Date: 06/18/11 07:13 pm Title: “…I would give up anything for you…”
Hmm, it's a cute concept, but I just can't get into it.
Perhaps you should have made the characters younger...or tried to get them to act their age. I don't know, they just seem like they're acting younger than their supposed ages.
I'm shy, so I know how awkward things can be, but the way they handled the awkwardness seemed very young.
Sorry for being such a downer. I definitely see potential with your writing, but I can't get past the age thing.
Keep writing, okay?
Date: 06/18/11 04:52 pm Title: This is WWII and He Is Pearl Harbor
HAHAAA LOL I love your GIF's XD
Uh ohhhh looks like Tomi's about to get pissed
Date: 06/18/11 11:29 am Title: Your Ex Is Prettier Than Me
Cute
Date: 06/18/11 02:56 am Title: Your Ex Is Prettier Than Me
I would ask andrej if he was single and then we would run off to Vegas and get married. Screw all else. I can't wait to see what Tom and andrej do, it shall be epic.
Date: 06/18/11 01:24 am Title: Your Ex Is Prettier Than Me
Great chapter and I loved your fangirlish moment at the end. I've never heard of Andrej, but he's definitely interesting, I'll give him that. Thanks for introducing him to me!
Date: 06/17/11 06:57 pm Title: Your Ex Is Prettier Than Me
O_O..Andrej Pejic ! i knew it!!..fucking hot he i.cant wait to see is :D
Date: 06/17/11 06:29 pm Title: Your Ex Is Prettier Than Me
I think if my boyfriend had dated him I would cry, so much. I'd be all "HOW CAN I COMPETE WITH THAT?!" and then I'd have a total fangirl moment xD
Date: 06/17/11 05:35 pm Title: Your Ex Is Prettier Than Me
oh god, i can't even, what is air?! *slumps over computer laughing*.... your end notes, I just cant even XD
Okay but seriously *hugs Tom* If Andrej was my competition I would feel like a dog T^T can't wait to see what the next chapter holds!!!!
Date: 06/17/11 02:49 pm Title: The Scarlets
I loooove it! ^^ But for some reason I hate Andrej. I don't know why. Maybe because it's Bill's ex? But if Bill cheats on Tom with Andrej, I'll have to kill 2 people. xD Anyway. I'm more than sure, there'll be a time when Bill and Tom will be both so horny that will have sex BEFORE honeymoon. xD Am I right? And...When is their baby coming? ^^
Date: 06/17/11 12:13 pm Title: Your Ex Is Prettier Than Me
I'd have the exact same reaction ^_^
Date: 06/17/11 11:10 am Title: Your Ex Is Prettier Than Me
love the graphics
Date: 06/17/11 09:21 am Title: Your Ex Is Prettier Than Me
Oh good golly lordy! please tell me you have a tumblr or something i can stalk you on XD
if my bf's ex was Andrej i'd have the fan-girl moment of the century! then try to pet him, then make him let me pjotograph him...then pet him some maor..coz he's sooo purrdy o.0
Author's Response:
i have one, but it's all music based. indie bands, new music, pop music. stuff like that.
Date: 06/17/11 08:39 am Title: Your Ex Is Prettier Than Me
You know, one of the things I always loved about Bill, is also one of the things I hate about Andrej. Andrej just take being prettier than me to a whole other level than Bill does. I don't like it. But yes, I would still probably have a crazy fan girl moment. He is so fiine.
Great chapter. I love the peeking of bridezillacoming through. Honestly? Creme? Can't wait to see more.
Date: 06/17/11 03:54 am Title: Your Ex Is Prettier Than Me
OH SHIT!
Date: 06/17/11 12:35 am Title: Your Ex Is Prettier Than Me
Omg Andrej! :) great chapter, i especially love how Bill explained why he was marrying Tom :3
Date: 06/14/11 02:55 am Title: New Beginnings
Wow, nice baby shower. Helps when your friends are all super rich apparently. =)
Glad to see things going well for people and to see more of Bill and Tom.
Date: 06/13/11 06:26 pm Title: New Beginnings
awww, Tom on a sex strike, lol. I'm not sure Bill can last until their honeymoon, I mean he's already humping Tom in his sleep, hahaha.
Date: 06/13/11 05:57 pm Title: New Beginnings
Awhh :) the blanket thing was the cutest! I'm really glad that the rapist got what he deserved! xD
Date: 06/13/11 03:31 pm Title: First comes love, Then comes....
...I honestly didn't see that coming. I love biker Bill :D
Date: 06/13/11 10:12 am Title: New Beginnings
I really like this story ^^
When comes the next chapter? :)
Author's Response: I'm not sure. I'll be out I'd school soon but u also have work so I'll write when I have time.