Date: 06/25/11 09:42 pm Title: Let Them Eat.....Cake?
Hey Love the new chapter. Cannot wait for the next two chapters.
Date: 06/25/11 05:55 pm Title: Let Them Eat.....Cake?
I have so enjoyed this story!
Date: 06/25/11 04:19 pm Title: The Scarlets
Wow. This was...Really short. oO
But two more chapters? C'mooooooon, don't be like thaaat. :( You know how much I love this story. xD
Author's Response:
i know it would have been really off topic in the next chapter and it was too late add it to last chapter :/ sorry.
Date: 06/25/11 03:33 pm Title: Let Them Eat.....Cake?
wheee update bombards! :3 omg two more chapters O: Ima favourite you as an author then, I'm intrigues to see this new story :D Tom/Bill pairing again? :3 if so YAY BRING IT ON GIRL! :3 more fiction -giggles-
Amazing chapter as usual, and Tom needs to stop hesitating!
Random Note; In this I kind of imagine Tom to be a 17 year old Bill with blonde hair and Bill as he is now xD
Date: 06/25/11 11:31 am Title: Withhold Those Truthes
yay!! *claps* gifs!!!!fun fun.
DAmn Adnrej, that pretty pretty BASTARD. Ye, I am so serious about that that it needed capitalized and italisized. mhm *nodnod*
Very good chapter. I do think Tom needs to buck up and tell Bill though. I think I liked Casey, as little as we saw of her.
I haven't read the one-shot yet, I mmight go check those out in a bit.
Keep up the lovely work. I look forward to the next update!
Date: 06/25/11 11:25 am Title: Withhold Those Truthes
i hate bill and aww tomichuuu poor tomichuuu
Date: 06/25/11 11:05 am Title: The Scarlets
Look, I'm gonna be honest with you. I think that review just didn't bother explaining what she. It's not that you're a bad writer, because I can tell that this story has lots of good ideas. The problem is that you write very fast, as in, things happen way too quick. You should put more description in and try to make things more similar to how they go in real life. For example, the way when Bill calls Tom a slut or something, he gets angry way too quick, Tom gets overdramatic, but then 2 minutes later, they make up. You should put more about what Tom is feeling, what Bill is feeling, their thoughts and such. Don't take it bad, I do like your story and I'm anxious to find out what will happen next. I think you said that there isn't much left of the story, so you can leave it as it is, but with the next one, try to take things a bit slower. It will get you more attention from readers and it will show that you put a lot of concentration in your characters, making them more human-like, rather than cartoon-style.
Date: 06/25/11 05:32 am Title: Withhold Those Truthes
I WANT MORE:)
Date: 06/25/11 04:37 am Title: Withhold Those Truthes
your gif's never fail to crack me up, even after that serious a chapter XDDDD
amazing chapter!
Date: 06/21/11 06:16 pm Title: I Guess It Wasn't What You Thought
Oh sweetie, I'm sorry about that reviewer. They're obviously just bullshitting because you're most definitely not a shitty writer. Nowhere near! Some people are just idiots. Jut ignore them and trust that enough people like this story to prove them very much wrong. :)
Oh my gosh, Andrej though! That saucy minx, get your incredibly sexy hands off Tom, right now! xD
Date: 06/20/11 05:00 pm Title: I Guess It Wasn't What You Thought
I love this story so much! I know I haven't reviewed it before but I wanted to say that you're a great writer!! x
Date: 06/20/11 02:41 pm Title: I Guess It Wasn't What You Thought
~speechless~
Date: 06/20/11 02:34 pm Title: When The Fire Is Set.
The ending reminded me of finding nemo,
where dory is asked if marlon's bothering her
Date: 06/20/11 01:49 pm Title: The Scarlets
Hey, this is the best story you´ve ever written. At first I didn´t want to read it because it apeared a little bit strange, but you proofed me wrong.
Author's Response:
thanks you guys
Date: 06/20/11 12:15 pm Title: I Guess It Wasn't What You Thought
Can I just say, I read the whole fic, because it was cute, and I already apologised for being mean.
Author's Response:
i posted that right after your review when i was mad at the time. now i don't really care. i didn't put anything with your name, i just wanted to express my shitty mood.
Date: 06/20/11 11:50 am Title: I Guess It Wasn't What You Thought
You're an amazing writer. I've been with this story from the beginning and I'm still absolutely in love with it. Never give up on your writing. :)
Date: 06/20/11 08:36 am Title: I Guess It Wasn't What You Thought
hayy i loved the story, i havent been on this site in a long time due to some shitty reviews i was getting which hurt =] dont listen to them anyways. i really enjoyed this story got a little confused half way with the andygeo stuffXD but re reading it i was fine (probably beucase i read all chapters att 2 int he morning ::P ) cant wait for more though :D x
Date: 06/20/11 05:11 am Title: I Guess It Wasn't What You Thought
lol how often are you updating now? i wonder if Tom is going to tell Bill about the kiss?
Date: 06/20/11 02:24 am Title: The Scarlets
You are not shitty at all!! Told ya. Haterz gonna hate ;) Ignore them. They're jut attention whores. But...coming back to the subject. Well yeah. Something soo unexpected. :| This chapter has been a little bit weird. xD
Date: 06/20/11 12:53 am Title: I Guess It Wasn't What You Thought
What?????