Date: 04/22/14 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 01
Oh my god... this is so heartbreaking. :(
Date: 12/23/10 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 01
as heartbreaking as that was it was still a really nice read. ;______;
Date: 09/04/09 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 01
This is translated? No wonder...some parts confused me a bit. But overall, sehr gut!
Lost a baby.
Such a stupid way to say it. Excuse me, I lost a baby. Do you know where the lost and found office is? If I can't find him, will you give me another one?
^LMAO @that !
Date: 02/11/09 09:38 am Title: Chapter 01
Hi,
you've done an amazing job conzentrating all those burning emotions of Bill in so few words. Your story is really touching.
I liked that you treated the intersexuality issue so realistically. Of course losing a child is a sad topic and you resist to sugarcoat it with cheezy tearjerking scenes. That was very audacious of you.
But in the end, I cannot help but see some small ray of hope. Bill reacts with cold cruelty towards the cruelty that has happend to him, but the end shows he has not lost his heart and some day it will be okay. I think this is a very beautiful message. (if you wanted to bring forth a message, maybe I'm just overinterpreting).
bye bye,
Muirne
Date: 01/10/09 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 01
LOVE IT!!!! Poor baby! You should really continue!! (L)
Date: 03/10/08 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 01
Ugh. This is really heartbreaking.
Good story...except Hermaphrodite isn't really the nicest word to use, Intersexed would be better it's a lot less offensive.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review!rnI'm glad you appreciate it. I didn't want to be offensive, really, but English is not my first language and I didn't know the register of such a word.rnI will fix it. Thank you for the suggestion.
Date: 02/29/08 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 01
I can't really explain how this made me feel. There are so many emotions thrown together, it's overwelming. Loved it.
Author's Response: Well, I'm very happy you loved it. Yeah, even Bill has a lot of emotions^^;
Date: 02/25/08 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 01
Wonderful really! :) The end left me like ow :)
Author's Response: thank you so much ^__^
Date: 02/19/08 09:53 am Title: Chapter 01
please write another MPreg! You're really good at them. Poor Bill lost his baby!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, but I think that this is the first and the last Mpreg I ever wrote ^^
Date: 02/19/08 09:50 am Title: Chapter 01
This was great!
Author's Response: Thank you very much *__*
Date: 02/17/08 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 01
You know that I've loved it. It's sad, real because you give a possible reason why Bill was pregnant. And the interaction between Bill and Tom is amazing... Bill is depressed but, thanks Tom, you offer also funny dialogues [the beeper on the kid XD].
You're great Yul XD And Thanks Emilianne for the translation, it has been a pleasure reading this shot also in English XD
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading it in english, too. and for the comment, in english, too ^__^rn
Date: 02/17/08 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 01
Wow...that was so sad. And...different. I don't even know what to say.
Loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you very much ^__^
Date: 02/16/08 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 01
That was...I don't know how to explain what it made me feel. I really, really liked it though.
Author's Response: well, I'm very glad you liked it ^__^
Date: 02/16/08 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 01
Oh. ;o; I don't know how to explain my feelings while reading this.. It's very good, the writing style is fantastic. Nice job too, of course.
Author's Response: Thank you very much *___*rnAbout the style, I have to thanks Emilianne and Majestrix who conveyed it in english ^__^
Date: 02/16/08 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 01
end? already?
damn. I was liking this! =)
Author's Response: Yep, only a short story^^; I couldnìt stand the crying Bill for too long ^^;rnAnyway, thank you very much for the comment ^__^
Date: 02/16/08 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 01
I've already said to you all I could about this story.It's sad and it's full of anger and pain. I loved this Bill, so frigile. He is mean, but it's the pain that makes him so. Everything is so realistic!
Translating it was a pleasure.
Author's Response: I'm very glad that you like it! and thank you again for the traslation!
Date: 02/16/08 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 01
So heartbreaking. Ugh, it made me sad for days when I first read it.
Author's Response: I'm flattered by your comment *___*rnI'm sorry I made you sad :P
Date: 02/16/08 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 01
well done in a strange way
Author's Response: Thank you ^___^