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Reviewer: Princess Peach Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/21/10 01:29 pm Title: On the first day of Christmas...

Just want to say that I love this story. It's just the fanfiction I needed for the holiday season, so thanks for it :)
And I'd love to read another chapter today :D

Reviewer: AshesPashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/21/10 01:22 pm Title: On the ninth day of Christmas...

I can just see Bill rubbing his hands together thinking of all the evil things he's going to do to torture David. This was a great chapter. I can't wait to see David's reaction. I bet he just popped a vein in his forehead. I really love this story. It keeps getting better and better.

Reviewer: anachan87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/21/10 01:13 pm Title: On the ninth day of Christmas...

Have I already said I love this Bill? Because I do, I do, I do.

Reviewer: schlampe Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/21/10 06:29 am Title: On the eighth day of Christmas...

Yay, dey made up! Poor Beel, he was just having a rough day. :(

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/20/10 11:31 pm Title: On the eighth day of Christmas...

oh my.....what is Bill gonna do? doesn't David know he's dangerous? haha, loving this, btw.

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/20/10 08:35 pm Title: On the eighth day of Christmas...

Aw aw awwww forgiveness is always a wonderful thing ^_^ I'm so glad Bill and Tom are working things out, in time for Christmas! This chapter made me feel as warm as Bill probably did in all those Tom clothes and under all those blankets... and in Tom's arms :D

Reviewer: wild483 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/20/10 06:07 pm Title: On the eighth day of Christmas...

I could never explain my adoration for this story. Epic brilliance...and a good mix of cynicism and sweetness ;)!

Reviewer: JeNeRegretteRien483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/20/10 03:19 pm Title: On the eighth day of Christmas...

Ooooooh! Someones gonna geeeet iiiiiit.

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/20/10 01:29 pm Title: On the eighth day of Christmas...

*heart*

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/20/10 09:41 am Title: On the eighth day of Christmas...

Hee, seems David should be afraid, very afraid for whatever Bill might be planning to get even with him. ;) I'm glad they made up, somewhat, at least Tom is getting another chance to prove himself and hopefully he won't mess up again. Loving this!

Reviewer: Ghostie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/20/10 09:12 am Title: On the eighth day of Christmas...

I think I've run out of compliments for this story, it's just that good. In fact, I've decided to add it to my favorites, and if you've ever haunted my profile you might have noticed that I don't have a lot of favorites. It's not because I'm lazy, just extreeeemely picky. But this story is joining the ranks. So.

*rolls out the compliments nonetheless*

I loved this chapter. I love Bill's character and that I feel so empathetic toward him. It's not every day that I can relate to characters so easily, yet I find myself sympathizing with all of Bill's pain and anger. I can't even really describe it; you just write him so flawlessly. Tom rescuing Bill in the snow was just exactly want I wanted, and I'm glad they made up. Bill's irritation with Tom was understandable, as was his forgiveness for him. He didn't seem disproportionately angry or forgiving. He was just hurt, and you portrayed that beautifully throughout the last two chapters. Bill clearly has a lot of frustration built up in him and has been hurt by a lot of people, but Tom has been able to crack open his shell a little and worm his way inside, to the point that Bill has become reliant on him, in a symbiotic type of way. They fit together so well and I just love reading about them. I'll be crossing my fingers that this story never ends.

Reviewer: PoorMedea Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/20/10 08:03 am Title: On the fourth day of Christmas...

Haha, I saw this article and instantly thought of this chapter:
http://www.cracked.com/article_18601_4-bad-lessons-rudolph-red-nosed-reindeer-teaches-kids.html

I guess I have your story on the brain!

Reviewer: PoorMedea Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/20/10 07:24 am Title: On the eighth day of Christmas...

Bill has a very good point: if David wanted to involve his star host in a publicity stunt, he should have told him straight off.

I'm so glad that Bill and Tom made up, and in such a sweet and snuggly way. This story is just so charming, I look forward to every new chapter!

Reviewer: LuneBleue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/20/10 05:56 am Title: On the eighth day of Christmas...

I'm so glad Bill gave him a second chance! I can't wait for the next chapter =)

Reviewer: Anastasia0love Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/20/10 05:25 am Title: On the eighth day of Christmas...

I love this tory. it's amazing. :) Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: Merenwen Telrunya Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/20/10 05:19 am Title: On the eighth day of Christmas...

Ohhhh David, you better start running >:D

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/20/10 04:43 am Title: On the eighth day of Christmas...

yay! back together, and a very cute meet up, even if bill was miserable and wet. thanks so much for the update!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/20/10 04:43 am Title: On the eighth day of Christmas...

aaaaaaaaah nice. im glad they made up. god that snow bank...i could FEEL the ice, you described the situation so well~i'd like to see how they progress, now that theyve overcome an obstacle together :)

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/20/10 03:39 am Title: On the seventh day of Christmas...

oh no...i worried what would happen if this happened, since it seemed inevitable....gosh. sucks......gotta read more and hope it gets better

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/20/10 03:18 am Title: On the eighth day of Christmas...

Ahhh, so much better. Poor Bill, though. Getting stuck like that when he's already hurting. Thank goodness Tom saw him. :)

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