Date: 02/08/11 02:02 pm Title: Bad Dye Jobs
you're totally screwing with my mind and this who Tom looks like Bill, Bill looks like Tom thing...you wrote a story where Tom is submissive, and looks like Bill. I like that Bill is the stronger character, but then you make tom look like bill and for some reason that's really throwing me off, because even though they're twins, they dont really look alike, but then it's not really tom looking like bill, it's tom with Bill's style, and then bill is supposedly looking like bill also, but still looking a little more like tom, but not really tom, just current bill in tom's body?
I'm having a hard time wrapping my head around the image of your charactes.
putting that aside though, i am really lvoing this story so far, i think you've built up their personallities really well, and the mix of cuteness and drama is really well balances. i can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
Bill: normal bill apperance just with a muscule build like the one real life tom has.
rnTom: i picture with bill's thin, long body with a 15-18 year old bill's outfit choice and black hair that just hangs.
rni know it's hard to picture but please us ur :
rn
thanks for reading :)
Date: 02/06/11 07:28 am Title: Did you really just say that?
Haha, I love the last line
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 02/05/11 11:28 am Title: Did you really just say that?
Nice story.
Author's Response:
thanks
Date: 02/05/11 03:46 am Title: Did you really just say that?
Really Daniel...Fags?! Oh my, can't wait fo the next update to see the reaction that has to cause!
Author's Response:
:O me too....
Date: 02/04/11 11:25 pm Title: Did you really just say that?
KEEP GOING!!!!! :D
Author's Response:
I WILL!!!!!! :D
Date: 02/04/11 11:17 pm Title: Did you really just say that?
*sucks in an icy breath* Oh no he didn't!!! No more nice nice!! You must update with your awesomeness soon xD
Author's Response:
oh yes. he. did.
Date: 02/04/11 08:12 pm Title: Did you really just say that?
I really like this story, the only thing bugging me is the big gaps between lines.
Author's Response:
i'm sorry. for some reason it just come out liek that.
Date: 02/04/11 07:42 pm Title: Fairy Gay Mothers
Love love love the piercings!!!!
Author's Response:
me too :)
Date: 02/04/11 06:30 pm Title: Did you really just say that?
what a horrible way to ask, not that its anyone's business anyway. thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
very bad way to ask.
Date: 02/04/11 06:13 pm Title: Did you really just say that?
awesome chapter, i really like this story!!! (:
Author's Response:
thank you :P
Date: 02/04/11 05:00 pm Title: Did you really just say that?
LOL I loved it (:
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 02/04/11 02:36 pm Title: Did you really just say that?
well true or not that was a freakishly rude comment to make as a guest in someones home. I think someone needs smacked up backside of the head by thier father in the next chapter. Like Thumper's mummy said "if you can't say anything nice don't say anything at all"
They knew gay peeps were going to be there, if the boys wouldn't be able to behave themselves they should have been left at the hotel. They knew going in the hosts were a gay couple, it stands to reason that they would have gay friends at their christmas party.
Sorry about that little ranty thing, being rude to your host is a bit of a pet peeve of mine, as is parents not raising their kids to know when to shut their mouths. And him saying that hits them both.
Wonderful chapter. I am greatly looking forward to how everyone reacts to the comment.
I love picturing Bill having a teac party with a litle girl. It just makes me smile whenever I read it. And even though he didn't get to wear a tiara and pink feather boa, he did get the tiny tea cups with the tiny chair...and it just brings a smile to my face. I can't stop it.
I think its adorable that Liza has a crush on Andreas. I remember when I was young and had a crush on a ridiculously older man...I was in seventh grade then though...but still Nick was like 24, my brothers friend, and married...So I know how she feels to an extent. Poor little thing.
I can't wait to see where you take this next! Keep up the fabulous work!
Author's Response:
beautiful review. thanks and yes they do need to be smacked.
Date: 02/04/11 01:03 pm Title: Did you really just say that?
oh shit
Author's Response:
:0
Date: 02/04/11 12:51 pm Title: Did you really just say that?
*drops jaw* oh hell no he just didn't? *rolls up sleeves* okay that boy needs a whooping and a smack upside the head. i mean SERIOUSLY???? What the hell is that kids problem *grinds teeth* i cant wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
me too XD
Date: 02/04/11 11:59 am Title: ...Mom?
kinda funny how Tom's moms picture's from the NOH8 campaign...
Author's Response:
lol yes it is. her name is Debi Mazar if u want to look her up.
Date: 02/03/11 01:26 am Title: ...Mom?
You stopped there? So unfair! Great chapter though.
Author's Response:
sorry :P
Date: 02/02/11 12:39 am Title: ...Mom?
Got a feeling things are about to get real interesting!
Author's Response:
it will :)
Date: 02/01/11 11:43 pm Title: ...Mom?
NO!!! It can't end THERE!!!! ARGGGGG! *frantically clicks the spot where the next button should be*
Author's Response:
it's coming.
Date: 02/01/11 11:24 pm Title: ...Mom?
aww sweetie *hugs* I love that you loved my review!
I really appreciate the pics you put up at the end of the chapters. I suck at mentally picturing people no matter how well they are described unless I have a visual point of reference.
I sure hope she doesn't cause too many problems for the holidays or after. She really doesn't have much room to say anything IMO considering everything.
Keep up the great work dear. I look forward to the next update!
Author's Response:
me too so that's why i put up visuals alot
Date: 02/01/11 10:24 pm Title: Let's Play Dressup
If you don't have a beta already. I would love to do it for you.
Author's Response:
i have one