Date: 12/28/10 02:50 am Title: Subtle Things
much better with a beta. =) great chapter.
Author's Response:
thanks
Date: 12/27/10 10:14 pm Title: Subtle Things
I'm fine with ur writing, I think it's adorable =) Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
thanks :D
Date: 12/27/10 09:23 pm Title: Subtle Things
I love how you add the links at the end! Awesome chapter keep em coming :)
Author's Response:
lol yea i hate imagining things so i link alot so you know how something actually looks.
Date: 12/27/10 06:46 pm Title: The Scarlets
In all honesty, I much preferred the way this story was written in the beginning and I agree that it has become more 'Juvenille'. It's a great story and I love it, but the way in which has been written in the last few chapters does distract from the story a bit and does put me off a little because I don't want to read something that seems like a young girl wrote it, if that makes sense?
I also agree that you should find a beta - I don't mind waiting a few days for a chapter that is well edited. It makes the story much more enjoyable when it has correct grammer and punctuation.
As I said, I do love the story and I think you are doing a great job. But I just think it was ALOT better the way it was written before.
Author's Response:
okay thanx
Date: 12/27/10 03:47 am Title: Let's Play Dressup
I love their idea of a girls night. super cute.
I never mind waiting a day or two for updates when they are well edited. keep up the search for a beta, it will really help your writing if you can get one.
Author's Response:
i did
Date: 12/27/10 12:15 am Title: The Scarlets
I really like the premise of this story...and the first few chapters were really, really good. But the last 2-3 chapters almost seem to be written by a different person than the previous ones...they are a bit more juvenile, I guess that's the best word I can use to describe them. The characters seem to have taken on more of a "7th grade girl" personality instead of the adults they were in the beginning. So yeah, get that back! Great story idea. :)
Author's Response:
okay
Date: 12/26/10 05:58 pm Title: Let's Play Dressup
hmm.... interesting.... xD
Author's Response: Thanx :)
Date: 12/26/10 05:13 pm Title: Let's Play Dressup
Jeffree Star is amazing !! :3
I can't wait till the next chapter. This story just keeps getting better and better.
Author's Response: Me too :3
Date: 12/26/10 03:16 pm Title: Let's Play Dressup
Great chapter! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 12/26/10 03:09 pm Title: Let's Play Dressup
i'm waiting for the time Tom gets to know who is Bill
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 12/26/10 04:31 am Title: Nurse!Tomi
I really like this story, but it needs a beta really badly. There are a lot of typos and grammar issues and they really detract from the story. I think the story is well written and its a shame to let poor editing take a way from that. keep up the good work, i look forward to more.
Author's Response: i try but whenever i get a beta it's some issue with them actually sending my stuff back. i've had two beta's that have taken my stories and haven't given them back.
Date: 12/26/10 03:14 am Title: Nurse!Tomi
I love this story. Tom is so cute. I can't wait till the next chapter.
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 12/26/10 02:48 am Title: Nurse!Tomi
Aww poor Tom, feeling so insecure about himself. I like that Bill is so sweet with him but I am worried that he's keeping his identity a secret.
Author's Response: this isn't completed yet so i have know clue yet if i will or won't let him reveal his secret.
Date: 12/25/10 06:50 pm Title: The Silence Is The Worst
Aww Tom, it's not like that! Bill's just busy. Lmao, Tom & his friends remind me of chicks when they converse xD Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: ur gonna enjoy a future chapter
Date: 12/25/10 06:21 pm Title: The Silence Is The Worst
ohmy D:
Author's Response: :)
Date: 12/25/10 02:35 am Title: Your Family Is Rich, My Family Is Gay
Yay! They confessed their love =) I hope Bill gets to meet Tom's dads soon, i'd like to read about that. I'm glad that Tom enjoyed his first bit of oral sex xD Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: thank you. Your reviews mean alot to me. Merry christmas.
Date: 12/24/10 06:17 pm Title: Your Family Is Rich, My Family Is Gay
love it lol
Author's Response: thanx
Date: 12/23/10 07:31 pm Title: Fairy Gay Mothers
Your friend really has a nice body from behind so curvy. Such curves were not meant for guys XD And in those jeans he even puts me to shame XD Damn!!!
I love how innocent Tom is :)
Author's Response: alex puts everyone to shame
Date: 12/23/10 06:16 pm Title: Fairy Gay Mothers
Awwwww! They are so smitten with each other xD I love it! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 12/22/10 08:33 pm Title: “…I would give up anything for you…”
Gah! This is just so damn cute xD Fantastic chapter. I can hardly wait for more!
Author's Response: thanks