Date: 12/15/10 01:45 am Title: On the first day of Christmas...
I like it. I like how you're pointing out all of the things about Christmas that aren't good. I'm sure I'll still like it when we get to the things about Christmas that are good too. It's a really nice idea so far.
Date: 12/15/10 01:01 am Title: On the third day of Christmas...
Bill's turning into an old softie now! lol I love that he has a cat. That's a great detail. Also really liked the meeting scene, though they didn't so much meet. Such a great story, Kish! ♥!
Date: 12/15/10 12:26 am Title: On the third day of Christmas...
SDFAJDLSFAHDIOFB I can never do anything more than flail and squee with glee after these chapters! And I'll have you know, I have an exam at 9am this morning, and should be sleeping, but I had get up again because the knowledge that you had updated was keeping me awake. XD
Date: 12/15/10 12:13 am Title: On the third day of Christmas...
ahem. Call him! heh. Great dialogue, I just love it ;)
I know someone just like Bill, who just isn't a Christmas fan at all. Oh wait, it's me haha. Well, really it's just the money spending I don't like this year round. Too much leaving my back account and not enough coming in for my liking!
Fab chapter! Will be waiting eagerly for the next :D
Date: 12/14/10 11:55 pm Title: On the third day of Christmas...
"He gardens and bakes? Can I marry him?"
BRB DYING.
Okay. That was just hilarious.
Anyway. Those cookies sound amazing. Now I'm hungry. Why you have to go and make me hungry? ;_; Although I must say it was a pleasure coming home from an exhausting eleven hours of work at the job I just started (and therefore had to be taught all the ropes at) to see this updated, although you did say you'd release a chapter every day. It made me smile, and I read the whole thing through without getting distracted even once. ;3
You know what I want for Christmas? Your talent. :o
...nah, because then you wouldn't have any and I'd be sad about that. :(
Date: 12/14/10 11:43 pm Title: On the third day of Christmas...
:D i'm loving this dear!
Date: 12/14/10 11:15 pm Title: On the third day of Christmas...
ahaha! he's beginning to crumble, just as I imagine those lovely cookies did in his mouth...mmm, cant wait to make christmas cookies...one managerial economics final between me and freedom! 18 hours between me and the rest of my life! okay...the rest of my year. but yah, sometimes it feels that way. back to memorizing formulas. this story is really really great. not gooey, witty, funny, and an all around good time.
Date: 12/14/10 11:03 pm Title: On the third day of Christmas...
Ho ho ho! I love this. I love their humour, Bill's cynicism, Tom's positivity, everything about this is getting me in the perfect mood (for Christmas, that is!) and yeah, I hope they get under the mistletoe together and never love. A lovely story for the holidays :)
Date: 12/14/10 10:20 pm Title: On the third day of Christmas...
Tom makes me want to grab him and just cuddle while watching Christmas movies lol
Date: 12/14/10 10:10 pm Title: On the third day of Christmas...
*sigh* I think I'm falling in love with Tom. I'm going to end this review in favor of dreaming about Tom feeding me delicious cookies he made and decorated himself. haha.
Date: 12/14/10 10:05 pm Title: On the third day of Christmas...
I dunno why but I was suprised that Bill had a cat lol. Guess it was his ranting over the responsiblity of a pet. I love how he is taking care of the plant & even took the time to look some things up on the computer for it =) I love how Bill realized who Tom was & how he's attracted to him now. Another fantastic chapter! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 12/14/10 10:02 pm Title: On the third day of Christmas...
Andi is so right, Tom is perfect ! Those cookies seem SO good... This fic is amazing and I’m always so excited to see an update!
Date: 12/14/10 09:56 pm Title: On the third day of Christmas...
ooh, i like this one!! and i kinda want some of Tom's cookies now ;)
and Bill should totally call Tom! that would be epic.
Date: 12/14/10 09:51 pm Title: On the third day of Christmas...
and possessed the sheer audacity to be scorching hot on top of all that.
Oh gosh, how dare he? I think Andreas is on the right track. If Bill won't have him, I'll take him. ;D
I am in love with this fic so hard. Anything else I say at this point will just be me repeating myself, but I really would like to cook this fic a delectable, three-course [vegetarian] meal and have my way with it. Ehm.
Date: 12/14/10 09:46 pm Title: On the third day of Christmas...
I should've said this after reading the very first chapter a couple nights ago, but better late then never right? I'm really enjoying this story and it's almost scary how much my mood brightens when I see a new chapter!
Date: 12/14/10 09:40 pm Title: On the third day of Christmas...
Seems Tom is winning Bill over quite effectively! Not that I expect him to give in without a fight. ;) Fantastic chapter, can't wait for more!
Date: 12/14/10 09:36 pm Title: On the third day of Christmas...
I love this. XD
I cackled through like the whole thing... Bill totally sounds like me this year. XP
Date: 12/14/10 09:31 pm Title: On the third day of Christmas...
*is angry at Tom* I want cookies...and I don't have any :'( Damn him for making me want them
Date: 12/14/10 09:30 pm Title: On the third day of Christmas...
Lmao, I'm getting worried for Bill XD
Couple typos if you want to fix them:
Bill's broadcast booth to deliver pass on a set of beautiful cookies
lovely as they seem, I yet to determine
Date: 12/14/10 09:22 pm Title: On the third day of Christmas...
I don't think saying "OMG i love this" is all that great, but i mean... i pretty much love it Kish.