjoy the video parts to come ;D

Reviewer: ass_backwards Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 02:34 pm Title: A Tape Released

I love it so far!!

Author's Response: I'm glad!! Thanks for the review! :D

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