Date: 12/16/10 05:29 pm Title: #4
I love the way you write, so keep the chapters and stoires coming. Ok? :D
Author's Response: Thank you! :D and I will do >.<
Date: 12/16/10 03:59 pm Title: #4
I can't seem to get through any of these chapters without smiling like an idiot & LOLing xD I love it! Another fantastic chapter. Can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response: Awh, thank you! :D I'm glad that you like it >.<
Date: 12/13/10 09:57 pm Title: #3
Seriously, this is hysterical! I was having the shittiest day POSSIBLE & then I read this, and well, it made my day SO MUCH BETTER! This is amazing! I'm going to track this!
*is tracking*
Author's Response: Awhh, well I'm glad that I managed to cheer you up! Thank you :D and woo, tracking -hands out cookies-
Date: 12/13/10 05:49 pm Title: #2
I'd love to see this.
Unplug everything in the room except for one toaster. Pray to the toaster. Bring it gifts. Throw some of your roommate's possessions out the window. Say that the toaster made you do it.
Author's Response: Ooh, I had seen that one and considered doing it. I think I may do more than 7 - there's just so many great ones! Thankyou for your suggestion and if I use it I'll dedicate the chapter to you. :)
Date: 12/13/10 05:42 pm Title: #3
OH MY GOD. LMFAO.
Author's Response: Ahahaa, thankyou ;)
Date: 12/13/10 05:25 pm Title: #3
Oh my god. I kept having to stop reading because I was laughing to hard.
That was GENIOUS.
Author's Response: Really?! Oh woah, thankyou so much! :'D
Date: 12/13/10 05:24 pm Title: #3
Oh dear, this is just so nice! Though, it's a pity the parts are kinda short, and you don't inform around the jokes, the jokes are golden. Bill is so naïve xD
Author's Response: Thankyou! :) Hmm, yeah I agree that the chapters are quite short, but I'm not used to writing humour so I don't want to stretch it out too far - I'm usually more of a everyone-is-depressed-and-angsty writer :P I'm not sure what you mean by 'inform around the jokes'? Haha, Bill is very naive, bless him. :') Thank you for your review :)
Date: 12/13/10 05:16 pm Title: #3
Oh god, that's such a great prank!! *is getting ideas*
Really though, each chapter is funnier than the last and I had such a great time imagining poor Bill's face! xD
Author's Response: Hahah, I'm glad to see I'm corrupting my lovely readers ;)rnrnAwh thankyou, and I know...part of me feels kinda sorry for Bill. But the other part of me is doing the silent victory dance with Tom. xD
Date: 12/13/10 05:13 pm Title: #3
Like Tom......Genius! Bwahahahahaha! Can't wait to read more =)
Author's Response: Ahaha thankyou! :D I'll update as soon as I can >.<
Date: 12/13/10 05:13 pm Title: #3
bahahaha love this story. keep going!
Author's Response: Thankyou! And I plan too xDD
Date: 12/13/10 04:52 pm Title: #2
This is so awesome xD Bill is such a good sport lmao.
Author's Response: Poor Bill, it can't be easy living with Tom ;P and thankyou! :D
Date: 12/13/10 04:44 pm Title: #1
Omfg! That was some funny shit! This is great already. Now i'm off to the next chapter =)
Author's Response: Haha thankyou! I'm glad that you liked it :))
Date: 12/12/10 09:24 pm Title: #2
oh my goodness, this is really funny!!!!! can't wait for the next chapter!!!! ^__^
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it >.<
Date: 12/12/10 08:30 am Title: #2
The line about Bill's train of thought derailing and bursting into flames was so clever and had me in stitches! This whole plot is just hilarious and I'm so enjoying it!
Author's Response: Haha, I was quite proud of myself for that one. >.< Thank you for your review and I'm glad you're enjoying it! :D
Date: 12/11/10 09:06 pm Title: #1
ooooooo this is gonna be fun.
Author's Response: Haha I think so too! Thankyou for your review :)
Date: 12/11/10 08:09 pm Title: #1
I love lists like this. I read one about the roomate annoyance...there was something in it about a cactus, i think? I look forward to more.
Author's Response: Me too! :) Hmm, there wasn't one about a cactus on this one, but I'm sure there's more than one list. :) Thank you for your review!
Date: 12/11/10 06:43 pm Title: #1
LOVE this idea! The characters are great and Bill and Tom seem to play nicely off of each other. Plus this seems like it's going to be hilarious, if the first chapter is anything to go by xD Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Awh thank you, I'm glad you liked it and that I didn't completely fail at being funny. Thanks for your review! :))
Date: 12/11/10 04:00 pm Title: #1
love it!!
Author's Response: thank you! :))
Date: 12/11/10 02:52 pm Title: #1
xD that was hilarious! I started cracking up when I read this part:
Bill shot up into a sitting position and cursed loudly. “What the fuck was that?!” He demanded, looking between Tom and the broken window, his face the picture of confusion.
“What was what?” Tom asked innocently, keeping his face as straight as he could, something which wasn’t easy when Bill looked like a lost child.
“The window!” He exclaimed as if it was the most obvious thing in the world, which in reality, it was. “What the hell happened to the window?!”
“Ohhh,” the dreadlocked boy sighed. “Well, I was too hot, so I threw a paper weight through it to let some air in.”
Bill’s dark eyebrows knitted together as he processed what his roommate had just said. He remained silent like that for a moment, staring at Tom as though he’d sprouted a second head, before speaking again. “You...threw a paper weight? Through our window?” He spoke slowly, as if he was a parent explaining something to a child one too many times. “What is wrong with you?! Why couldn’t you just open it?! It’s like, what, five meters from your chair! I would have bloody opened it for you, if you’d asked me nicely!”
Ahh, xD
Author's Response: Ahhh thank you! It means so much that you actually thought it was funny - I don't usually write anything remotely humorous. :P Thank you for your review! :DD