Date: 12/23/10 10:37 pm Title: just give me sex whenever I want it...
Well, this was just magnificent. I uh...should get up now before reading the second chapter and get something cold to drink, or splash over my face, or pour over my head, lol. Excellent writing, and very hot sex. Love it!
Author's Response: Very glad you enjoyed it so much! Thank you for your review. :D
Date: 12/23/10 12:26 am Title: ...'cause all I ask for is instant pleasure
I’m not even going to try to leave a coherent review, I just can’t. That was HOT. Very very hot. Oh and the ending was really sweet =)
Author's Response: :D Awesome, I'm honored you think so. Thanks so much for your review!
Date: 12/22/10 07:45 pm Title: ...'cause all I ask for is instant pleasure
Oh my god that was amazing. Ok, so I will never look at my housemate's toothbrushes the same way again, but still. Just plain amazing.
As for other objects... is it wrong to want to see Bill getting himself off with one of Gustav's drumsticks? Maybe even a pair of them?
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Sorry to, er, ruin them for you. ;)
Hmm, there's a thought...and Tom could certainly get jealous over that!
Date: 12/22/10 07:04 pm Title: ...'cause all I ask for is instant pleasure
Oooh in the words of Anette who sent me over here tonight (I forgot to track the story .-.) THIS WAS NOSEBLEED-WORHY o___O Jesus man, so beyond sexy it was in a class of it's own! alkfdhnkaljhfdklasf
I don't think I can fully function right now, my brain has been scrambled, or fried even, I don't know, I just need a moment I think xD You write superbly! It's quite amazing how much incredible work you produce, and this certainly was no exception. Man I adore your writing. Thanks for this update, it was amazing :D Merry Christmas!
Author's Response: Ooh, awesome, glad you found this. ;) Thank you! *_* I don't know if I agree, but thank you!
Lol, awesome. I am very pleased you think so highly of this little story. Merry Christmas to you!
Date: 12/22/10 03:49 pm Title: ...'cause all I ask for is instant pleasure
O.O bill with a toothbrush.... .... ... that was....... sexy. *flushes* And Tom came home and caught him..... oh dammit. Well, nah, this story was just... sexy! that's the right word for it. Just purely sexy
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it despite the embarrassment? ;) Thank you so much.
Date: 12/22/10 03:47 pm Title: ...'cause all I ask for is instant pleasure
wow. that was so hot. i can't possibly think of anything better for bill to fixate on than tom, but a vibrating toothbrush is a great second. ;-)
Author's Response: Ooh, awesome! Thank you so much. ;) Glad you enjoyed Bill's object fixation so much.
Date: 12/22/10 03:35 pm Title: ...'cause all I ask for is instant pleasure
Mmmmm that was so good. I love dominant Tom, it's been a while since I've read him done so well. Absolutely stunning lovely!
Author's Response: I'm very very glad you thought I did dom!Tom well. ♥_♥ Thank you so much.
Date: 12/22/10 02:40 pm Title: ...'cause all I ask for is instant pleasure
The first chapter was various scenes of getting to know us sex, and the second was hot, kinky, slightly mean dominating sex. Loved it all, and thanks for giving it that little bit of plot to make it extra sexy. Another win.
Author's Response: Yes, very much so! Hee, I'm glad you thought there was enough plot to make it extra sexy. Thanks so much for your review!
Date: 12/22/10 07:25 am Title: ...'cause all I ask for is instant pleasure
this was beyond hot, Tay. You're phenomenal.
*hugs*
Maria
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very very glad you thought so. ♥
Date: 12/22/10 04:56 am Title: ...'cause all I ask for is instant pleasure
NNNGGGGGHHHH!!! Oh lord Tom asserting his authority like that was just sooo hot. Holy Hell Tay you reduced me to a puddle. *squishes*
Author's Response: I'm very very happy you found it to be hot. ;) *squishes back*
Date: 12/22/10 03:06 am Title: ...'cause all I ask for is instant pleasure
So yeah, it wasn't awkward at all when my mother presented me with my very own Sonicare Toothbrush set today. I wasn't thinking about this as all.
Author's Response: *coughs* Sorry about that. >_>
Date: 12/22/10 02:26 am Title: just give me sex whenever I want it...
yay! im so happy that im not the only one that thinks of bill with ramdom objects up his ass.
and there are a lot of other thing bill can use. wine bottles, the bedpost, cans, several mascara tubes, food, different types of containers, and that only a few XD
Author's Response: Lol, I don't even know where it came from! And oh yes, there are many things. I'm trying to decide. :) Thank you for your review!
Date: 12/22/10 01:00 am Title: ...'cause all I ask for is instant pleasure
Pft, i swear you write the best sexytimes up on this site. suggestions? Fruits, veggies? ha, whenever i here people shoving odd things up their arse, i think of foods, or a toothbrush
Author's Response: Naaaaaah, but thank you. :) I appreciate the review, and the suggestions! I think it has to be something that isn't Tom's, to make him EVEN MORE jealous. >:D
Date: 12/21/10 11:41 pm Title: ...'cause all I ask for is instant pleasure
I loved this. It was so hot and thrilling and did I mention, hot? :D
is it completed? cause it says it's not completed.
Loved it either way. :)
Author's Response: Awesome, that's fantastic to hear. It is completed, thank you for reminding me! I really appreciate your review. ♥
Date: 12/21/10 10:46 pm Title: ...'cause all I ask for is instant pleasure
Bravo. brilliant.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/21/10 09:57 pm Title: ...'cause all I ask for is instant pleasure
Hahaha, I'm glad Bill finally got what else he wanted. :D Tom totally had it coming to him.
Jane
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, thank you!
Date: 12/21/10 08:37 am Title: just give me sex whenever I want it...
Love this, so hot.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the first part!
Date: 12/19/10 02:55 pm Title: just give me sex whenever I want it...
uuuuuh, I totally wanna read more!! This was so much fun ah
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it so much! Thank you for your review.
Date: 12/17/10 12:25 pm Title: just give me sex whenever I want it...
HOLYHELL how did I miss this?!?! Love how they are going at it like bunnies! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you found it now. ;) Thanks so much for your review!
Date: 12/15/10 10:34 am Title: just give me sex whenever I want it...
mfhsretoyhjfsg.
That's what came out of my mouth when I got to the end. You've left me completely incoherent! (Though that's honestly nothing new)
LOVED this! Can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: Oooh, awesome! Hope you enjoyed the rest!