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Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/20/10 01:53 am Title: A Bill Objectified

-dies- Bill's face XD win!

Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Velia Mineantea Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/20/10 01:45 am Title: A Meeting Planned

Hi

Two chapters in one day, yes, I am aware that there is a big chance you didn't update them both the same day, but I just got in THF.

Poor Gusti, he almost died out of pure guilt. I do not believe Bill to be so oblivious, I mean, I've always considered him to be a little curious...

I loved the text responses, you can image who they belong to.

I'll be expecting the next chap!

Hugs!!!

Velia

Author's Response: There's still a possibility for another update today, although it might not end up being finished by tomorrow. Gustav is just a little horny ball of adorableness! He'll be even more embarrassed in the next chapter! ;D

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/20/10 01:45 am Title: A Tape Released

Well snaps xDD

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! New update soon! XD

Reviewer: extraORDINARY Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/10 11:20 pm Title: A Meeting Planned

OHMYGOD. I'minloveI'minloveI'minLOVE.
The flashbacks, the G's, Bill's cluelessness -- udakfjdaf.
But where's Tommmmmm?!?

Dude, I can't wait to read the next chapter. *twitches*

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much! I'm having so much fun writing it, and Tom will definately be in the next chapter!!! ;D

Reviewer: Shibby Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/10 10:37 pm Title: A Meeting Planned

I'm starting to wonder if Bill really IS clueless!

LOVED this, can't wait to see how David approaches this meeting!

XD

Author's Response: Hm... I wonder if he really is too! Oh, I'm sure that whatever David has planned for the meeting, it isn't going to swing his way ;D

Reviewer: frances17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/18/10 02:52 am Title: A Nut Busted

OMG. I AM SMILING IN FRONT IF THE LAPTOP RIGHT NOW LIKE A COMPLETE IDIOT. :D I love it!

Author's Response: I smile when I write this, because it's such a fun plot to work with :D

Reviewer: peache4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 06:04 pm Title: A Nut Busted

yay u made this chapter longer. Me likey!!!!!!

Author's Response: New update soon! :D

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 11:35 am Title: A Tape Released

omg, and no one saw what you wrote? awesome. and yeah, i'm reading king of kingz (just like the other 5 million ppl on here) and it's really good. but in that story, he fits the description my mind has set for him. i think he's cool in fiction, but that's as far as it goes. :)

Author's Response: Haha, I kind of hunched over the pages to prevent roaming eyes ;D King of Kingz is my whore and I go to her every night for company :D

Reviewer: shimmery Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 09:01 am Title: A Nut Busted

Not only this is a hot fic with twin goodness, I love reading about the other's reaction to it. Gustav getting teased, bushido harassing david.
Can't stop reading about dirty twins.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the naughtiness that is Bill and Tom porn, and the guilty hotness of a turned on Gustav. Harrassing David is what I live for XD

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 08:57 am Title: A Nut Busted

I'm okay with the fact that this is turning longer that expected too! This fic is sexy and hilarious and I love every update ! =D Can't wait for the next one! The pictures are a great idea !

Author's Response: I'm thinking it'll be six chapters, but that's just a rough estimate at the moment. I'm glad you're enjoying the updats, and there should be a new one in just a little bit!! I'm having fun adding the pictures as well :D

Reviewer: Yuuki_Kyo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 07:49 am Title: A Nut Busted

Uh oh!! XD I kinda wanna see Bill's reaction when he learns that everybody knows

Author's Response: Oh, I already have that planned. It's going to be unexpectedly amazing. *looks around shiftily* That's all I can say... ;D

Reviewer: Yuuki_Kyo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 07:42 am Title: A Bill Objectified

Haha Everybody aare real pervs *shkaes head* :P

Author's Response: Haha, yes they are, and I love them for it! :D

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 05:42 am Title: A Nut Busted

Heeh, brilliant as usual

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :D

Reviewer: k483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 04:04 am Title: A Tape Released

I just read tris and i love it ! Ive always wanted a Twin sex tape and i love all the reactions that come with people watching it i really want to know where tom is during all this though. He has to be there to remind everyone that Bill is his! Especially those g's that keep jizzing all over the place lol

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!! Don't worry, Tom will be in this story at a *cough* certain part that I can't yet describe ;D LOL.

Reviewer: Velia Mineantea Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 02:48 am Title: A Bill Objectified

rofl !!! OMG that face is so hilarious!
I liked this chapter quite a lot! The Gs seem to have really enjoyed the movie. Now they both want a go with the twins... or apparently with Bill.

Poor Dave having to deal with the horny texting.

I keep on wandering if the twins know about their vid being watched by everybody...

Kisses!

Author's Response: I think Bill has now become the sex, so it's no wonder the G's can't even listen to him talk without thinking of him all hot and bothered. Haha David, I love you, but you were a horny manager for watching the tape, so you deserve this. You'll find out about the twins later :D

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 02:28 am Title: A Nut Busted

Wow! Bushido just won't give up, will he? Can't blame him though. :p

"Gustav’s dick was definitely interested in a private excursion with Bill" I think everyone that's seen the tape is interested in a private excursion with Bill.

Loving this! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Haha, I think Bushido's just trying to claim what's rightfully his. And as he said, Bill seems to be into the idea of them hooking up... ;D

LOL I think so too XD

Reviewer: SephoraChise Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 01:17 am Title: A Nut Busted

I knew Tom would be the Blowjob Bitch. Him and his damn oral fixation. Ooh... inspiration!

Author's Response: I think you'll really like where this is going. Tom's mouth can be quite wonderful, I do agree :D

Reviewer: schlampe Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 01:08 am Title: A Nut Busted

OH YES.

Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 01:01 am Title: A Nut Busted

I've been cracking up my whole way through this story. Priceless.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it!! :D

Reviewer: liveeverysecond Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/10 11:14 pm Title: A Tape Released

Loving this! Thank you for writing this, I wanted a twin porn tape for sooo long!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like it so far :D

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